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FF : Post wedding part 19 updtd pg 94 last part (Page 40)

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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
hey spee..... thanks for u comments...
and deeps hope u read it soon....

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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 12:07pm | IP Logged
hey bharkha r u going to update today???

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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
thank u all for all ur lovely comments....thanks for clicking the like button..
sorry for making u guys wait so long.......
 
hey guys.. annie n arjun s sr has happened.... arjun seekin revenge on annie as she s maan s sister....
 
 
Part 9:

 

Next day morning'. All ready'

 

Dadima and annie waiting for maan n geet.

 

Dadima: annie betey aapko toh bhukhaar hai' aap aisi halaath mein amritsar (dargah) kaise jaayenge'

Annie: woh main theek hooon dadi

Dadima: aap theek nahi hai annie betey'.

 

Maan n geet arrive.

Dadima: maan betey annie ki tabiyeth theek nahi hai'

Maan: kya hua annie ko'.annie'

Dadima: fikar ki koi  baath nahi hai.. inhe bukhaar hai'

Maan: toh dadi hum sab delhi ke liye nikaalthey hai.. dargah phir kabhi challenge'

Geet: haan dadima' maan sahi keh rahe hai'

Dadima: nahi betey iski koi jarrorrath nahi hai.. aap aur geet dargah ke liye nikaliye.. aap logo ke liye hi manaath rakhi thee humne.. aur rahi baath annie ki toh hum uske saath hai' aap humari fikar math kariye'

Maan: jaisa aap theek samjhey dadima'

 

Office staffs leave to delhi along with dadima and annie

Maan n geet leave to dargah'''

 

Geet wearing chuddidhar and maan wearing shirt n jean

 

Geet ' ye jeep toh kitni khaatara hai' koi music system bhi nahi hai'

 

Maan stops the jeep''.

 

Maan ' kya kaha tumne'. Jeep khaatara hai..

Geet ' aur nahi toh' kyun aapko dikhaayee nahi de raha hai.. ae lo' inhe ab dikhta bhi nahi hai'

Maan ' geet tumhi toh chahthi thee ki hum jeep mein aaye aur ab tumhe jeep se problem ho rahi hai''.

Geet ' woh toh sirf ghar se camping aur camping se ghar tak theeek hai'.

Maan ' sach mein' tum ladkiyoin ko samajhna muskil hai''.

Geet ' toh aap is muskil ko kyu hamesha saath rakhtey hai'.(staring at maan with luv)

Maan ' kyunki'

 

He starts driving and geet comes to her senses''

 

Geet ' aapne jaawab nahi diiya

Maan ' aur main doonga bhi nahi'. Pata hai kyu' kyunki jawab kudh mere saath beitii hai'.

 

Geet smiling now''.

 

Geet ' aapne dekha.. adi sir aur pinky ek doosre ko pasand karte hain'.

Maan -  maine adi ko dekha' woh pinky ko pasand karta hai'. Par pinky'.

Geet ' ussey'' dheere dheere ehsaas ho raha hai'

Maan ' aacha hai'''.kab ye ehsaas pyaar mein badal jaayega.. usse paatha bhi nahi chalega''..

 

They both stop in a restaurant for breakfast'.

 

After their breakfast'..

 

Maan paying the bill and geet waiting outside and searching for the jeep''

Maan arrives''..

 

Geet ' maan.. humari gaadi kaahaaan hai'.aapne yehi toh park kii thee'

Maan ' haan geet'.yehi toh theeee'.. ab kahaan gayeeee'.

Geet '  zaroor kissi chor ka kam hai'.uski ithni himmath.. ki woh maan singh khuraana ka gaadi chori kare'.. manna padega himmath toh hai usmein''..

Maan ' geet'. chor ko nahi maloom hai ki woh maan singh khuraana ki gaadi hai,,,, varna uski himmath nahi hothiiiiii'''

Geet ' rassi jal gaayee par bal nahi gaaya''.

 

A man arrives and handovers the new car key to maan and tells him that they have made arrangements for sending the jeep to delhi.

 

Maan  unlocks the new car and opens

Maan ' geet chaley'..

 

Geet surprised''' opens her jaw in astonishment'

 

She is happy to see that maan bought new car for her and he sent the jeep to delhi'.

 

Geet ' thanks maan''. Par ye sab karne ki kya jarrorrath thee.. main toh aia via kuch bhi bolthi rehti hoon'.

Maan -  meri mishti kuch chahey aur woh na ho'. Aisa kabhi ho sakta hai kya...toh ab bathaao music system kaisa hai'.

 

Geet and maan laughing aloud'

 

Annie crying day n nite as she came to know tat arjun is already engaged'.and she trying to find out about the girl sunaina'..annie is heart broken.. dadima worried about annie..arjun feels happy tat he is seeking revenge against msk'

He wants annie to suffer just like a slow poison''

 

Dadima n annie decide to go to dargah at delhi itself'. Annie praying for arjun'. She wants the mystery and the questions running in her mind to be solved.. dadima praying for maan n geets married life''also praying for annie and and'..

 

Office:

Pinky in reception..

 

Adi ' pinky aaj tum late ho gayee

Pinky ' woh adi sir' maan sir nahi hai na isliye kuch toh fayda ho

Adi ' aisa nahi chalega pinky'(turns towards tasha and waves his hand)

Pinky ' (telling in her mind) mujhe toh laaga ki adi sir mujhse pyaar karte hai'geet toh sahi keh rahi thee adi sir aur tasha''..ab mein kya karuuu

Adi ' pinky tumne kuch kaha'

Pinky- nahi toh.. aapne kuch suna'

Adi- woh a hhh aaahh ' nahi

 

Adi leaves and pinky worried'.she decides when geet is back she ll tell her'.

 

Dargah:

Maan n geet reach dargah''.

 

Geet ties the hanky on maan s head and maan covers geet s head with her dupatta'.

 Crowd: wah kithna pyaar hai inmein'..

 Maan n geet smiling at each other''.

 

They pray for each others happiness'

Geet has lal dhaaga in her hand'.she goes to the place where she can tie n maan follows her'

Maan helping geet in tying the dhaga'

They both pray silently..

 

Geet ' paatha hai'. Jab hum pehli baar yahan aaye they jab dadima bimaar thee toh mujhe laaga ki aap meri is lal dhaaga bhandne mein madaaath kar rahe hai'aur aaaj woh sapna sach ho gaya'

Maan ' maine kaha tha na tumse.. tumhare har sapne ko sach karrronga'..

 

Maan notices rajjo(geets sis)''..he is surprised to see her'

Maan ' geet.. tum yehi ruko main Prasad lekar aatha hoon'

Maan leaves and geet waiting for maan'

 

Maan meets rajjo'and comes to know from her that they have shifted to amritsar..rajjo telling her that every Monday she comes to dargah'.maan tells her that geet is here'but rajjo tells him that she is in a hurry and wen geet ll ask about tito what ll I say him.. he is not here.. ' she promises him that she ll definitely come to see geet along with her brother tito'.

 

Maan is happy that he met rajjo but he never says anything to geet (reason: what ll he answer wen geet questions him y did he let rajjo go)

 

Geet while waiting for maan'.. someone comes and pushes her by mistake'

He says sorry' and leaves'''. Geet finds that guy familiar' but doesn't remembers where did she see him''''''''

 

Maan comes'..

Geet -  badi der laagadiii aapne..''. Aap prasadh le aayee..

Maan ' shak kar rahi ho mujh par'.

Geet ' aap der se aaye isliye maine poocha..

Maan -  woh bahoth bheed thee geet.. isliye der ho gayee'.

 

They both leave to delhi''.

 

On the way geet sees mela'.

Geet ' maan gaadi roko'

Maan ' geet ab kya hua

Geet ' mela laaga hai maan.. chalo chalthey hai'

She gets down off the car'''..

Maan ' geet'' mujhe jawaab dene ka mouka toh doh'..

 

Geet is in her own world'''.

 

Maan ' geet

Geet ' jaldi aayee na''

 

She goes near the gola(ice cream) stall'

Maan ' geet tum ye nahi khaaogiii'tumhari sehaath ke liye aaacha nahi hai geet'garmi bhi kaafi hai'..

Geet- maan mujhe khaane dijiye na.. main toh kehthi hooon aap bhi khaaiyee''

Maan ' geet.. tumne suna nahi maine kya kaha'

 

He pulls geet and move to the next stall'he buys her bangles'.

Maan ' geet humne ab chalna chahiyeee'..dadima intezzar kar rahi hogiii'

Geet -  haan annie ki tabiyeth bhi theek nahi hai'ek minute maan (she disappears)..

She telling him to wait in the car.. she ll join.. she goes and  buys bangles for annie also and rudraksh ki mala for dadima'

 

Maan waiting for geet in the car'

 

Geet arrives..luks at gola in the car'

Geet ' maan ye aapne kharida'.

She is so happy she begins to eat'''.

Maan luks at her adoringly'

Maan ' geet tumhe ithni der kahaan lag gaayee

Geet ' aap shak kar rahe hai mujhpe'

Maan ' geet main toh bus yu hi pooch raha tha..

Geet -  woh main annie aur dadima ke liye kuch kharidh rahi thee'

Maan ' aur mere liye'..

Geet- woh mein woh'..

Maan ' tumne kuch nahi kharida hoga'.

Geet- (giving gola to maan) ye hai na''..

 

Maan licking gola on one side and geet licking it on other side''both staring in each others eyes''..

 

i hope u guys like it...... comments and criticism are always welcome



Edited by bharkha - 07 February 2011 at 12:32pm

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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by hinalshah

hey bharkha r u going to update today???
 
haan yar.. me just updated..
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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
loved the update yaar and who was the guy geet saw at the dargah??

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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 12:35pm | IP Logged
so sweeet..

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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
me too want that gola yaar LOL
nice and loving one msk ki to baat hee kya hai.
update soon me waitingSmile

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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
wow awesome my dear
who was that mysteryman
that Geet saw pls pls
cont soonnnnnnnnn
thanks pm

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