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thanks sharaanya, sanjh, farheen and teju.. thank u guys

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Good that maan is not trusting arjun.ClapClapClap
 
So sweet when maan is trying to some shoes on geet's foot but she refuses and he gets upset.  So sweet when geet said that maan does not look good when he is angry. Day Dreaming

 

Maan is totally fida over geet, when he keeps taking her pictures and geet does the same. Day DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming

 

Aww so sweet adi saves pinky when she falls into the water. He loves pinky so much.

 

Loool maan goes and wets his shirt himself.  He is just looking for an opportunity to get close to Geet.  wow she is about to take his shirt off, Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreamingnaahi why did the others have to come now.

 

 

 

 

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Originally posted by divareena

Good that maan is not trusting arjun.ClapClapClap
 
So sweet when maan is trying to some shoes on geet's foot but she refuses and he gets upset.  So sweet when geet said that maan does not look good when he is angry. Day Dreaming

 

Maan is totally fida over geet, when he keeps taking her pictures and geet does the same. Day DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming

 

Aww so sweet adi saves pinky when she falls into the water. He loves pinky so much.

 

Loool maan goes and wets his shirt himself.  He is just looking for an opportunity to get close to Geet.  wow she is about to take his shirt off, Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreamingnaahi why did the others have to come now.

  

 
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thank u all.. thank u once again for ur comments... plz do reply as it helps me to write further... sorry for the delay....
 
part 8: camp site ( conti)
 
All of them reach the camping site after their short tour to waterfall ….its evening time.

Adi drops pinky to her tent.

Adi: pinky agar tumhe kuch chahiye toh mujhe bol dena..

Pinky: theek hai adi sir…

Adi: pinky… mujhe adi bulaao

Pinky: jiii.. aur ab main bilkul theek hoon..aur shyaam ka kya program hai…

Adi:  nahi pinky tum rest lo… tumhe aaram ki jarrorat hai..

Pinky: yahaan pe reh reh ke… mujhe aur kharab laagega… plz mein shyaam ke jasn mein aana chahthi hoon aur waise bhi kal toh humein nikaalna hi hai…

Adi: (couldn't refuse) theek hai pinky.. jaisi tumhari iccha

 

Adi tells the lady doctor to take care of pinky and leaves.

 

Maan still angry with geet…

Maan: aakhir tumne meri baath nahi maani..

Geet: ae lo… aap kahe aur main na maanu.. aisa kabhi hua hai kya..

Maan: haan aisa hi hua hai aaj toh.. kya tumne mera shirt khola… sazza se bhi bachna chahthi ho..

Geet: main toh khol hi rahii thee ki… dadima aa gayee..

Maan: mein tumhari baathoin mein nahi aane waala hoon….

 

Geet coming to close to him….annie enters

Annie:geet…

Geet: haan annie

Annie: chalo na geet dadima bula rahi hai.. aur waise bhi aaj ka poora din toh tum bhai ke saath thee,, kuch waqth humare saath bhi toh bethaao..

 

Annie pulls geet and walks away.. geet looking behind towards maan and maan frustrated.

 

After dinner… everybody sit around the campfire…..

 

Few of them singing songs… and maan n geet staring at each other… as maan is so irritated with geet. He gets up and walks away…geet understands and even she starts walking towards him…

Maan in front and geet behind him..

 

Geet: maan rukiye

But maan not stopping…

Geet: maan meri baath toh suniyee…

Maan stops

Geet: mujhe maaf kar dijiye….

Maan: maafi nahi milegi geet…

 

Maan now starts walking towards the camping fire and geet also goes with him…

Looking at these 2 luv birds annie and pinky begin to sing a song…

 

Annie and pinky:  the song.. piya se milke aaye mein.. hai mein kya kaaru.. aaye na mujhko ab ye chain.. hye mein kya karru…

 

Maan and geet staring at each other..

Dadima: ahem ahem.. humare geet betey ko math chediye…

Annie: dadi… aap zaara geet ko toh dekhiye..

Geet is so lost in maan that she doesn't hears dadima and annie s words..

Maan: geet..

Geet feels shy about her behavior..

Dadima: geet betey.. aaj toh aap inhe jawaab de hi dijiyee….

Geet: dadima main.. woh

Maan: agar maafi chahiye toh tumhe sabke samne mere liye gaanaa gana hoga…aur woh gaana sirf mere liye hoga…. Aur haan tumhe naachna bhi padega… samjhi tum..

He goes and sits….

Dadima: haan betey… hum aapke saath hai..

Geet thinking what to do…. Den realizing that its very important for her to convince maan…

Geet: ek toh maine unka shirt nahi khola aur ab agar mein unke liye gaana bhi nahi gaaye toh… hey babaji…

Pinky: geet tum kya soch rahi ho.. hum tumhare gaane ka intezzar kar rahe hai geet… hain na maan jijaji..

Geet: ye pinky ki bacchi….(she tells in her mind and gives a weird luk to pinky)//

Maan: woh haan.. tumhare gaane ka intezzar hai..(he gives a seductive luk to her)

 

the girls join geet..for dance and geet singing and dancing (sasha, tasha, annie and pinky)Geet sings :

 
guys here is the link of the song.. piya bina jeena by anaida...check out this song for sure guys.... esp the lyrics.. the video starts after few seconds...
the lyrics are
                   piya bina jeena.. na re naarii sakhi naa re..

                   Haal jiya kehna naa re naarii sakhi naa re..

                   meethi chubhan re kulchan see mann mein

                   phholoin see narmi hye re badan mein... 
                   dekho toh doley jiya re..ye kya se kahaan re...
 
                  seene mein dil hai dil hai aur dil mein dhadkan
                  dhadkan mein woh hai woh hai jinki mein hoon jogan ( she looks at maan)
                  piya piya bole hye re jiya dole jiya re.....
                                                                 piya bina jeena na........
 
                 tan se laaga lloo tumko aanchal banake
                 aankhoin mein bhar lu sajna kajal banake (luks at maan and shows her kajal)
                 kai kuchi kole hye re jiya dole jiya re....
                                                                piya bina jeena na....

maan feels so happy tat his mishti sung a song for him….and he was mesmerized by her lovely dance…

  

geet and pinky together…

geet: aa haa aa pinky ki bachiii

pinky: woh geet… gaana toh tune bada kaamal ka gaaya.. dekha nahi maan jijaji ki aankhein toh hat hi nahi rahi thee…

geet: aur adi sir ki bhi toh aankhein hat nahi rahii thee..(she stares at pinky)

pinky: kya geet..adi sir  aur mujhe

geet: maine aisa kab kaaha.. adi sir ki toh aankhein tasha par se hat nahi rahi thee pinky..

 

pinky stunned and confused…and geet leaves..smiling to herself....

 

maan and adi together..(adi thinking of pinky and maan thinking of geet)

adi: aaj toh ladkiyo ne kaamal ka dance kiya

maan: haan gaana toh bahoth hi aacha tha….

Suddenly maan realizes his words and looks at adi… he sees adi staring at pinky…and smiles (geet bilkul sahi keh rahi thee)

  

Annie and the lady doctor….

Annie: arjun kithne acche hai na

Doc: haan yeh baath toh aapne theek kahi.. aur sunaina toh sach mein kismet waali hai

Annie: sunaina

Doc: haan sunaina, arjun ki mangetar.. aapko nahi paata…

 

Annie is so shocked to hear this…. She remembers the time she and arjun had spent together…. How they were in love with each other..she runs towards arjun who was in his tent..

 

Annie: arjun.. ye mein kya sun rahi hoon.. tum aur sunaina..

Arjun: haan annie.. yeh sach hai…

Annie: toh phir jo tumne mere saath kiya

Arjun: woh toh ek dhoka hai annie.. main toh maan ke saath badla lena chahtha hoon.. usne jo meri behan ke saath kiya.. usi ka badla le raha hoon..

 

Maan enters as he sees anvesha entering arjun s tent..

 

Maan: annie…. tum yahan kya rahi ho

Annie: wo bhai….

Arjun: wo annie mujhse milne aayee hai

Maan still concerned and is waiting for annie s reply..

Annie: woh bhai…woh doctor arjun ko bula rahi thee isliye…

 

Dadima calls maan…

Maan: annie toh ab chale..hum..

Annie: aap chaliye.. main aapke peeche peeche aaiyee…

 

Maan leaves..

Arjun: tumhe kya laaga main yahan pe kyu aaya hoon.. tumhe surprise karna..

Haan tumhe surprise hi jo karna tha… kaisa laaga mera surprise…

Annie: mujhe abhi tak yakeen  nahi ho raha hai..ki tumne aisa kar sakte ho..

Arjun: shayad tab yakeen ho jab mein sabko humari sacchai baatha doo…ya tum baathaogii

 

He says these and leaves.. annie still shocked….

She leaves to her tent and pretends to be asleep while she is crying whole night..

 

 Geet and dadima sitting together…

Dadima: maan betey..kal hum sabko toh nikaalna hi hai.. toh hum soch rahe they kii kyun na hum log dargah chale

Maan: par dadima…

Dadima: maan betey humne mannath rakhi thee kii agar aapki aur geet ki shaadi sahi salamath ho jaaye toh dargah jaayenge…

Maan: theek hai dadima.. toh hum charo challenge….(annie dadima maan n geet)

Dadima: theek hai phir.. aap sabko baatha dijiye… hum toh thaak gaaye hai… gud nite..

Geet and maan say gud nite to dadima….

 

Geet:  ye toh koi baath nahi huiii… jinke liye gaana gaaya aur dance kiiya.. unhone kuch bhi nahi bola…..

Maan: hmmmm…. Accha tha…

 

He starts walking towards the tent and geet behind him..

Geet: kya.. sirf aacha tha..

Maan: bahooth accha tha geet…

Geet: sirf bahooth accha tha……

 

They both reach the tent by now…

Geet: jab gaalthiya karo……. toh sazza……… aur jab accha karo…. toh tofa bhi toh dena chahiye…

Maan: aacha.. ab samajh mein aaya….mere paas tumhare liiye tofa… hai geet…

 

He takes geet in his arms…and switches off the light.

Guys rest is your imagination…

 

i hope u guys liked my update.. and also the song... 

 

 

 

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Varsha, as usual loved it yaar. The song, i have not come across before, but could well imagine Geet dancing on it for Maan. Pls continue writing and keeping me posted with your updates. They leave me with nice good feeling, which is always welcome Varsha...
 
 
Originally posted by bharkha

thank u all.. thank u once again for ur comments... plz do reply as it helps me to write further... sorry for the delay....
 
part 8: camp site ( conti)
 
All of them reach the camping site after their short tour to waterfall '.its evening time.

Adi drops pinky to her tent.

Adi: pinky agar tumhe kuch chahiye toh mujhe bol dena..

Pinky: theek hai adi sir'

Adi: pinky' mujhe adi bulaao

Pinky: jiii.. aur ab main bilkul theek hoon..aur shyaam ka kya program hai'

Adi:  nahi pinky tum rest lo' tumhe aaram ki jarrorat hai..

Pinky: yahaan pe reh reh ke' mujhe aur kharab laagega' plz mein shyaam ke jasn mein aana chahthi hoon aur waise bhi kal toh humein nikaalna hi hai'

Adi: (couldn't refuse) theek hai pinky.. jaisi tumhari iccha

 

Adi tells the lady doctor to take care of pinky and leaves.

 

Maan still angry with geet'

Maan: aakhir tumne meri baath nahi maani..

Geet: ae lo' aap kahe aur main na maanu.. aisa kabhi hua hai kya..

Maan: haan aisa hi hua hai aaj toh.. kya tumne mera shirt khola' sazza se bhi bachna chahthi ho..

Geet: main toh khol hi rahii thee ki' dadima aa gayee..

Maan: mein tumhari baathoin mein nahi aane waala hoon'.

 

Geet coming to close to him'.annie enters

Annie:geet'

Geet: haan annie

Annie: chalo na geet dadima bula rahi hai.. aur waise bhi aaj ka poora din toh tum bhai ke saath thee,, kuch waqth humare saath bhi toh bethaao..

 

Annie pulls geet and walks away.. geet looking behind towards maan and maan frustrated.

 

After dinner' everybody sit around the campfire'..

 

Few of them singing songs' and maan n geet staring at each other' as maan is so irritated with geet. He gets up and walks away'geet understands and even she starts walking towards him'

Maan in front and geet behind him..

 

Geet: maan rukiye

But maan not stopping'

Geet: maan meri baath toh suniyee'

Maan stops

Geet: mujhe maaf kar dijiye'.

Maan: maafi nahi milegi geet'

 

Maan now starts walking towards the camping fire and geet also goes with him'

Looking at these 2 luv birds annie and pinky begin to sing a song'

 

Annie and pinky:  the song.. piya se milke aaye mein.. hai mein kya kaaru.. aaye na mujhko ab ye chain.. hye mein kya karru'

 

Maan and geet staring at each other..

Dadima: ahem ahem.. humare geet betey ko math chediye'

Annie: dadi' aap zaara geet ko toh dekhiye..

Geet is so lost in maan that she doesn't hears dadima and annie s words..

Maan: geet..

Geet feels shy about her behavior..

Dadima: geet betey.. aaj toh aap inhe jawaab de hi dijiyee'.

Geet: dadima main.. woh

Maan: agar maafi chahiye toh tumhe sabke samne mere liye gaanaa gana hoga'aur woh gaana sirf mere liye hoga'. Aur haan tumhe naachna bhi padega' samjhi tum..

He goes and sits'.

Dadima: haan betey' hum aapke saath hai..

Geet thinking what to do'. Den realizing that its very important for her to convince maan'

Geet: ek toh maine unka shirt nahi khola aur ab agar mein unke liye gaana bhi nahi gaaye toh' hey babaji'

Pinky: geet tum kya soch rahi ho.. hum tumhare gaane ka intezzar kar rahe hai geet' hain na maan jijaji..

Geet: ye pinky ki bacchi'.(she tells in her mind and gives a weird luk to pinky)//

Maan: woh haan.. tumhare gaane ka intezzar hai..(he gives a seductive luk to her)

 

the girls join geet..for dance and geet singing and dancing (sasha, tasha, annie and pinky)Geet sings :

 
guys here is the link of the song.. piya bina jeena by anaida...check out this song for sure guys.... esp the lyrics.. the video starts after few seconds...
the lyrics are
                   piya bina jeena.. na re naarii sakhi naa re..

                   Haal jiya kehna naa re naarii sakhi naa re..

                   meethi chubhan re kulchan see mann mein

                   phholoin see narmi hye re badan mein... 
                   dekho toh doley jiya re..ye kya se kahaan re...
 
                  seene mein dil hai dil hai aur dil mein dhadkan
                  dhadkan mein woh hai woh hai jinki mein hoon jogan ( she looks at maan)
                  piya piya bole hye re jiya dole jiya re.....
                                                                 piya bina jeena na........
 
                 tan se laaga lloo tumko aanchal banake
                 aankhoin mein bhar lu sajna kajal banake (luks at maan and shows her kajal)
                 kai kuchi kole hye re jiya dole jiya re....
                                                                piya bina jeena na....

maan feels so happy tat his mishti sung a song for him'.and he was mesmerized by her lovely dance'

  

geet and pinky together'

geet: aa haa aa pinky ki bachiii

pinky: woh geet' gaana toh tune bada kaamal ka gaaya.. dekha nahi maan jijaji ki aankhein toh hat hi nahi rahi thee'

geet: aur adi sir ki bhi toh aankhein hat nahi rahii thee..(she stares at pinky)

pinky: kya geet..adi sir  aur mujhe

geet: maine aisa kab kaaha.. adi sir ki toh aankhein tasha par se hat nahi rahi thee pinky..

 

pinky stunned and confused'and geet leaves..smiling to herself....

 

maan and adi together..(adi thinking of pinky and maan thinking of geet)

adi: aaj toh ladkiyo ne kaamal ka dance kiya

maan: haan gaana toh bahoth hi aacha tha'.

Suddenly maan realizes his words and looks at adi' he sees adi staring at pinky'and smiles (geet bilkul sahi keh rahi thee)

  

Annie and the lady doctor'.

Annie: arjun kithne acche hai na

Doc: haan yeh baath toh aapne theek kahi.. aur sunaina toh sach mein kismet waali hai

Annie: sunaina

Doc: haan sunaina, arjun ki mangetar.. aapko nahi paata'

 

Annie is so shocked to hear this'. She remembers the time she and arjun had spent together'. How they were in love with each other..she runs towards arjun who was in his tent..

 

Annie: arjun.. ye mein kya sun rahi hoon.. tum aur sunaina..

Arjun: haan annie.. yeh sach hai'

Annie: toh phir jo tumne mere saath kiya

Arjun: woh toh ek dhoka hai annie.. main toh maan ke saath badla lena chahtha hoon.. usne jo meri behan ke saath kiya.. usi ka badla le raha hoon..

 

Maan enters as he sees anvesha entering arjun s tent..

 

Maan: annie'. tum yahan kya rahi ho

Annie: wo bhai'.

Arjun: wo annie mujhse milne aayee hai

Maan still concerned and is waiting for annie s reply..

Annie: woh bhai'woh doctor arjun ko bula rahi thee isliye'

 

Dadima calls maan'

Maan: annie toh ab chale..hum..

Annie: aap chaliye.. main aapke peeche peeche aaiyee'

 

Maan leaves..

Arjun: tumhe kya laaga main yahan pe kyu aaya hoon.. tumhe surprise karna..

Haan tumhe surprise hi jo karna tha' kaisa laaga mera surprise'

Annie: mujhe abhi tak yakeen  nahi ho raha hai..ki tumne aisa kar sakte ho..

Arjun: shayad tab yakeen ho jab mein sabko humari sacchai baatha doo'ya tum baathaogii

 

He says these and leaves.. annie still shocked'.

She leaves to her tent and pretends to be asleep while she is crying whole night..

 

 Geet and dadima sitting together'

Dadima: maan betey..kal hum sabko toh nikaalna hi hai.. toh hum soch rahe they kii kyun na hum log dargah chale

Maan: par dadima'

Dadima: maan betey humne mannath rakhi thee kii agar aapki aur geet ki shaadi sahi salamath ho jaaye toh dargah jaayenge'

Maan: theek hai dadima.. toh hum charo challenge'.(annie dadima maan n geet)

Dadima: theek hai phir.. aap sabko baatha dijiye' hum toh thaak gaaye hai' gud nite..

Geet and maan say gud nite to dadima'.

 

Geet:  ye toh koi baath nahi huiii' jinke liye gaana gaaya aur dance kiiya.. unhone kuch bhi nahi bola'..

Maan: hmmmm'. Accha tha'

 

He starts walking towards the tent and geet behind him..

Geet: kya.. sirf aacha tha..

Maan: bahooth accha tha geet'

Geet: sirf bahooth accha tha''

 

They both reach the tent by now'

Geet: jab gaalthiya karo''. toh sazza''' aur jab accha karo'. toh tofa bhi toh dena chahiye'

Maan: aacha.. ab samajh mein aaya'.mere paas tumhare liiye tofa' hai geet'

 

He takes geet in his arms'and switches off the light.

Guys rest is your imagination'

 

i hope u guys liked my update.. and also the song... 

 

 

 

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Fantastic update
Awww nice song choice
Lyk da ending part---wonder wat der Doin in da dark hehe Heart Xx...

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