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FF : Post wedding part 19 updtd pg 94 last part (Page 31)

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 5:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by swetha10

nice update... continue soon..
 
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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 6:28am | IP Logged
thank u all for ur comments... it motivates me to write further.. and i m sorry for late update....
 
part 7: (waterfall)

 

Arjun: namaste dadima…(den he luks towards maan) and says ye (lady) doctor hai.. maine socha ki saayad inki jarrorat pad jaaye.. isliye main inhe yaha le aaya…..

Maan : thanks arjun tum yahan aaye..aur thanks doctor aap bhi yahan aa gayee……

Doctor: u r welcome mr. khuraana…

 

Dadima, geet and annie together….

Dadima: arjun ko aapki kithni phikir hai geet… ye toh doctor ko bhi le aaye….

Geet: haan dadima…ab arjun humare parivaar ka hissa ban gaya hai..

Annie blushing and thinking in her mind tat she has chosen the right person in her life…

 

(arjun still doesn't knows the truth about geet.. he brings doctor as they r in camp site and also geet was unwell during the time of her wedding…)

 

Adi and maan…..

Adi : aapne arjun ko kyu bulaaaya sir..

Maan : geet aur dadima chahthey they…. isliye … lekin mein is insaan pe bilkul bhi yakeen nahi kartha… humhe is par nazaar rakhni padegiiii…

Aur haan adi… annie ko dadima ke tent pe shift kardo..aur woh lady doctor pinky ke saath tent mein rahegiii……..

 

Everybody finishes their breakfast and leave to the waterfall area….

All of them leave to the waterfall site except maan n geet………maan wears jeans n shirt.. (hp look).. geet wears jeans with t-shirt and also a stroll (scarf like) with  her..

 

Maan: hum sabke beech mein bhi tanhaee dhoond hi lethey hai geet…

Geet blushing…

Maan: geet tum shoes pehenlo….. chalne mein aasani hogii..

Geet: lekin shoes…. Mein toh shoes nahi laayee.. mere paas toh ye chappal hai…

Maan goes to his tent and brings shoes for geet….(he brought them as he knew that she wud need it) maan holds geet s leg and keeps it on his thigh…..

Geet: ye aap kya kar rahe hai..

Maan: tumhe jootey pehna raha hoon

Geet: aap mere pair math chuhiye….

Maan: ye kya keh rahi ho geet….

Geet: mera mathlab hai ki….mein joote pehen loongi…

She takes the shoes from maan n wears it…

Maan is annoyed by geet s action…

Maan: mere jootey pehnane mein tumhe problem hai….

Geet: woh haan…

Maan: kya kaha tumne…. Haan..

He turns around in anger…

Geet: ab mein aapko kaise samjhau…

She goes near maan facing him…. She holds his chin and says…

Geet: aap rootey huye bhi aachey dikhtey hain….

Maan: toh iska mathlab tumne mera ye uthra hua chehra dekhne ke liye mana kiya

Geet: nahi.. woh baath aisi hai ki.. aap mera pair kaise pakad sakte hai.. woh bhi jootey pehnane ke liye….

Maan: lekin geet maine toh pehle bhi tumhare pair pakde hain.. tumhe payal pehnane ke liye (he gives naughty smile) aur jab tum behoss ho gayee thee tab tumhare pair massage karne ke liye…

Geet: woh baath alag hai maan.. agar aap aaj bhi mujhe payal pehnaayege toh main aapko nahi rokooongii aur rahi baath mere pair ko massage karne ki.. toh tab mein behos thee….aur waise bhi pati apne patni ke pair nahi chootey

Maan: hmmmm… sach kehtey hai log.. shaadi ke baad ladkiya badal jaati hai….

Geet:  haan……. Ab toh aap ye kahenge hi…

Maan: geet…tum jaisi bhi ho… mere dil ke sabse kareeeb ho….aur tumhara ye pathi parmeshwar waala andaaz aacha laaga… aaj toh tumne mujhe rok diya geet….. par aage nahi rok paaogiiiii….

maan and geet walk with their hands entwined…

geet walking in front and maan behind her… he takes many pictures of geet without her knowledge.. suddenly geet turns…..

 

geet: ye aap kya kar rahe hai…

maan: woh kuch nahi.. dekh raha tha camera theek toh hai na…

maan pulls geet close to him and takes their pics………..

 

They both enjoy the entire journey from the camp site to the waterfall…

 

Dadima, annie, pinky, sasha, tasha, doctor,  romeo, adi, manisha, pandeyji, arjun and nakul going together in a group…dadi tells annie to help her out on their way… so annie is held up with dadima…..

 

Pinky is about to fall.. adi comes and pulls her..

Adi: (he stares at pinky)…ah hh ah … pinky tumhe shoes peheney chahiye they…

Pinky: woh main laana bhool gayiii

Adi: koi baath nahi pinky…aage se dhyaan rakhna.. aisii jhagah par shoes laana math bhoolna.. aur ab tum mere saath chalo…

He holds her hand so that she does not fall again…

Pinky –woh annie…

Adi: pinky… tum annie ko kyu bula rahi ho.. woh dadima ke saath hai…usse disturb math karo….

Pinky: woh… haan… theek hai…

Adi is feeling very happy…

 

They all reach camp site and wait for maan n geet.. finally maan n geet arrive… dadima is happy to see maan n geet safe….

  

Dadima takes rest along with the doctor.. maan n geet on other side… away from dadima and doctor…

 

Geet: kithna khoobsurat jharna hai….

Maan : tumhe pasand aaya….

Geet: haan bahooth…(she starts captivating those scenes in the camera)

Maan: geet tum waterfall ke paas math jaana… wahan phislan hai geet….

Geet: theek hai……(she starts clicking pictures of maan)

Both of them sit beside the river (jharna) and are lost in the heavenly beauty of nature….with eye locks…

 

Arjun and annie together… adi and pinky together.. romeo pandeyji manisha nakul tasha and sasha together….

Adi: pinky yahan dekh ke chalna…kahin tumhara pair na fissal jaaye…

Pinky doesn't give ears to adi s words….

Adi walking in front of pinky…. As pinky walks… she falls into the river.. the water splashes on adi s face… adi is shocked to see pinky…

Arjun annie romeo tasha sashaa n everybody else watch pinky….dadima doctor maan n geet are not aware about this……

Pinky calling adi sir adi sir.. hearing this…Adi jumps into the river to save pinky….. adi gets hold of pinky… pinky hugs adi tightly.. as she is still scared…..

 

 

Geet suddenly takes water in her palm from the river and splashes it on maan….maan closes his eyes and geet just stares at him…

Maan: geet ye kya rahi ho…

But geet is in fun and masti mood… she keeps splashing water..

Maan now finally holds her hand…

Maan: iski sazza milegi tumhe…

Geet: sazza…

Maan: haan mujhe gela karne ki sazza….

 

Geet: ye koi aapka office nahi hai… aur na hi main aapki secretary hooo…jo aap mujhe sazza denge…

Maan: iski sazza toh tumhe jaroor milegiiii….aur tumhari sazza ye hai ki tum mera shirt kolke usse sukhaaogi..

Geet: aap mazaak kar rahe hai na

Maan: mein mazaak ke mood mein bilkul bhi nahi hoon geet….

Geet: agar koi dekh liya toh…..

Maan: toh main kya karu.. aur tumhaari yaaddasth ke liye ye baatha doo ki.. humari shaadi ho chuki hai…

 

Suddenly maan n geet see adi and pinky wet… they both wondering wat happened…

 

Adi takes pinky in his arms and rushes to the doctor.. doctor checks the pulse rate and tells him tat der is nothing to worry about.. she is fine.. she ll gain consciousness in few mins..

Everybody reach the place mean time…. All luking worried for pinky…

Manisha tells dadima, maan n geet whatever happened…

Maan inquires doctor about pinky and  appreciates adi for his bravery….

 

Pinky opens her slowly and is happy to see everybody around her…. Everybody felt relieved to see pinky well….

Annie: maan bhai.. aapki ye shirt geeliii kaisi ho gayiiii.. bhabhi ko de dijiye.. ve sukha dengiii…

maan luking at geet and staring at her now…

they all leave pinky adi maan n geet alone…

 

Geet: babji ka shukr hai ki adi sir ne pinky ko bacha liye…..

(she goes close to adi) adi sir… jab main doob rahi thee… tab toh aap mujhe baachane nahi aaye…..

Adi: ye tum kaisi baath kar rahi ho geet

Geet: haan adi sir… aapko yaad hai jab maan ne party throw kii thee unke farmhouse par aur mein pool mein gir gayee thee…tab

Adi: ah ha ha ah… woh geet

Geet: aur toh aur aapko toh swimming bhi nahi aathii lekin pinky ko baachane ke liye aap kud bhi gaye..agar aapko kuch ho jaata toh..

Adi: woh geet.. us samay mujhe pinky ne mera naam pukaara aur mein bhi usse bachaane ke kud gaaya..

Geet: woh toh aacha hua ki romeo ne rassi phek diii….

Geet is happy to know tat adi is in love with pinky…..

Adi starts realizing his love towards pinky.. he is still astonished that he jumped into the river to save pinky… despite of not knowing swimming….

 

maan n geet leave adi and pinky alone…

maan: geet mein ab bhi geela hoon..

geet: aap phikiir math kijiye…. Kuch hi der mein sukh jaayega….

Maan  is annoyed and he goes near the river and wets his shirt…..

Geet: (luking at maan) ye aapka shirt ithna geela kab hua….. oh… ab samajh mein aaya… aapne apni shirt kudh hi geeliiii kar liii

Maan: tum sazaa se bach nahi sakthi geet….

Geet: ya toh na insaafi huyiiii… kudh apna shirt geela kiya aur mujhe sazaa dene pe uthaavle ho rahe hai…woh toh sukh gaaya than na…

Maan: mein tumhari in baathoin mein aane waala nahi hoo….

Geet: ye aachi baath hai… ulta chor kothwaal ko sazza de…………

Maan: tum uthaar rahi ho kii nahi…

Geet: aap toh bilkul bhi nahi samajte…. Bachey ki jaise ratt laagaye baithey ho….

 

She goes close to maan and starts unbuttoning his shirt…she open the top most button… meanwhile everybody arrives der.

Dadima: mere khayal se ab humein chalna chahiye… pinky ko bhi aaram ki jarrorath hai

Geet: haan dadima… pinky ko aaram ki jarrorath hai..

Dadima: hum kya kehte hai maan betey.. hum sab aapke raaste se chalte hai… mujhe mein aur himmat nahi rahii kii main us raastey mein doobara jaa saku…

Maan: jee dadima..(geet laughing now)

Dadima: annie aap humare saath chal rahi hai na....

Annie wanted to go with arjun but in vain… sasha tasha manisha pandeyji romeo nakul take the same route….

Maan geet adi pinky annie dadima take the safe route…. also arjun joins them...

 
hey all... i hope u liked it... comments and criticism are welcome.....i am sorry for late update....
 

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 6:40am | IP Logged
res i will read in peace after all shaadi ke baad ki baat hai and then commentWink

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 6:46am | IP Logged
loved it varsha...Maan wantedly wetting his shirt...Adi pinky love story ka shuruvat

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 6:47am | IP Logged
nice part

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 6:55am | IP Logged
loved it yaar............awesome update

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Posted: 27 January 2011 at 7:03am | IP Logged
loved it .....Adi pinky love story ka shuruvat very nice....
cont soon.

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awsome one yaar..loved it ..so sweet 

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