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FF : Post wedding part 19 updtd pg 94 last part (Page 26)

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 8:45am | IP Logged
heyy lovedd you ff
very cuteee 
plz pm me :)
just wondering..it is the same as the current story
as in she is pregnant or not?
thx naina xxx

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 10:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ilovemsk

heyy lovedd you ff
very cuteee 
plz pm me :)
just wondering..it is the same as the current story
as in she is pregnant or not?
thx naina xxx
 
thanks neha and farheen.... ya she s pregnant........
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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 10:16pm | IP Logged

thank u all for ur comments... its helping me to write further.... 

 

 

Part 6:

Geet is surprised to hear lohri celebrations….
 

Geet –main toh bhool hi gayeee thee.. jab se hoshiyarpur chodi hoon tab se  tyoharoin ke maayne hi nahi rahe…koi parivar bhi nahi tha jiske saath tyohar maana saku.. par aaj aapne toh khushiya phir se louta diii

Dadima – inka credit maan betey ko jaata hain…

 

Geet very happy..

Geet – par dadima… lohri toh ladki apne maayke mein baanati hai…

Dadi – geet ye bhi toh tumhara maayka hai… ye saare office ke staff ladki walloin ki taraf se hi toh hain…yahan par toh sabhi rishteydaar hain… jab aapka maayka bhi yehi hain.. toh phir hum lohri yahan kyu nahi maana sakte….

Geets eyes are filled with tears.. she is so happy… searches for maan… she finds him and just stares at him… maan reads her eyes.. he finds only love in her eyes…Maan joins them now..

Maan - toh lohri manaaye…

 

Dadi den gives her lal chunari… everybody joins them in the celebration..

 

Geet wants to spend time alone with maan.. but she is unable to as everybody are there around him and her....everybody circling the camp fire… maan n geet on opposite sides.. staring at each other.. doing all rituals…

Everybody gather around and they all start dancing…(background music being played… manaye lohri ve….)

 

Adi and pinky together circling the camp fire.. walking side by side.

Pinky :adi sir, geet ko dekhiye na… uski nazaar toh maan sir se hat hi nahi rahi hai…

Adi – haan pinky aur maan sir ko bhi dekho… dono aankhoin se baathey kar rahe hai…..aur pinky tum mujhe adi sir bulaana band karo.. sirf adi kaho…..

Pinky walking away….she feeling shy…. Ye adi sir ko kya hua hai… sirf adi kehne ke liye kyu keh rahe haiiiiiiii……

 

Dadima – aaj ke liye bus ithna kaafi hai.. aaj aap sabhi thak gaaye honge… travelling bhi toh tha na… aap sab aaram kar lijiye….aur haan kal ka breakfast ladkiya banayegi aur din mein nakul aur raat mein ladke banayenge…..nakul aap sabki thodii madaath kar dega.. theek hai.. aap sabhi ko shubh rathrii….

 

Everybody leave to their respective rooms wishing maan n geet gud nite..

 

Maan n geet in the camp fire…

Maan involved in deep thoughts… thinking about the geet and baby and the promise he made to geet…geet goes to drop dadima by her tent….

She arrives now… sees maan..

 

Geet – kya hua maan… aap kya soch rahe hainn….

Maan – aur kya sochunga geet… tumhare baare mein soch raha tha…..aaj ka chand dekho… kithna khoobsurat lag raha hai.. aur iski chandni mein toh ye sama aur bhi khoobsurat ho gaya….

Both of them looking towards moon..

 

Geet – aaj aapne toh ye sama ko bhi ghar jaisa bana diya…..mujhe mehsoos hi nahi hone diya kiii hum ghar se baahar hain…yeh waadiya bhi ab ghar jaise laagne laagi hai….. mujhe toh ye paata tha…. kiii aap inko khoobsurat sa ghar maante ho.. par aaj maine dekh bhi liya…

 

Maan – geet….. tum is khoobsurat se ghar ka hissa ban gayii ho…tumhare saath toh is ghar kii rounak aur bhi bad gayii hai geet..

 

Maan n geet eye locks…. They both go hand in hand towards their tent..

Maan n geet with changed clothes… geet sitting on the bed with stretched legs.. maan comes and keeps his head on her lap… geet gently massages his hair…maan closing his eyes and he is liking the way geet is massaging his head…

Geet – aaj toh aapne saari jahaan ki khushi dedi mujhe….

Maan opens his eyes and sits close to her…

Maan – meri mishti ke liye toh saara jaahaan ki khushi bhi kam hai….

Geet keeping her hands on his cheeks… comes close to him and starts kissing him..she kisses his forehead… cheeks……

Maan now staring at her… she feels shy… maan moves her chin.. and says mujhe in aankhoin mein doob jaane do geet….

 

Next day:

Geet still sleeping.. maan comes from jogging… adores her sleeping mishti…he kisses her….

Geet turns and  puts her hands around his chest and is still asleep… maan admires her sleeping beauty…he moves away her tresses...geet slowly opens her eyes….she adores him…..

Geet – aap ithni jaldi ut gaaye….kitney bajey hain….

Maan – geet 8 bajne waale hain

Geet – kya…

She hurries and wakes up from the bed

Geet – aapne mujhe jhagaya kyu nahiii…..dadima kya sochengi… hey babaji… meri raksha karna….

Maan – phir se tumne meri complain babaji se karna shuru kar dii…..tumhari raksha babaji nahi kar sakte… mujhe hi karna padega…

Geet – aap kehna kya chahtey ho..

Maan – ab dekho…..roz roz tum galtiya karti ho… us galti se baachane ke liye toh mujhe hi tumhari raksha karni padegi na….(he smiles)

Geet – baathey toh badi badi karte hai.. toh ab baathiye meri raksha aap kaise karenge aaj….khaana banakar…toh aaj aap sach mein hum sab ke liye naashta banayenge… woh bhi ladkiyoin ke saath.. haan haan sasha hai na.. woh aapki madaath kar degi… (laughs out loud)

And she goes off to get ready…

Maan – geet geet suno…. Main khana banooonga sabke liye… woh bhi sasha…….. geet tum paagal ho gayee ho.. sun rahi ho na……

 

 

Maan leaves… sasha tasha n pinky busy preparing breakfast wit the help of nakul….. (nakul preparing breakfast and sasha tasha pinky helping him) annie and maan enter…

 

Annie – bhai… geet bhabhi kaahaan hai…

Maan – Wo annie geet bus aathi hi hogi..

 

Sasha (to herself) – ab mk toh geet se kuch kahenge bhi nahi…chahe wo aaye ya naa aaye…

 

Maan sees geet coming towards them..

Maan – sasha aaj breakfast mein kya ban raha hai….

Geet hears maan n sasha s conversation

Geet (to herself) -  ye baath toh mujhse bhi pooch sakte they na ya phir annie ya pinky se… lekin nahii…. Hey babaji..

Sasha – (happy) mk.. aaj ke breakfast ka menu….

Geet interrupts…

Geet – wo aaj naashte mein omellete, pasta, aaloo aur gobi ke parathey ban rahe hai…. Corn flakes aur black coffee bhi hai..

She then goes close to maan n pulls him to a  side..

Geet – ye aap kya kar rahe they…

Maan – main kya geet.. kuch bhi toh nahi…

Geet – toh ab aap mujhse jhoot bhi bolne laage hai…

Maan – meri ithni himmat.

Geet- toh phir aap sasha se kya keh rahe they..

Maan - geet mein toh sirf sasha se breakfast pooch raha tha…

Geet - aap ye baath mujhse pooch sakte they na.. lekin nahi… aapko toh hamesha apne mann ki karni hai….

Maan – kuch hi der pehle tum hi toh keh rahi thee ki main jaakar sasha ki maadaath karu… aur ab toh tum mere usse baath karne se bhi chid rahi ho…

Geet – wo wo..

Maan – haan geet mere kaan besaabri se tumhari awaaz sunnne ke liye intezaar kar rahe hain… bolo geet…

Geet – hadh ho gayiiii….wo toh maine aapse eiaa viaaa hi keh diyaa.. aur khabardaar…. Aapne dobaara aisa kiya toh…. aap apna office ka kaam kar saktey hai uske saaathhh….

Maan – aur haan khabardaar.. agar tumne phir se ye shararath kii toh....

Geet and maan smiling now...... 

Everybody having their breakfast……

 

Adi: pinky.. tumhare liyee kuch laau..

Pinky – haan adi sir… mujhe gobi ke parathey chahiye..

Adi: maine tumse kaha na pinky mujhe adi kehke bulaao

Pinky – woh haan…. Adi…

Adi smiles and goes to bring parathey for pinky…..

 

Sasha and tasha: manisha enters…

Manisha: kya lau sasha baby tumhare liye…. Alooo ke parathey..

Sasha: u idiot..mein diet mein hoon… mein ye unhealthy food consume nahi karthi…

Manisha: woh toh tumhare shareeer se dikh raha hai… ki tum kitni healthy ho… aur mujhe idiot kehti ho… lekin tumhare liye kuch bhi sweety… tum aaj sukha phuka hi khalo.. mera mathlab hai cornflakes…tumhe iski jyaada jarrorrat hai baby….

Sasha: makes faces…..

 

Maan geet annie dadi have their breakfast….

Dadima : maan betey aaj ka kya plan hai….

Maan : woh dadima… yahaan paas mein hi jharrna hai.. hum sab wahan jaayenge…wahan ka nazaara bahooth hi khoobsurat hai….

Dadima: lekin geet….

Maan : dadima… uski aapko chinta karne ki jarrorath nahi hai.. woh jyaada door nahi hai.. aur main geet ko doosre raaste se le aaonga…

Dadima: ye theek rahega…..

 

Maan n geet smiling….(thinking that they again got a chance to be alone despite everyone being around them)

 

Arjun enters with a lady doctor…..

annie and rest other office staffs are surprised…..

 

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 10:53pm | IP Logged
aur pinky tum mujhe adi sir bulaana band karo.. sirf adi kaho…..LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL
simply wow!! ab arjun ko kya ho gaya yaar update soonClapClapClap

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 10:55pm | IP Logged

wow superb varsha...loved it...dear...

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 10:57pm | IP Logged
hey nice update dear... will comment more have to rush...

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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sanjh1234

aur pinky tum mujhe adi sir bulaana band karo.. sirf adi kaho'..LOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL
simply wow!! ab arjun ko kya ho gaya yaar update soonClapClapClap
 
thank u sanjh.. have to wait for arjun s track... ll update asap...
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Posted: 23 January 2011 at 11:05pm | IP Logged
wats wid Arjun's entry??
nywayz  beautiful part

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