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FF : Post wedding part 19 updtd pg 94 last part (Page 10)

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 3:27am | IP Logged
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Great .....loved it

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 4:16am | IP Logged
nice update

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too good please continue waiting............

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Gr8 part......... loved it....... pls add me to ur pm list

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Thank u all for ur support..
 
 Part 3:

Maan is lost in geet s words. He is mesmerized by her simplicity and is remembering those words which geet said (sach kahu toh mujhe maan ke saath camping ke liye jaana hain. Wahi jagah jahan woh akele mein rehna pasand karte they..)

 

Suddenly maan realizes and speaks..

Maan ' geet aisi halaath mein camping.. nahi geet. Main ithna risk nahi le saktha'

Geet ' maan mujhe kuch nahi hoga.. main theek hoon.

Maan ' nahi geet hum nahi jaayenge.

Dadi ' maan betey hum sab hain na' hum kaun sa geet ko akeley chodenge.. main annie aap aur sabhi office staff rahenge toh phikir ki koi baath nahi betey.. waise bhi geet ko kahin bahar jaana chahiye. Peechle dino jo kuch bhi hua usse bhool jaane mein hi samajdhari hain''..Maan'' agar geet bahar ki khooli hawa mein rahengi toh unhe bhi accha lagega'

Maan understands and then says theek hai dadi' agar aap kehthi hai toh phir theek hai.

Annie ' toh phir mein sabko baatha doo ki hum jaa rahe hain'chaliye dadi sabko yeh khush khabar sunate hai.

 Annie and dadi announce everybody (staffs) about their camping plan.

 Maan and geet in maan s cabin.

 Maan 'toh kya kaha tumne' honeymoon par nahi jaana tumhe

Geet ' ae lo'. maine aisa kab kaha'

Maan ' abhi toh kaha tumne'. Tumhe toh camping par jaana hai na'

Geet ' haan woh toh jaana hain'lekinnnnn aapne kaun sa kaha ki aapko honeymoon par jaana hain.. aapne bhi toh koi jawaab nahi diya. meri aur baath tal dii..jaisa geet chahegi'

Maine toh socha tha ki aap first date main mujhe kahin bahar le jaayenge mera mathlab hai ki koi hotel shotel.. par aap toh kahaan pahadoin ke beech le aaye' jab koi pehli date pe wahan le jaa sakta hai toh'

Maan ' iska mathlab tumhe humari pehli date aachi nahi laagi

Geet ' maine aisa kab kaha' har baath par jhagda.. pehle wedding invitation ke liye white ya red aur ab honeymoon par.. wedding invitation ke cards aapke muthabik chaapey they hain na aur ab honeymoon mere muthabik hoga'

Maan ' ithni jaldi hain tumhe honeymoon ki..(notorious luks)

Geet feels shy' maan comes close to her'geet closes her eyes'

Maan moves away from her and den tells

 Maan ' kya honeymoon hai' sirf 2 din ke liye aur haan poori paltan ko saath le jaayegii'

 Geet gets irritated as maan moves away from her

Geet ' agar ithna hi tha toh jawaab detey annie aur dadima ko' unke samne toh bade shariff bantey hain aur yahaan khooley sher ki tarah mera shikaar kar rahe ho'

Maan ' geet'..

Geet ' haan haan mujhe paata hain mera naam geet hain'

Maan stares her with angry looks.

Geet ' accha theek hai'. Honeymoon ke jhagde baad mein hothey rahenge aur aap jaise chahoge waisa hi hoga' jaahan aap jaaoge wahan hum jaayenge'. Mera mathlab hain'.. main' jaoangi aapke saath.. sirf main.. lekin ab camping ki taiyaari bhi toh karni hai'

 Maan ' theek hai geet.. tum jao main baad mein aaounga' kuch kam nibtaane hain'

Geet -  jaldi aayega'

 Geet leaves along with dadi n annie.

  Maan in his cabin' adi and romeo enter the cabin.

 Maan ' kuch kam tha..

Adi ' woh ' hum aapse ye kehne aaye they kiii''aapne jo faisla liya hum sabko camping par le jaane ka'

Maan stares at adi now..

Adi ' uske liye poori staff ki taraf se aapko dhanyawad dene aaye they''

Maan smiling now'

Maan ' hmmm'. ismein waise thank u ki koi baath nahi hain. Den turns and continues his work.. checking files etc'aur kuch'

Romeo -  nahi bus ithna hi'thank u maan sir'..

Maan ' adi romeo mujhe tumse kuch jarrori baath karni hai'

Adi ' ji sir kahiye..

Maan ' arjun ke baare mein tum logo ki kya rai hai..

Adi ' sir' arjun' acchey hain sir' aaj unki wajah se hi aapki aur geet ki shaadi acche se hui hai.. varna nayantara ne toh poori planning kar li thee aapko jail bhejne kii'arjun ne hi aakhri waqth mein aakar apna bayan diya aur nayantara ko galat sabith kiya'

Romeo ' ji sir' adi theek keh rahe hain'. Kithna farak hai arjun aur nayantara mein'

Maan ' theek hai.. ab tum jaa sakte ho' aur haan sabse kehna ki acchi tarah se packing kar le' kal subah subah niklenge' par haan aaj ka kam khatam kar ke hi sab jaana'

Adi and romeo ' ji sir'

 AT KM:

Maan enters home and calls for geet'. And is surprised to see that geet is not der. Den calls annie' even she is not der'

Calls nakul

Maan ' nakul geet annie sab kahaan hain

Nakul ' woh toh bahar gaaye hain

Maan ' kya..

Dadi comes.

Dadi ' kya baath hain maan betey aatey hi ghar ko apne ser pe kyun utaaye hain

Maan ' dadi' annie aur geet kahaan gaaye hain' mujhse poochna toh chahiye tha..

Dadi ' maine hi unhe bheja hain' shopping ke liye.. camping par jaana hai toh us hissap se kapdey bhi toh chahiye na..geet wahan par sari toh nahi pehen sakti'

Maan ' accha theek hai dadi'

 Maan leaves to his room and dadi smiles seeing maan'

 Annie and geet arrive.

Dadi ' shopping ho gayii geet betey

Geet ' haan dadima.. aaj annie thee varna toh mujhe samaj mein hi nahi aa raha tha main kya karidu aur kya nahi..thanks annie

Annie -  anytime dude..waise ab yeh thanks sab nahi chalega theek hai na..

Dadi ' geet aap pehle kamre mein jaayiye maan aapka intezzar kar rahe hain'. Office se aatey saath hi aapko doond rahe they'

Geet smiles and says ji dadima and leaves to her room'

 Maan takes shower and comes back and sees geet in the room'

Maan ' toh shopping ho gayee'

Geet ' haan'main toh thak gayee hoon'

Maan ' mujhse kaha hota main chalta tumhare saath'

Geet -  aap chale toh jaate' lekin kam poora nahi hota..

Maan ' kya mathlab hai tumhara

Geet ' yaad hai' shaadi ki shopping ke samay aapne toh meri kitni '''madath kii'

Maan ' haan woh toh kii hi thee na..

Geet ' haan haan maine bhi dekha' aapne toh keh diya' tum jo bhi pehnogi usmein khoobsurat lagogi'agar aise mein aap mere saath jaate toh  hum wahi latak jaate'kyunki mujhe toh samaj hi nahi aa raha tha kya kharidhu aur kya nahi' woh toh accha tha annie thee mere saath'

Maan ' tum ladkiyoin ki toh yehi problem hai..hum saath jaaye toh problem' nahi jaaye toh problem..

Geet ' dadima theek kehthi hai'aapke baare mein

Maan ' dadima ne kya kaha'

Geet ' ab aapko har baath baathani jarrori hai kya..

Maan ' main toh tumhari naa baathane waali aadath se thang aa gaya hoon.

 geet ' chaliye ab dinner ka samay ho gaya hai' dadima aur annie intezzar kar rahe hain'

maan ' ab bhi tumhe dadima aur annie ki padi hai' walks out of the room'.

 Geet follows him' all of them have dinner'

dadi -  sab jaldi taiyar ho jaayega kal'. Camping ke liye jo nikalna hai'

aur geet betey packing kar lena' annie aap bhi.. ab jaayiye aur kal ki taiyaari kijiye'

 everybody leaves to their respective rooms...

hey guys plz do leave ur comment... ur comments ll help me in writing further. Sorry for the delay and late update



Edited by bharkha - 16 January 2011 at 10:42am

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Posted: 15 January 2011 at 10:04pm | IP Logged
love it dear... i like how its going..and the fact that Maan & Geet's original charm hasnt been lost...

loved all three parts...cant wait to read the rest..pls update soon...

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