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jab dil mile updated 03/03/2012 last pars epi (Page 9)

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Maan run towards geet………

Geet hugged him,……….

He don't know why there is something……………….

Which binds him.

He felt relieved on seeingher….

She hugged him tighter.why everytime…..he comes as a saviour..for her……………

And he always………..come front…….

He asked ……………..that she can drop somewhere………

As before she nod..

He dragged he rfrom the party……………

And she made to sit in the car……….

She is shocked…..

And he shoved into the driver seat.

And start with full speed…………………….

He didn't ask any thing…..

After sometime…………………..she started to speak…….

But the car stopped infront of……a park……………………………….

He turned to find…………..

Geet is sleeping……………………………

Her cheeks,,,,are filled with dried tears……..

The eyes remain close ddue to stress…………………………..

Her innocent face…….what makes her special…………………………….

And why he always melt on seeing the face……………..

And why she didn't stop in falling into troubles………..everytime he cannot save her…….

Today he is on time…………………..

But what about tomorrow……………………..

He brought back to his out house…

Again carrying her in his arms…………….

And she is sleeping…….peacefully…………………

He puts her in the bed…………………..

The hair locks in her face………………………………

Are aankh se boond gira koi
Chingari ka tukda jala koi
Umeed ko aag laga zara
Sehra ki pyaas bujha zara

Umeed ko aag laga zara
Sehra ki pyaas bujha zara
Ghan itna baras ke galne lagoon
Mein paani ke upar tarne lagoon

Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe
Behene de mujhe behene de
Ohhh
Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe
Behene de mujhe behene de

Behene de ghangor ghata
Behene de paani ki tarah
Saagar mein jaa girna hai
Behene de nadiyaan ki tarah

Shart lagi hai mar jaane ki
Jeena hai toh pyaar mein
Dil kahin bhi ho mera
Jaan rakhi hai yaar mein
Behja behja hai saagar ka kehna
Behja behja hai nadiyaan ko behna

Patte se tapakti boond ki awaaz sunai di thi
Nadiyaan mein tapak aur gum ho ja
Beh gaya beh gaya jo reh gaya reh gaya
Beh gaya beh gaya jo reh gaya reh gaya
Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe
Behene de mujhe behene de
Ohhh
Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe
Behene de mujhe behene de
Behene de ghangor ghata
Behene de paani ki tarah
Saagar mein jaa girna hai
Behene de nadiyaan ki tarah

Mera pal pal ang ang bhar diya
Tune jaan pe junoon saa kar diya
Mera hai kya jo mein haar du
Jaan teri hai tujh pe vaar du
Doob gaye jo suna hai saare
Tere dere aatey hai
Dil ko chulu mein bechare
Doobkiyan ghante khaate hain

Beh ja behja chal todh kinaare ko
Behja behja dhar le majhdhaare ko

Chingari udha ke raakh se
Ek boond gira ke aankh se
Chalne ka ishaara kar gaya

Kar gaya kar gaya sab bhar gaya bhar gaya
Kar gaya kar gaya sab bhar gaya bhar gaya
Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe
Behene de mujhe behene de
Ohhh
Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe
Behene de mujhe behene de

Behene de ghangor ghata
Behene de paani ki tarah
Saagar mein jaa girna hai
Behene de nadiyaan ki tarah

Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe
Behene de mujhe behene de
Ohhh
Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe
Behene de mujhe behene de

Behene de ghangor ghata
Behene de paani ki tarah
Saagar mein jaa girna hai
Behene de nadiyaan ki tarah
he moves to other room………….

And he changes……

And droves to sleep……..

After few days he can sleep piece fully………….

Geet open her eyes……….to find the same room……………….

She rubbed her eyes.

She remembered.how he helped..

She thought of leaving……..

And she quickly run Int o the washroom.

And as she above to move

If  u  girls  use ur brains………………….instead of legs…………………

Then could be useful in falling in trouble…

He mocked.

Geet turned head to find the tall linear structure……………..with crossed legs……….at the door……..

He open his eyes..

And he came to check..as like previous time…………………….he was sure she is going to run from him…..

As expected……………….

He gave a look…………….

Geet lift her head………………………..

And how u go……………….u didn't have money with u………and u r ill……..even……………….u don't know where are u……………………………………

If u have these questions….then u can leave I will not stop……..

And speak…if u have toungue…….as I can confirm tha tim not speaking to doll..

Yeh babaji……inka mood hamesha………ghode par.sawaar hokar kyon hota hay……………………….

I aksed u something………………..

Geet:jee.thank u…………………………..

Maan stunned at her pleasant voice…………

She is beautiful.but her voice Is more beautiful ………..

he turned warned his heart to not to fall.came back to his old style…………….

Dekho..nastha .table pe hay…………..phir bholna kaha chodna hay….mein tume chod dunga……………

With out saying anything……….he marched out……………………………………

Geet shocked……….

Yeh admi yah haa machine………….

Lekin…insaan achaa hay……warna kal raat she again close her eyes………in pain………….babaji.kyo n mere saath yesa.

She openhe reyes quickly as she feared that she may not encountered with one more arrogant look

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