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jab dil mile updated 03/03/2012 last pars epi (Page 8)

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really nice yaar

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awsome update.
plzzzzz...update jadli...
cant wait to see wht happen at office.
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very very nice story 
bt plz update earlierDay Dreaming
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plz update soon
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Posted: 31 March 2011 at 3:43am | IP Logged

Tum yeha

Aap yeha

What the hell ur doing here'''and what the hell'''''''..

And why this flowers are here''

He is fumbling out''''..his anger'''..

His eyes are turned out in anger'''''''

But still he had her in his hands''''.

Geet:try to come out''..but he is still'''''..

She is completely confused'''''''''.

He made her to stand on her feet.

Where pinky.came there'..seeing her cousin/friend''''''..

In the hands of her hot /dd boss''''''''..

First word:geeet'''''''.

She turned to find.all the staff staring at the scene' it is completely out of world for them.

He looked around..andyelled''

Im not paying to stare me like that '''''''''..go back'

And he looked at her''''..

His mind:name :geet''not bad'''''.

Pinky.came and dragged geet with her'

She hugged her and said happy birthday pinky..tehn adi listen toit.

Today is pinky'''''''.birthday.why she is not informed''''..

Sasha and tasha'''''''''.looked her'' she got the the hands of the DD''''.

Geet''..totally confused.

Yeh babaji.aap inee har baar mere samne''..laa kar kadi karthe hay..woh be yesi situations'''mein''.


She got a call from .the hotel'' she is gone for the party'''

Maan came back to his office.

What 's wrong she is chasing him in his dreams'''now she is near to his eyes'''''''.h god''''..

And he saw there is a invitation on the table''''.

He is'''''..looked at it''.

He cannot avoid''as it is one of his biggest client''''''''''''.

And he got ready for party''''''''''''''..

At the evening''

In mean time'.geet is busy for the party'''.she had again taken two duties'''''''''''as she had already buyed pinky a dress''''with her savings'''''.now she need to save some other for her further education''as she is going to join in the college''''..need to do further study'''..her that she can earn respectable money'''''''.she goes on'''''''''.

As there is a dress code'''''''''''''..of the hotel'..

It is a cocktail party'''''''.so her dress is decent''''''''..

But still''''''''..she is in gown''''

She is serving drinks in the bar'''''..

Her dress'''''..

She is moving around''''.

Until she saw him'the corner'''''''

He is at the bar'''.

Gulping the drink''''''''''..

He always like that''''''

He saw her'''''''.

The dress'''..serving client s with her genuine smile''''.some how he didn't like that.but something happens in his heart.when she smile'''..

The innocence face is covered with locks''''''''''''''she is removing while'..serving the glasses..

Suddenly she felt a grip'''''.

Try to loose''''..but still''''''

He covered the mouth with his hand''..

She is in dark room'''''

She has tears in her eyes'''''''''''''''''''''

The person rude eyes.he is completely drunk''''''

He is using the advantage of the dark room''''..

As he proceeded''''.

Suddenly.a hand stopped him'

She felt some cloth covered''''''''''.and leave the grip'''''''''..

She felt someone had lifted her'''''''and made her to lie on sofa''.

Then she heard.a cracking sound of bones''

Where she open her eyes to find a strong hand'.punching the shadow''''''''''

He punched the a stammer''''''''.

He throw him'''.to the wall'''''''..blood is the person''..

Brusied.eyes''''and lips''''..and the person is no longer can stand on his feet'''.

FB:geet is serving the drinks.

Suddenly a drunker saw her'''.

His eyes filled with lust on seeing her figure.

The skirt'.and the dress'''''''''making him crazy'''''..

And her face'and curves''''..

He followed her''''''''.

As bar tender informed for extra drinks'

\she gone to bring them for storage room.which is right behind the rooms''''.she need to cross the suit rooms'''''''''.by the person''caught her''and held her in  the room and try to molest her'''''''''''''

At the same time.he didn't know that another person watching her with a intensity''''''''''''..

Not lust.but care'''''''''''.

He Is enjoying her touch in the morning'.her eyes'.and he is observing her from the distance''''.don't know it feel nice for him''''''

Her eyes'her move her smile'''''..he is totally lost.

He is dashing in his black suit'''''''''''''sleeveless shirt  shirt'''''''.curves visible.attracting the ladies .wandering around''''''''.

Every girl eyes on him'''

He is boring at the ''''''' he is waiting for his client'''''..

Need to avoid the crowd''''''..

And at the time''''''''..

Geet dragged his attention'''''''''''.

He is totally watching her''''''.without a blink'''''''''''''''..

Suddenly he felt she disappered''..

He feared'.his heart is loosing''''''.

Then the bar tender informin g her.

He checked the watch''''.

And e observed the person''''.following her'

He felt something strange'''''''..

He sensed the danger''''..

As only'.

At the time'''''

He saw what Is the expected''''''..

He saw the person dirty hands on his girl'''''''.

Suddenly anger hitm him'..

He banged the door.barked in.and threw the person to the ground.

The tears.make him steady/////////////////

He is completely shattered''..

He saw her scaff''''''''''.

And he threw''..

She is weak''she is about tofall.

He catched her and made her to sit in couch..

As the averged man..try to hit him''''''''.back.

He held his hand'and give him punches''''''''''''.

And make him to loose the senses.and he fell on the ground'''''''''.

and this what happened''''''''''''''
















































Edited by srilu_123 - 31 March 2011 at 3:44am

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loved it very well done
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loved it..............

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