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Tum yeha

Aap yeha

What the hell ur doing here'''and what the hell'''''''..

And why this flowers are here''

He is fumbling out''''..his anger'''..

His eyes are turned out in anger'''''''

But still he had her in his hands''''.

Geet:try to come out''..but he is still'''''..

She is completely confused'''''''''.

He made her to stand on her feet.

Where pinky.came there'..seeing her cousin/friend''''''..

In the hands of her hot /dd boss''''''''..

First word:geeet'''''''.

She turned to find.all the staff staring at the scene'..as it is completely out of world for them.

He looked around..andyelled''

Im not paying to stare me like that '''''''''..go back'

And he looked at her''''..

His mind:name :geet''not bad'''''.

Pinky.came and dragged geet with her'

She hugged her and said happy birthday pinky..tehn adi listen toit.

Today is pinky'''''''.birthday.why she is not informed''''..

Sasha and tasha'''''''''.looked her''..as she got the opportunity.in the hands of the DD''''.

Geet''..totally confused.

Yeh babaji.aap inee har baar mere samne''..laa kar kadi karthe hay..woh be yesi situations'''mein''.

Uffo'.

She got a call from .the hotel''..as she is gone for the party'''

Maan came back to his office.

What 's wrong she is chasing him in his dreams'''now she is near to his eyes'''''''.h god''''..

And he saw there is a invitation on the table''''.

He is'''''..looked at it''.

He cannot avoid''as it is one of his biggest client''''''''''''.

And he got ready for party''''''''''''''..

At the evening''

In mean time'.geet is busy for the party'''.she had again taken two duties'''''''''''as she had already buyed pinky a dress''''with her savings'''''.now she need to save some other money.so extra.money for her further education''as she is going to join in the college''''..need to do further study'''..her dream.so that she can earn respectable money'''''''.she goes on'''''''''.

As there is a dress code'''''''''''''..of the hotel'..

It is a cocktail party'''''''.so her dress is decent''''''''..

But still''''''''..she is in gown''''

She is serving drinks in the bar'''''..

Her dress'''''..

She is moving around''''.

Until she saw him'the corner'''''''

He is at the bar'''.

Gulping the drink''''''''''..

He always like that''''''

He saw her'''''''.

The dress'''..serving client s with her genuine smile''''.some how he didn't like that.but something happens in his heart.when she smile'''..

The innocence face is covered with locks''''''''''''''she is removing while'..serving the glasses..

Suddenly she felt a grip'''''.

Try to loose''''..but still''''''

He covered the mouth with his hand''..

She is in dark room'''''

She has tears in her eyes'''''''''''''''''''''

The person rude eyes.he is completely drunk''''''

He is using the advantage of the dark room''''..

As he proceeded''''.

Suddenly.a hand stopped him'

She felt some cloth covered''''''''''.and leave the grip'''''''''..

She felt someone had lifted her'''''''and made her to lie on sofa''.

Then she heard.a cracking sound of bones''

Where she open her eyes to find a strong hand'.punching the shadow''''''''''

He punched the hand..like a stammer''''''''.

He throw him'''.to the wall'''''''..blood is the person''..

Brusied.eyes''''and lips''''..and the person is no longer can stand on his feet'''.

FB:geet is serving the drinks.

Suddenly a drunker saw her'''.

His eyes filled with lust on seeing her figure.

The skirt'.and the dress'''''''''making him crazy'''''..

And her face'and curves''''..

He followed her''''''''.

As bar tender informed for extra drinks'

\she gone to bring them for storage room.which is right behind the rooms''''.she need to cross the suit rooms'''''''''.by the person''caught her''and held her in  the room and try to molest her'''''''''''''

At the same time.he didn't know that another person watching her with a intensity''''''''''''..

Not lust.but care'''''''''''.

He Is enjoying her touch in the morning'.her eyes'.and he is observing her from the distance''''.don't know it feel nice for him''''''

Her eyes'her move her smile'''''..he is totally lost.

He is dashing in his black suit'''''''''''''sleeveless shirt  shirt'''''''.curves visible.attracting the ladies .wandering around''''''''.

Every girl eyes on him'''

He is boring at the '''''''..party.as he is waiting for his client'''''..

Need to avoid the crowd''''''..

And at the time''''''''..

Geet dragged his attention'''''''''''.

He is totally watching her''''''.without a blink'''''''''''''''..

Suddenly he felt she disappered''..

He feared'.his heart is loosing''''''.

Then the bar tender informin g her.

He checked the watch''''.

And e observed the person''''.following her'

He felt something strange'''''''..

He sensed the danger''''..

As only'.

At the time'''''

He saw what Is the expected''''''..

He saw the person dirty hands on his girl'''''''.

Suddenly anger hitm him'..

He banged the door.barked in.and threw the person to the ground.

The tears.make him steady/////////////////

He is completely shattered''..

He saw her scaff''''''''''.

And he threw''..

She is weak''she is about tofall.

He catched her and made her to sit in couch..

As the averged man..try to hit him''''''''.back.

He held his hand'and give him punches''''''''''''.

And make him to loose the senses.and he fell on the ground'''''''''.

and this what happened''''''''''''''

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



Edited by srilu_123 - 31 March 2011 at 3:44am

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loved it very well done
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Maan run towards geet………

Geet hugged him,……….

He don't know why there is something……………….

Which binds him.

He felt relieved on seeingher….

She hugged him tighter.why everytime…..he comes as a saviour..for her……………

And he always………..come front…….

He asked ……………..that she can drop somewhere………

As before she nod..

He dragged he rfrom the party……………

And she made to sit in the car……….

She is shocked…..

And he shoved into the driver seat.

And start with full speed…………………….

He didn't ask any thing…..

After sometime…………………..she started to speak…….

But the car stopped infront of……a park……………………………….

He turned to find…………..

Geet is sleeping……………………………

Her cheeks,,,,are filled with dried tears……..

The eyes remain close ddue to stress…………………………..

Her innocent face…….what makes her special…………………………….

And why he always melt on seeing the face……………..

And why she didn't stop in falling into troubles………..everytime he cannot save her…….

Today he is on time…………………..

But what about tomorrow……………………..

He brought back to his out house…

Again carrying her in his arms…………….

And she is sleeping…….peacefully…………………

He puts her in the bed…………………..

The hair locks in her face………………………………

Are aankh se boond gira koi
Chingari ka tukda jala koi
Umeed ko aag laga zara
Sehra ki pyaas bujha zara

Umeed ko aag laga zara
Sehra ki pyaas bujha zara
Ghan itna baras ke galne lagoon
Mein paani ke upar tarne lagoon

Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe
Behene de mujhe behene de
Ohhh
Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe
Behene de mujhe behene de

Behene de ghangor ghata
Behene de paani ki tarah
Saagar mein jaa girna hai
Behene de nadiyaan ki tarah

Shart lagi hai mar jaane ki
Jeena hai toh pyaar mein
Dil kahin bhi ho mera
Jaan rakhi hai yaar mein
Behja behja hai saagar ka kehna
Behja behja hai nadiyaan ko behna

Patte se tapakti boond ki awaaz sunai di thi
Nadiyaan mein tapak aur gum ho ja
Beh gaya beh gaya jo reh gaya reh gaya
Beh gaya beh gaya jo reh gaya reh gaya
Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe
Behene de mujhe behene de
Ohhh
Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe
Behene de mujhe behene de
Behene de ghangor ghata
Behene de paani ki tarah
Saagar mein jaa girna hai
Behene de nadiyaan ki tarah

Mera pal pal ang ang bhar diya
Tune jaan pe junoon saa kar diya
Mera hai kya jo mein haar du
Jaan teri hai tujh pe vaar du
Doob gaye jo suna hai saare
Tere dere aatey hai
Dil ko chulu mein bechare
Doobkiyan ghante khaate hain

Beh ja behja chal todh kinaare ko
Behja behja dhar le majhdhaare ko

Chingari udha ke raakh se
Ek boond gira ke aankh se
Chalne ka ishaara kar gaya

Kar gaya kar gaya sab bhar gaya bhar gaya
Kar gaya kar gaya sab bhar gaya bhar gaya
Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe
Behene de mujhe behene de
Ohhh
Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe
Behene de mujhe behene de

Behene de ghangor ghata
Behene de paani ki tarah
Saagar mein jaa girna hai
Behene de nadiyaan ki tarah

Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe
Behene de mujhe behene de
Ohhh
Behene de mujhe behene de mujhe
Behene de mujhe behene de

Behene de ghangor ghata
Behene de paani ki tarah
Saagar mein jaa girna hai
Behene de nadiyaan ki tarah
he moves to other room………….

And he changes……

And droves to sleep……..

After few days he can sleep piece fully………….

Geet open her eyes……….to find the same room……………….

She rubbed her eyes.

She remembered.how he helped..

She thought of leaving……..

And she quickly run Int o the washroom.

And as she above to move

If  u  girls  use ur brains………………….instead of legs…………………

Then could be useful in falling in trouble…

He mocked.

Geet turned head to find the tall linear structure……………..with crossed legs……….at the door……..

He open his eyes..

And he came to check..as like previous time…………………….he was sure she is going to run from him…..

As expected……………….

He gave a look…………….

Geet lift her head………………………..

And how u go……………….u didn't have money with u………and u r ill……..even……………….u don't know where are u……………………………………

If u have these questions….then u can leave I will not stop……..

And speak…if u have toungue…….as I can confirm tha tim not speaking to doll..

Yeh babaji……inka mood hamesha………ghode par.sawaar hokar kyon hota hay……………………….

I aksed u something………………..

Geet:jee.thank u…………………………..

Maan stunned at her pleasant voice…………

She is beautiful.but her voice Is more beautiful ………..

he turned warned his heart to not to fall.came back to his old style…………….

Dekho..nastha .table pe hay…………..phir bholna kaha chodna hay….mein tume chod dunga……………

With out saying anything……….he marched out……………………………………

Geet shocked……….

Yeh admi yah haa machine………….

Lekin…insaan achaa hay……warna kal raat she again close her eyes………in pain………….babaji.kyo n mere saath yesa.

She openhe reyes quickly as she feared that she may not encountered with one more arrogant look

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