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jab dil mile updated 03/03/2012 last pars epi (Page 7)

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 2:37am | IP Logged
nice update..............maan ka gussa tanda ho gaya.............
geet has become brave..........

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 2:40am | IP Logged
nice update
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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 2:57am | IP Logged
awesome update
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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 10:46pm | IP Logged
awsome update.
bachari Anni...thank god geet save her.
lets see if maan n geet meets.
do continue plz.
love it.
thank u.
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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 1:16am | IP Logged

Geet is in the room………

Just then…………………a car enters into the compound………………..

He came afte r the meeting…..

He went back to office to collect some files………………….

His daily routine…………he was alone after wards………..

He never attend any parties………………

He didn't enjoy any social life……………………………

Just then he found the same flower scent………………………

Same essence……………………

Her fragnance…………..oh no.maan what 's wrong with u………………u met her in the hotel.she is doing her job……………and pls take her from your dreams………………..she is following u every where…………….

Stop it maan…….

And without the second thought.he moved into the room…………………………………which is out house….he will stays………..in out house..he is alone and always like that ………………….

Geet……….looked at her watch………..

And as she move out……………………

She find taxi……………………luckly………it was her hotels…….she thanked babaji………….and at that time…………………….and she enter..and thank s romeo..as he is a true friend……………………..

He then quickly changes.

But geet mind is wandering………

How can be so irresponsible…………………………..if something happends to the girl.her life is mess……………………..

Even she didn't have any strong………….bonding with her……….being a girl………………………….

She didn't understand….and she is busy..with her work……………she came after…………long time………at the mornings………………

as soon as she is returning from her office…………….

She remembered something

Oh god how I forget.that

Geeet ur stupid……………….u know today is pinky 's birth day

She checked the time……

It was…………………..morning 9.00

And she knows that it is the time she reaches her office

Geet:yeh toh kya soch rahi hay………………..

U need to……………go to her office.and wishes her…….and come back….so simple………………..

She saw fresh flowers………………..

She pick up for her………as she know that pinky……………love flowers…but not aware of teeh fact……………………

Her boss……………………..

She is very much excited………………

At that time…………………………………

Maan is getting ready for his office………….

Anee woke up in her room…….

She is feeling dizzy……………

And she got a note…………………..

Note:hai…………..u don't know me……even idon't know u…………………\we are strangers………….but one thing…never do any thing in ur life so that others can take advantage……………………….ur………………filled with drugs………….no there must be problems………………….in ur life,,,im least person to know but one thing……………………………….if u do mistake ……………in your life……….then there is no chance of repent.because ur a girl……………………..being a girl I know……….pls follow……………..the advice….if u feel it really necessary..may be some people……….in your life..also effects it……………………

Anee reads it.and calls nakul…….

Nakul handover rthe drink……………and narrates all the story…

She slightly remembers that she had her regular dose.and she never felt dizzy.that means there is something wrong……………..

And she drank it in one gulp..and she felt better……………………………

She went to the wash room…………………………………………..

She is shocked………………….

On the other hand………………………………..

Geet is getting prepare herself for another….volcanic eruption……………………………….blow………………..

That is………………..msk…..vs geet……………………….

Geet infront of a huge building………………………….

A huge building………………..

Khurana constructions………………………………………………………..

The famous company………………………………………

She enter into the office…..witha  red flowers……..in her hand…………………….in her green dress……………………………………

She is ………………………….with the cake in her hand..teh strawberry……………………………..cakes………………pinky's favourite…..

She smiled the face ……………………………..of brightness when pinky sees this………………………..

She entering in the office as everyone was watching her,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

At the reception……….pinky is not there…………………………………..

And she is confused….ab mein pinky ko kaha doondooo……………she is muttering bumped with a blue……….dress girl….she fumed at her,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

And geet,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,is confused………………………………………..

As she moved back………………………..

She didn't see ………the door.back……….and she slipped…………

With in fractions of seconds….

Everyone hold their breath…………on seeing………….the scene…………………….

Bang……………….bang………………..

Geet is in mid air………….

Flowers are falling from her hand……………………

On the air…with a mix of group of papers………………..

She is in hands.of a……………mascualar………………….peron holding by her waist………………………………………………

And she open her eyes…to find………………………………………….the strong……..dark brown eyes………with fire………………….volcano…………………………………….

Fb:maan is busy in the thoughts of……..his mysterious girl.hauting……..in his dreams.due to that he is   15 minutes late…………………..his client meeting……..so he came office without warning…………as often………………………………………………

He will be on time always.if it is late…………….that means he will attend client and come back………………

So he will not be in office………………………………….

But as soon a she came not noticed that there……..is agirl in green salwar………………with flowers in the hand………he did n't noticed as he is reading file……………………………….

He know this is the path……………..no one crosses it……………………………and he never expects any intruders in the office……………………………………..

With out seeing…………….

He saw she is falling

And he caught…………………………………in the right time

To find the beautiful hazzle eyes………..which is haunting him for nights and day…….

The same strange girl…………..which is making……….him impatient……….now she is back from his dreams to the reality……………………..

Mistake 1:she bought flowers in the office……………….\

Mistake 2 :she entered the office without permission…….

Everyone shocked to finda girl in ………………….msk…….hands………..

That too…………….a mysterious girl…………………….

His anger turned into fire…but still stared…………………………………….at the innocent eyes……………she is so beautiful……..

She is still staring at the dark brown eyes.which had saved her……….twicce……

The saviour………………………

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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 1:33am | IP Logged
lovely update............
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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 2:48am | IP Logged
grt part......love it!!
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Posted: 24 March 2011 at 4:22am | IP Logged
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