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jab dil mile updated 03/03/2012 last pars epi (Page 6)

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The door is opened

A bubbly girl……..saw geet.

And she hugged…………..and said…………….pinky………….

Pinky……………….hugged her……….and on the other side……………

Mr manichanda came and hug geet….

Geet is very much happy with……….her life………………

She open the cup board………….she remembers…………..

She wore dress of pinky…….she thought of buying of new clothes…………………………

She remember all the incidents.

She thought first thing she need to settle in this town……………she need to …………find a job very soon………………………….

She slept peacefully after so many years……………………..

She caught with sleep……………………….with in few minutes………

But one person cannot sleep……………….

It seems she is running from her home……………………….she didn't even know any one here….then why the hell he yelled at her,,,,,,,,,,,

At what is this why im thinking of the strange girl………………….

Due to her.he was late………………………………she is a stranger……….he saved due to humanity…no hard feelings……………………….

He is only…………………..just only.and tries to close the eyes…..the innocent face…………………..tiredness……………..in her face……………………….strains of crying……….like she is crying for years………………………….trembling in fear……………….her scary eyes……..attempt to cover herself………….her touch………………………….

He open the eyes………………………..

 

raba ho rabaaaaaa rabaaaaa rabaaaa

Ishq da galla kargaya Challa Jisnu lag jave hojaye galla [x2]

Jag diya rasma ishq nehi janta [x2]

Dil betab hai tujhko hai mangta [x2]

Ishq ishq rab hai rab hai ishq ishq rab hai

 


and he open the eyes why the girl chases his dreams………………

but she should be fine…….

The firstthink  I need to find out the where abouts of the girl.hope she is not in danger…..

Oh god………….tab gtak muje chain nahii milega…………………….

Next day fresh morning……………………..

A person getting ready.

A huge building…………….

Khurana constructions……………………………..

A long legged ……………red outfit lady is wandering around…

She bumped with a person……..

Adi………..

He is aditya ……………..he is accountant and most trustable person of…………kc

She is sasha….cheif arctecture…….want to be always good looks of his boss……………………….

A pony tail…blue skirt girl…………..says hi.

She is tasha……….

Everyone set alarme d….

Everyone he is coming…in 20 minutes so get ready.

Everyone alarmed….as if ………………………….some volcano is coming………………..yes the most handsome………angry…arrogant…….successfull business person and md ceo of khurana constructions……………………………………..

Mr maan singh khurana………….

No body beats………

He is coming after 2 weeks……………………………

By that time…………

He is wearing………….coat………….he is getting ready……………

He came out of the car.

Adi fumed….where…..is noida project file……..

It is with pinky…..

And where is ……………………………..she

Tasha …she is off……………………..

Just then…………….adi………and other s shocked….to find…..the terrific……….msk……………………….with his body guards…………………………..he is looking…………

Sasha:bring the Mehta an sharma files on my table………pronto.

And adi…………come with the noida file………………………………

With in seconds…….

I want ,meeting…get arrangements….fast…….and move………………..

He comes to his cabin…………….

He tooks the phone….

Yes the details……………………

Can't

Sir photo………………………………………..

Photo.if I have then why u hire u ediots………………….can't I find…………it my own.if u can't then …………….say to me directly…………………..

And he cuts the phone…….

It is past ten minutes………………………………..he is not got the noida…….file.he shouted……………..adi.

Adi.oh n………..abhi ek insaan…..hay jo mere jaan is waqt bacha sakthi hay……..

Pinky.

He called her………………

The phone is lifted by geet….

Hello………….a sweet voice replied

Adi.on the other side……………………terrified………….he checked the phone…..yes it is the same……………

Pinky voice is chirpy..not sweet..melodious………………………….

Pinky whats wrong with u ..ur voice………

Then geet answered.

Geet:this is geet

Not pinky pls be on hold…….i will call her right now……………….

 

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Mein adi…………..i mean aditya………….wants to talk to pinky………

adi:pls save my life it is in danger

pinky:what happened adi sir………………….

Adi:pls noida file………maan sir Is back..

What dd is back…..

Oh no…..shamat agayaa…

Haa.is se pehle vo volcano patee…………………pls……………jalde se……………….muje………………..iss musibat se bachaoo………………………………….

He is still mumering..

Where pinky ran like a marthon to head for FACE the DD of  thee KC

Mr Maan singh Khurana

In the mean while……………geet is wondered is the world such a people who scare like ……….the world………………….he is like a 10 headed ravaan…….he got the description from pinky……

Oh.no.she checked for news papers…for ads………………….

She got one……….that is  the position for house keeping  in a hotel………….

She quickly got ready…………………..and gone for the interview…………………..

The interview run well.the manager impressed by the attitude of geet……so he appointed her…

It was a week………she is working.

As geet has a habbit of working at home……………….

she doesn't look tired even after the work…………………….

She had a two friends………………………

One is anjali……she is a waitress there………

And another is romeo……………….

He is a fun loving guy..always cracks jokes………..and makes other happy…………..

One elder lady………she is also from house department…………..

And mr Mehta.the manager……he is a very good person………………

Every night………..she used to listen to the interesting stories of  pinky s office…………………….msk the dd,and sasha and her antics to impress her boss……and tasha her silly excuses……..and adi who solve the problems………

In few days…..even though she is not working at kc.she is very much familiar……………………..with the attitudes and skills……………..and knowledge……..of……….all the people……………….

She is wonder…………of………….

But destiny had stored different for ………..them.

Maan is not able to sleep

He is wondering of the girl which he saved………

Is she Is not in trouble

Her haunted beautiful eyes……………………..

Scared eyes……….lot of mixed emotions………………

Wrinkles at forehead……and tiredness in her eyes..dark circles………but still.increasing.her beauty….is her innocence……………………….and her…………………face……….

He closed his eyes..

To find her in his dreams…………………………

Maan had  a meeting…………..at hotel…………………skylight….international……………..

He cursed adi…….for…………………meeting…..

He is get ready.

Meeting at 6 .30 pm……………

He is waiting for the client………..

Two waiters are horrified…….as he already.screamed at him………………

He is in very bad mood…………..

Anjali………pertified…………………she already dropped..two glasses of water.

Geet horrified…what 's wrong with anjali………..

She is working in the same hotel..

As she is hardworking….

When ever her duty hours.complete.she even work in restaurant also…………..so her additional job Is waiter also…………………….

Anajli:oh no………………wapas agayaa…….

Geet:kaun ayaa hay…………..

Anjali:are wahi…………………………..kitna hot aur handsome.hay.lekin gussa volcano jaisa………………………………

And the manager called………………………

Delhi ka sab se ameer Adm. Hay who.agar usko inkaar kiya.toh tere zindagi………….barbaad hojayege………..bada clients hay hamara……………………………..pls…………….donot try to create problems……….with him….ok………………….

Geet……..pls maintain peace……………….he is our major client……………..

Geet:oksir I will take care………………

And she gone to him with water….

He is discussing with client……………….

Regarding project..

Geet enter to the table…………………

He is about to bark on her as she is in wrong time……………..to stop the conversation.

As he turned to the site…to bark on her ,,as he stood up…….with his anger.glare………………………..

All are petrified on seeing him,,,,,,,,,,,,

But as soon as he turnedto see the face……….

His anger………………………….seems to be turned down…………………….

On seeing the same innocent creature……………………….infron tof him………………………….

He started staring at her….

Geet:Sir sorry……………………..to disturb u………………………

Pls I forgive us…………………we will assure that…………………there will not be any hassle…………………………and without seeing his eyes.she moved fromthere

Mr khurana…………………client called………..

And he ended the meeting………..

He sat in the car……

Why his heart felt ver y happy after seeing her,,,,,,,,,,,,

No dark circles..she is happy……………..

Her innocent eyes had hopes………………

Her eyes are so beautifull.want to see her for the entire life…

This is first tim…………………….on seeing someone face………………………his anger.melt.

Even that is the shock for the entiree……………………………life……….

He enter into his room……………

That night geet's……………….night duty…………

She is taking in behalf of…mrs Melina…….she is house keeping…………she has 10 yrs old son who is weak………………

And suffering from flu……and geet assured tha t………..she will take up the night duty of………………her……………..

It is  exchange…………..

Geet is in her routine……………….she come across a room.it is for a company……

She is going to enter the room.to keep the things in place.

It is a inter connection room.

Where she heard a conversation…………..

Aaj raat sab kuch hona chahiyee……….

Iss party mein who jaroor ayagee……………..

Aur kal subha ke pehle headlines……………

The great business empire head……mr msk ke choti behen ke hot shot mms……………..

Good job………….raj………………ur a rock star………..

Kitne asaani se….uss anee ………………..kobevakuuf banadiua//

Do not think…………..

She is under drugs………………………..

Geet listened………………….and shee taught she need to do something…to save the girl.

She ran fast.and she bumped with romeo….

She said something to him…

R:geet hey hamara,,,,,,,,,,,,,,kaam nahii hay…

G:romeo yesa mat karoo…yeh kisiki zindagi ke sawal hoo……..woh kisikibehen,beti.hay………………………………..

So donot forget……….

And she thinks of the plan…………………………………..

As she sees………….

A girl………in short dress….her hair is messed up.she looked like………………a  completely drenched in drugs………………………

She is not in sense………………

Geet understood…………………..

But before she could reach the room……………………..

She quickly.with the help of romeo………….she got her to the back door where they generally used by the staf.f……….

As t o their luck the laundary room is empty.

She took the car keys………………

And she made her to sit in the car…………………

And brought her to the mentioned address……………….

it is the big mansion……………….km…………

she is the liitle sister of MSK…..that is………………anwesha khurana…………………………………….

A mid aged person………name nakul old servant of khurana…mansion.suprised to see a girl with his choti malkin……….

She asked the room.

She brought………………her to the room……………………

Geet quickly asked the direction of kitchen…………

She quickly made som e drink…………..and instructed nakul to mix it in water an d made her drink…….in the morning…………………………………

Part ends

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