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Anee returned from her trip

She ran to the room to find his big brother holding geet hands af he leaves she is going to run away…………………………………………

After sometime

Maan woke up and saw his life is stirring he look at the hand and she Is struggling to remove his iron grip

He smiled and kissed her forehead

Welcome to  new life my heart………………….

I will make sure no trouble reaches u as it need to face maan singh khurana………………………………..

He came back to room.

Comeon.maan u need to do something

Geet came downstairs to find all are busy in making some arrangements

Are geet beta kaise hay aap

Teek ho dadimaa yeh sab kya hay

Beta hum ne ek choti si pooja rak wayee hay tere shehet ke liye

With she walked away

Morning geet is restless she felt him in the morning

When his lips touched her forehead a sweet gesture andnow where he is.

Her eyes are wandering

Did he felt stupid as I confes s him…………………………..

What ……………………she didn't remember anything but still faint images of rudraskh words .she closed her eyes in pain

Suddenly rajji came and hug her

She started crying

What s wrongwith both the sisters everytime crying

Vikcy voice

Geet turned to him.and again her searching continues

But anee came shut up duffer kuch bhi bolti ho

Kabi toh apna dimak ka istimal karo warna sad jayaga

Rajji laughed and gave a high fi to anee

Where Vicky glared .

But rajji laughed

Her smile made his life

After sometime geet got ready.

And allare set for pooja

Suddenly nakul drop pooja thali down cracking

Geet looked…………at the direction.

And all surprised to find the mighty msk in traditional sherwani……………….all set for pooja

Dadimaa eyes welled up

After the death of his parents he never believe in god

Geet also surprised and shocked but happy…………………………..
as he is believing in god……………………..

He came and took the seat next tog eet

And after sometime arthi started

And maan did the arthi after long years

G:Geet whispered sir……aap yeha

M Tume jaana hay

G:Haa.are us sure…………………

MOk one condition

G:what

M:u should not run away

G:ok

M:he said loud

I got a deal with him.if he save my geet then I will bow my head in front of him for my entire life

And he saved my life my geet

The minute I lost her I realized how important she is for my life

I cannot breathe without her

Her eyes her smile

I got to know she Is my life

So I just made a deal……………………………………

And he returned my  geet

So its my turn………………………..

Dadimaa stood her mouth open………………………………

What.

All the others.

Where geet cannot show her face as all are looking at them

She cannot run away.

Before she could.

The arrthi is finished……………………………………

And after sometime he whispered geet I love u……..did umarry me

Did u marry ur very own dd…………………………

I mean dust danav,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

That s it

She ran away to control her heart beats

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After sometime

They are set for lunch………………..

Geet did n't dare to look at anyone

He smiled

Where anee start bashing

Bhai……………………………..is the way to propose to my bhabhi…………

Can't u be romantic

No flowers….no proposal.

Directly

So boring mb….

Ha bhai.

He just looked at rajji thinking various way to propose her

Adi and pinky also seeing him,

Dadimaa also said no this is not good maan beta

That s it

Maan got up in the chair

Everyone……….looked a thim………………………

What to do with this girl……………………..

This girl did n't give another option dadii.

What all lookeda t him as he is alien

Yes…………………………………………

U know 1. Option flowers

On the day of office when I brought her favourite red roses……….she gave to pinky for propose to adi.

He gave a  look at pinky and adi

Adi and pinky embrassed.

And second option dinner

I took her ……………..

She talked.about the desert and the meetings we need to held next month

And haa…………………the dresses we need to purchase on.anee s next birthday.

Dadimaa laughed louder…………

And the place.

She always tries to run away………………………………………………

At the roof garden………when Ibrought to farm house

She is thinking of runaway and now she choose the last option which even I cannot run dadimaa………………………….

Saying that she may feel leftalone………………………………with that she left

Then I know only one place where she cannot make excuses,cannot runaway,no intruders………………..rajji…………………..vicky anee dadimaa pinky and adi

That is her very own babaji so I comfronted and proposed in front of him,,,,,,,,,,,,,

He turned and winked at geet which is looking a t him  open mouth………………………………………

She blushed and want to hideaway

If all finished the interrogation

I had already fixed our marriage date next 15 days

All get busy on their works

As I scheduled who is going to do what and which..

Now I made everything clear so disperse.

And last but not the least

I want my dulhan to be in my place…………….so all the luggage is shifted to km………………………………….

For her security reasons also

Rajji also moving.,.

And one morething adi

I want media to know this

I will make public announcement day after tomorrow when we are going back to delhi…………..

At the night geet is looking at stars

Maa aur babuji.

Sab achanak ho rahi hay

Mein unee pasand karthe hoo………

Aur who bhi……….mujse…………pyarr karteh hay

Par mein ne use samaj aye nahii…………….

Just then,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Toh samjovoo naa…………………….

She turned to find maan

Hello mere hone wali sasurji and sasumaa

Mein maan singh khuran a  hoo.

Iss ladki ko tab se pyarr karth a hoo.,.jab  se yeh mere zindagi mein aye

Mein destiny ko belive nahii kartha tha

Leki n ab maan rahi hoo,.

Mein geet aur rajji ke zimmedarri leta hoo,,,,,

In doonoko kabhi bhi koi takleef nahii pounchunga…

Kyon ki jab dil miltha hay tohzindagi milta hay

Mein ne geet ko khone ke khayal se mann gabra jaata hy

Mein wada karthe hoo…………ke zindagi ke har kadam pe mein geet ka saath kada hokar……………………………………………..zindagi bar saath chalunga

Kyon geet saath dogi mera

She cried and hugged.

Geet no more tears……………………………

She smiled in happiness…………………………

Next few days

Huzz and buzz

All kc staff envied that .geet is soon to become geet maan singh khurana

How a small mere girl………..had  captivate d the legend maan singh khuranas' heart

He is no more bachelor

Maan…………………….went to the jail………….

Hai sameera

She is in bad condition

I hope the news got u

Yes next four days

My status is changing and im married to my love my geet

She is the angel to me ..

Now u and ur father all the best for hell.

And he travelled to next cell.

Ur b…………d brother tried to touch my geet……………………..

Yes.

Im maan singh khurana

U made a deal with me……….

I don't want to make her sad on her marriage day….

So ur realized………..

The land and also geet is mine…………

If u done anything stupid I sware u cannot able to breathe

Im giving u realize as ur related to geet.

And im, not going to leave that creep……………………….

As he donet he crime

With that he left.

Next day geet is middle of……………………ladies her hands is adored with mehendi……..

Suddenly a voice

Geetu.

She turned to find churni.

Charni.

She hugged………..she came alongwith guruvindar.

Sthey smiled seeing maan……………….

In the mean time msk is furious as he cannot meet……his dulhan what the heck

How can he able to survive………………………not seeing geet…….

He want to meet ……………………………….

On the other hand

Geet.babaji.unke samne ate hi mera dil zor zore se dhadak thi aursharm……………………………….se paani ho jate hay.

Aur jab naa dekho toh bhi halat karab ho jatte hay

Muje unee ek baar dekha na hay………………………………….

She prayed to god.and quickly dialed the number

Maan is in gym…doing taichi practicing furiously letting out his anger and frustuation……………..as………………..

He cannot see his geet

The phone came back with heavy breathe.

He picked up and said hello

On hearing his manly voice she  took the deep breath

Maan got the sigh

An d after that disconnected.

He rushed to washroom.

And ran towards………………………………….geet room

On the other hand Vicky and rajji had fight over sangeetr,he want to pacify her……………………………….and cool her down.

She too………………..got angry

And in her room

So both the brother of the room…………

Maan climbed first ………………

And he stepinto the room,.

As he listened the voice

Rajji im sorry yaar

U know na how much I love u

U cannot let my gussa on that stupid fight

Baby Im sorry

It is Vicky voice…………………………..

On my little bro in love with rajji………

He smiled.but back to action..

He saw geetcribing ……………………to babaji…………………….

He smiled.and reached she found him about to shout………………………

He put the hand onher mouth………………………………..

Where rajji got the sound didi kya huwa……………….geet.signed maan hand

And he removed

Kuch nahii rajji……………………..woh chipkallu.

Maan glared at her.

Chipkali………………she enter and screamed waking all the members

Dadimaa shouted

Where all gathered

Vikcy got angry glare and with naugty smile

Said chipkali dadi mere bhabi chipkali se darthe hay

Chipkali/./haa dadi bada bade ankhoon walaa chipkali…..size kuch bada hay

He pointed towards maan.

Maan fuming in anger and gave a deadly look to geet……………………………..

And Vicky ur so dead………………

Haa Vicky what are u doing her e.he asked in…………………….authoritative tone

Vikcy calmed everyone……………………………………..

And sent back to rooms

Maan caught geets wrist

And asked chipkali.wait just two days miss geet handa

After that u will be mrs geet maaan singh khurana.then…I will show u what im

With a animalistic look, on his face………………..

She ran away

And he smiled thinking the ways to punish her…………….

Next sangeet and haldi

And at the eveing shadi…………………………….

All eyes envy seeing the most beautiful pair………………………………..

They got married.

Where………………………Aryan jumped into geet s lap and gave her a kiss.

Maan looked  at them.

After some time they dragged along where geet is sat in the bed…………………….waiting for him……………

Her life destiny made her to meet him,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

The right saathi…………..

The right person.

Today she will be his.no fear, no she thanked babji

Where he personally shoved all the girls and enter to his room………………………..

Seeing the sight………………………..

He came to her

I told the punishment…………………………………..

He came pass to her

Her lovely honey shaped eyes her lovely kissable lips

And took them to hislips

And showed her his punishment…………

After longtime

They lay down on bed catching for breathe

Maan………………………………sir.

He glared at her

Sorry maan…………………..are u angry on me

He laughed………………………and kissed on her dump forhead

Where he messed the sindoor…………….

And said jaan……..how can I anger on u

That is my punishment,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,to make u think only about me not anyone else

I know the process is wrong

But only thing I need to distract u

U will cry or feel sad by not being anyone beside u………………………………….

I don't want to see tears

Its ok………….i scared u

U almost forget that ur alone in this world

Not paying anyone happiness as ur heart is filled with my anger.and ur measures to control my anger……………..

Her eyes welled up and said I love u maan………………….

I love u too……………..

But one thing geet u need to learn somemore things

She looked at him with innocent eyes of her……………………….

U need to know the method of thanking me……………………………………

As she is confused bu t next thing she cannot remembera  the Cute M shaped lips hovered on her……..to show how to thank him

The passionate kiss followed by series of butterfly kisses……………………….and

She know after wards the sounds coming from her mouth with pleasure as once again he controlledher soul and body at the same time .with passion and love…………………………………………………..

And moon and lights dare to interefere maan singh khuranas private and intimate moment as they know what will be the result…………………………so they quicklyhide……..themselves………………………..

Epilogue

Afterv 5 yrs

Dadimaa getting ready and she is running…………………and hurrying everyone…………………………..

Geet is infront of mandir.

Where rajji……………………………calling her ,……………

She turned to find her sister………and also dev rani…………in her blue saree…….wearing sindoor and panting as it is 6 th month and her trautams.

And most ridiculous is maan…..

He is over protective of her………………………

He will put everything in her feet.even she didn't ask also

She wonder rajji is being a spolt child her self making both the brothers hell……………….

Andgeet ran to the direction of the voice

Where her lovely nanad………………………………making simran sad n pinkyu life miserable/////////////////

Where NT is looking them in confusion………………………geet came down

Relax anee

And she quickly tooksare and made her get ready in ready.ion few minutes………………………………………

And got hurried to the shout came from Vicky……..as he is trying ti calm lousy rajji.

Rajji kya huwa di.mere anee ke shadi hay aur mere liye nayee kapede hay nay

Aueyeh vikcy ka bacha………….mere teek se………dekhbal nhaii karthe

With their argument,.,,.

A person at the door

Maam.maan sir ne sab ke liye kapde beja hay

It is like whole shop…………..

Vikcy take care of ur wife and make sure she ready in few minutes

…….with that she came out to her room

To find his darling husband is trying to get ready her small……little angels…………………………….

Manyata…………………….and manvi……………………………….

Laughing loud making his father life miserable

Oh papa chib raha hay

Cute manyata complained pouting lips as…………………….

Geet looked ather husband,

B ending to his angels…………………………………..

The strong biceps is turning when he is trying to knot the hair.into a pliat…

How can she manage all these……………………….

Suddenly he felt her breeze……..

The sweet on her forehead………………

Just remind him how……………she smiles witht sweat…when he completes his passionate and strong love making session……………………………………………….

Her uneven breathe and cute smile everymorning……………….including his lovely love bites………………..claming her…………………………

And now also after  yrs she manages to make him loose control and make love to her at that time…………………………there itself……….

She came and took the comb from his hand touching in the process

Making him groan……………..

And set right the plights and make them ready

And send them to their buas room to play with khusi and Aryan.
as she about to go.

What is this mrs khurana………………u had taken to from my hand………………it is amistake the work is halfdone now u will deserve punishment

She turn to find the same mischief and straight eyes………………

Like a prey to wild lion…………………..

And yes…..it is the look on everynight………………………………..

When he sees her…..making her limbs week and surrender herself……………………………………………………..

but feels complete when after finishing his raw passion love and taking her to heights of pleasure……………………………….hekisses her and hugs her to sleep not letting to go even in the morning………………….

He is the person……

Make the world fell on feet

Follow the orders to dadimaa

Annd always makes sure rajji and anee deserves what they get without any delay

And helping Vicky and also dev

After lot of pressuring her and dadimaas request along with simran………….

He agreed for dev and NT

Now they had kid devansh…………………………..

Who is close to her

But she want a boy………………………………………resembling maan singh khurana

Where maan said she never bored of daughter as she want pampereing and if boy geet may admire him.

She smile and said to him  that he will be always her first choice

Today…..

Anee and arjuna re married

And all are very much happy…………………………………..

And phone call

Mrs khurana……………………………….

Yes this is dr shilpa mehra ur reports are positive

What.

She ran and remembered to share the news of arrival of mr jr maan singh khurana t o sr maan singh khurana

Lovealways wins

 

The end

 

 

 

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