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jab dil mile updated 03/03/2012 last pars epi (Page 56)

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Unexpected twist

 

Geet woke up in the morning

She found rajji..is sleeping peacefully.

She woke up and got ready for the nearest mandir

She prayed for the god

And smiled remembering the incidents with maan

How he saved her and his hugs and saved from the water

She is so lost and prayed to god for sending maan to her life……………………………………………..

She is engrossed in her thoughts not noticing that she had missed the route………

She looked sourroundings friegtned.but suddenly a cloth on her mouth and she fell ground unconsciousness .

Mean time rajji woke up and looked for her didi

She is missing

Maan woke up and came down to see her bumped with rajji scared expressions

Maan jiju ji………………..didi apne kamre mein nahii hay

His instics kick in his face fell

What did u check in garden

Yes maan ji I searched her everywhere

I thought she gone to mandir but it is aleady I hour and she returned back.

Im having some bad feeling Im scared

He hugged  rajji no rajji nothing happen to geet

Im here I will find her

He gone out and searched for her

Suddenly he reached mandir

An dfirst time he enter the mandir

He got to his knees

I know I didn';t believe u and I accused u to taking  my parents away

And I thought u destroyed my happiness im anger on u

Please punish me for my mistakes but please don't punish her

She is my life don't take away from me

She believes u a lot please save her I never ask anything but her

Ifu help me in finding her I will remain my head bow down for my entire life please help me to find her

And he up on his legs and start walking in the route……………….

Suddenly rings bell and a small thing attracted his direction it is a ear ring of her

That means he felt something is not right

He quickly called adi

I want the update information of sameera and his father

With in miniutes he got that they ar in jail.and the third degree toture to them they cannot move afinger……………….

He felt relieved..

Next thing…………

Suddenly pinky convo that b…………d rudraskh.

He quickly called aid

Adi I want a information from  HP……..a person named rudrakhs I want his full information

And onemore thing .get the information from some other sources.not from  the police.

With in ahour

Sir.that inspector is new one …………………………….

Rudhrakh is not I n jail.

Ok talk to commisiioner and arrange a special force for rescue  I want them all in here farm house

And he walked in the direction of the eear ring.

He know geet life is in danger………………….

Just first time I get hold of geet is safe then I will see the rudraskh and the scum bag police officer thrown them to hell.

Suddenly he saw geet duppatta

His blood boiled.

And that time he saw rudraskh dragging geet with themn

And he is bending over her

Geet I want to get u at any cost I will make sure I mark on u

As he about to hover her

A strong pull…………..make him touch the ground……………………………………..

He saw the furious eyes

The fighter lion ……………..ready for his prey

FB>>>>>>>>>>>>he saw her payal laying round

Rudhraskh don't know that the power of god helping .

Geet is protesting in her fragile condition

She closed her eyes for only one hope

Maan singh khurana

She want babaji to give her one chance she want to say that she love d him

But may be god is again testing.but she remembered maans words

That the tears areperson weakness she need to be strong

His strength……………..his anger…..

She looked a t the bangles she wore

So start slowly throwing …

Rudhraskh forgot that she isnot the old and fragile geet

She is with maan singh khurana…………………..made her strong

She made herself so strong that no one could break her.

She first throw her payal.

She knew that once maan sir found about her missing he will find her

She remembered how he find out when she locked in locker room then in lift

She smiled…………………..

And she started throwing her bangles……

One by one

It made a route…….to maan to come for his life

………………………….

The thrashing sound and screaming………………..

Caught back her senses

She felt rudhrakhs weight on her

She cried……scremed but not reached…………..

She is in shock to find the weight is not covered instead her dupatta….is covered her back.

And the sounds..

She slowly dropped unconsciousness feeling the safe in the same arms which she always wanted

With a fainted words

She said I love u maan sir and fell back.i nto the darkness…………………………………………..

FB:

Maan see the earring

His institution kicked in

He need to act fast .his heart is beating faster

Need to think….he start to walk

He saw her payal

Another payal.he understood how smart geet had became…………………

She is giving the hint…………..

He felt pride for her he wondered how the scrambled deer frightened for the first time in KM transformed into the tigress……………………………

She remembered how she broke into…………………………miss sherli…………………………………..who turned argument

He acted fast,

And \he reached the bangles.and followed the route to find the shocked  incident

That b………………d touching his geet.her dupatta is thrown away

And she is so fragile but still she is fighting……

His anger blown up

He shoven away and want to kill him.

But felt geet fragile condition

He covered her with dupatta he is carrying.

And lifted her in hisarms

And make her lie against the tree and start kicking rudraskh

Like a terrified …………………………………anger lion.

He broke his hand which touched his geet

He stroked two hard blows on his …..senstive spot fo r laying eyes in geet.make him scream,…………………….that both shots make sure he cannot touch another girl inhis life

He gave a long shot on his back bone no doubt he cannot stand on his feet for years.

After successfully made him limp for his own life giving grave punishment for his entire life for.touching his life……………………..

He want to strangle him for death

But somehow.came back listening to his lifes whispers

His attention shifted from this monster to his life and ran away to carry her in arms

When she whispered love to him………………

He smiled…………..at her in normal cases he crushed her but now seeing her in the condition.

He carried her .

His actions

He called adi………………and medical help

And carried her to the mansion

Dadimaa got worried to see geet condition

But maan curtly replied and carried back to……………………her bed…………….

And made her lie of bed.

He quickly called police commissioner.

And said in famous MSK voice

I want………………..

Rudhraskh and the people who helped including brij handa and his wife in jail………….

And one morething

I want to suspend all the police incharges of HP.

Other wise u know me

Remember.

And he called veer

Veer I need to run another case..

And he given the details

Don't worry buddy I will also make sure he cannot breathe the fresh air except the dark jail………………………room……………..

He cut the call.

And looked the worry faces infront of him.

He explained how rudhrakh had…………………………………kidnapped geet and soon]

And he called pinky and informed that she need tob e with her 24/7.

And also  increased the security

He came back in the night to see his angel is sleeping peacefullu

The drug is quite effective and she will be in semi consicious stage

I n tha t stage she confessed me

 

Now maan singh khurana its ur turn

He blushed

First let her ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,recover………………

And then surprises…………

He smiled and slept at the sofa near her ……………………………………………holding her hand…………………

 

 

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Posted: 25 February 2012 at 12:01am | IP Logged
lovely update
good that maan cam eon time
geet has become realy very smartEmbarrassed
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Lovely update .
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awesome loved it
wow the monster really deserve this punishment 
oh wow surprise 
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