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jab dil mile updated 03/03/2012 last pars epi (Page 54)

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Posted: 13 February 2012 at 2:14am | IP Logged
awesome
lovely part
Maan got what he wanted
Cont soon
Luv
TC
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Posted: 13 February 2012 at 11:41pm | IP Logged
superb update dear
loved it
they were jealous of the poor rabit ROFL
so finally maan got what he wanted
n is happy that he won against the animal LOL
tooo goood
cont soon
thnx 4 da pm
 
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Maan is still lost in his dream

They called for the food…served

Meantime maan busy in staring at geet where Vicky is lost in rajji

Where arjun and anee are not in way

Dadimaa came down and looking  at Vicky

Which is lost in rajji eating but not knowing that there is nothing going to his mouth…………..

Where maan is also busy

Dadimaa came down and looked at both grandsons

I thought only one is fallen

I can see the other also…………

Where rajji is busy in talking to geet not noticing the eyes of geet which is completely lost in her world

She remembered the naughty expression of maan's eyes

And his lips onher cheeks

She cannot help blushing herself

And not able to keep her thoughts

Maan smirked knowing what her thinks

Now a days he is so happy that the other maan is not popping from him.

He is happy

Just then dadimaa snapped………….

Beta I know u love salad but don't u think u can eat better than this………………………………………………….from past hour…………

She said with a naughty smile

And bf don't u think the food need to be in plate to eat ……………

Then both the brothers came from their dreamland…………………….

Seeing their plates

Yes he is eating salad for past hour.

And looked at Vicky who Is staringat empty plate

He bursted into laughter

Causing geet to lift her head…………..to see him laughing

Her shyness , left her and she thought how great he looks.

Her perfect jaws, her eyes……………

And Vicky made a puppy face which makes rajji laugher loud……………………………….

And soon Vicky joined,

Then maan saw geet is looking a t him

And he simply winked at her………..causing her blush a lot………….and……………bowing her head down'dadimaa.felt happy

Seeing his lovely grandson enjoying .

Prayed togod for their happiness

Not knowing the storm going to come………………………………………

And at the stairs.

Geet is looking at stars………………………………..

Thanking babaji and wondering why maan sir kissed her

And what is she thinking.

He is happy today

And whyme,

He isso great and so handsome and every girl could be so

He is so sophisticated and so……………………………….modern girls

Is he aware of the girls effect

Pinky came and hugged…………..adi

Finally………………………………im so happy geet

What happened pinky why are so happy

Did adi sir propose du…………………..

It is like that

He is so happy and through excitement he kissed me

What.

Geet mentally kicked ……………oh babaji mein kiss ke baaremein……soch rahi roo aur pinky

Not knowing that ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,maan is listening to the convo………………..

Just then geet saw pinky blushing

Oye oye mere pinky sharmarahi hay

Haa geet muje adi sir bahut pasand hay unka sweet nature………………………help karne walee attitude

Sab se jyada maan sir ke liye unka wafadari………………………

Maan sir.pinky tum toh unee dd kya dhak dhak kehetee hay na

Aur yesi ke huwaa hay……………….ke……………………………unee itne kushi milee…………………………………

Haa gee t pata hay sameera aur uska baap jail ke andar hay

Kya.

Ha.unoo ne sasha ke saa th milkar………………who metro project keliye bribe diya tha

Aur sameera us company ke partner the

Maan sir veer singania gthe famous lawyer ko appoint kiya aur …….case jeet gayee

Pata hay uss baap aur bte ne khurana parivaar ko bahut barbaad kiya…aur ………………………………..ab maans ir unee……………harakar bahut kush hay…………………………..

She smiled happily………………………….

Ab sab teek hogayee.,,,,,,,,,,

Aur gee  t maan sir bahutacchee hay……………………..

Janti hoo geet tere zindagi mein bahut dard dekee hay

Tuu jab 8 saal ke haya ur rajji 5 tum log ne.apne maa aur babuji kho diya hay

Aur darji sab log ne tume apane ghar layee hay

Malini brij ke bewee ne akar tum e muft ke kaam wali bhai banadii..tere masoomiat aur bhole pan ke faida utana chahii…………………………..

Aur tumeaur rajji ko bahut takeleef huwe hay

Aur uske baad…..woh rudraskh……………………………………………….

Tuj par nazar dala aur  tumse shadi karne ke koshish kee aur phir tune………………..gurvindar aur chunni ke madad se bhag gayee…………………………..

Lekin muje samaj mein ne ataa hay

Ke tum gurvindar aur chunni ke saath.

Pinky

Ekdin mein college se wapas arahi thi

Us din hamere college late se chuta tha

Raaste mein ne……………..ek payal dekha who payal mein chunni ke janam din par use gift di hay

Muje lagaa ke chunni musibat mein hay

Mein ne dekha ki rudraskh useke saath she feared

Jabardasti karne ke koshis h kar raha tha

Mein ne uss samay………………….kuch log ko waha ate huwe dekha

Phir mein ne chillay.

Aur rudraskh ne muje dekhliye

Aur gwon wale use police ke hawale kee hay

Iss baat se malini bhabi aur……………………………………..brij bhai gusse mei  hay

Aur.mere shaadi uske saath

She started crying

But that time babaji ne madad ke lieye gurvindar aur chunni ke bejja tha

Mein e satre ke truck mein waha se nikile thi.

But failed.a s brij bhai ke log mere peeche kar rahee the

Aur achanak se mandir ke ghante bajee aur…mein ne ek jeep ko dekha aur uske andar chup gayee………

Aur kuch der ke baad mein jeep se ..nikal gayee aur ek adme se tak raa gayee

Mene ne use peecha dekha toh wohmere peeche kar rahe the

Muje lagaa who brij bahi ke admi hay

Aur mein nadii mein……………gir gayee………..

Aur ankheen kholte hay

Ke mein maan sir ke bahoo mein hoo…

Maan closed his eyes

And mein ne dekha ke mein KM mein hoo..

Aur tum sab kuch jante hoo……………

Geet too darr mat .yeha .

Haa pinky jab tak maans irk e saath hota hoot oh dil ko ek sukoon miltha hay

Aur jab who mujse door jatee hay toh………………………….yesaa lagtha hay jahaan mujse chut raha tha

Pata nahii yesa kyon laghta hay…………………………..

 

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Posted: 18 February 2012 at 1:00am | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it
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Posted: 18 February 2012 at 2:44am | IP Logged
awesome update...
really loved it...
thank u fr such a lovely update...
waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...
continue soon plz...
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Nice part.
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awesome update
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