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jab dil mile updated 03/03/2012 last pars epi (Page 52)

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superb dear
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nice update

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awesome part dear...

loved it...

continue soon...

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Next day morning

Nakul came down running from stairs as he had seen a ghost………………………………

Dadimaa and gang got worried

Nakul kya huwa tum kyon gabrahe hoo.

Who dadimaa mein ne maan baba ke kamre mein

Kya maan

Kya huwa hay usko

They rushed to be shocked the sight of the room…

All clothes are shattered on the bed…………………

And  maan is like a teenager looking out at his clothes for his first date…………………………..

He is  busy  in throwin g clothes

Where dadi and gang guessed as he is going to pick geet and rajji as it is Sunday…………………………………………………………

He is selecting dress to make presentable

But cannot find one he never gone for shopping and never paid any visit

Is the same maan..he looked at himself in the mirror

The day remembered when he met geet.

Her lovely eyes in pain

Her tremble seeing him…..

He closed his eyes to cherish the moment……………..and thanked god for sending geet into his life

Making his dream come true…………………………………………………..

And he remembered worrying for her..

And next day she came to office with flowers and cake how flowers and papers flow on her……………….

Their moments at dabaa..everything…………………………………………

He got a call.

On seeing it he flashed a beautiful charming smile

Thank u so much veer im expecting such a good news from u………….

With that he left to the house

When he reached the apartment all are looking at him……………….

Ofcourse he dressed in casuals.with first two buttons open

And his chalised body making him look hot.

The door open to find rajji ……………………..looking at him.

Ar e aap andar ayeeyee…………….sir………

Call me Maan jiju………(in mind) but said only maan……..these two girls had ahabbit of calling sir…………. Rajji he said casually

Ji maan ji……………aap mujse badi hay

Conventional answer from rajji

Helost when he sw geet in white dress.looking not less than a angel.

Then rajji looked at maan who is lost in her

Maan jiju……………………smiled and said maan ji chale…………………..

And they left the place.

As rajji sit along with him

Geet on back and maan is looking at geet……stoling glancing and holding his jumping heart want to come out.

They reached……………….Km.where all set for party.

Rajji and Vicky sat along with pinky………………where adi is about to accompain…….maan.in the front seat

Vicky stopped and said.

Are adi sir why won't u sit along with..pinky……………………..

The terror he cannot risk to sit beside………………..the great MSK

He quickly slided to next seat to his dream………….girl pinky

Where .geet has no option to sit with himin the next seat……………..

She sit bowing her head down………………………………

Seeing the …………………….floor of the jeep.

Why she is so much interested.on the jeep floor not on him……………..

All the four at the back enjoying.

Where suddenly arjun came and anee jumped on his bike…………………………

Maan looked at them as they warned

Geet stopped him,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

What.

Sir please don't get angry.due to arjun anee is back

What.

Yes……………………………….when I got know about anee she blabbered on that night that she is alone when Vicky is not with her  and at the same time she also lost arjun friendship………so she start drugs

I met arjun a the college……………he told everything

He likes anee but cannot stand her with drugs

I told him to continue his friendship  as it gives her strength to fight with the bad habits.

So he played the friend role .to bring anee back………………

Sir….i know u don't believe people easily……………………

But still sir………

Sometimes………………..we can believe……….someone…..who can be stranger………………………………………….sometimes can change our lifes the n arjun is anees c hild hood friend.

Maan smiled…………

And moved closer to her……….

Geet trembled want to move back but he trapped.her and pulled her and whispered in her ear

I believe u……………so no need explinations geet he said so husky voice causing geet to tremble

She lost for sometime then came back to senses

Where maan smirked………..

And gave a look a t Vicky who is busy with rajji and adi with pinky………………..

He smiled.

And they reached the farm house.

And geet setted dadimaas room.

Everyone were happy.

Adi and pinky working as maan giving them instructions……………

Are kaha bagoogi……….i will catch u,,,

Trio lookeda thte sounds.where geet and rajji running after arabbit.

And finally.geet catched it and kissed him.

Maan felt jealous of the animal.

It got what he wanted the most

He remembered when he bend on her

It took all his self control to hold back the trembling lips inviting to touch by his.

Oh sweet torture …………..

He is lost.

Didi aap ne use pakad liye……………………….

Both are panting,

Vicky lost in rajji…………………….who is busy in pampered the rabbit.

Now he is also jealous with that poor animal…..getting lot of attention………………..

After some time he is reading some file

Where the jealous animal enter to his roomfor hideout

Where his angel came and running after that.

She got scared as her puchii(the name kept for the rabbit by both girls)

Puchii.not knowing that she enter the lion' den

It spill the coffee on the table and even destroyed the file.

Where maan got angry

Before he do something

Geet covered it and hushed it outside

Sorry sir.woh galti se.she is blabbering

Maan smirked…and got opportunity to take revenge…………………………

And as geet about to move.

He start walking towards her

By that time the puchii jumped out of the window.giving the hero and heroine some privacy.

They continue their walking…………….

As geet is cornered………………………….

And he put two hands side of the wall making her trapped ..

And u wan tthat I leave the animal which spoiled my coffee and file…………………..

Who sir.she is trembling not knowing that fear or his close.encounter……………………………………………….

Sir……………………

She bowed her head down

And he lifted the chin……………to see the beautiful……………eyes…………………

And said

Instead of animal I feel u need to be punished………..

She looked him wide eyes…………………………..

He bend his head………………………and whispered inears

And ur punishment is………………………….and he lifted his sexy fingers brushed on her cheek making her shivering with his touch…………….

And he bend……..and kissed her cheeks……………………………

She  caught hold of her kurthi…………………………………..with her trembling hands

She want to lift her hands

But maan caught it right time and kissed her other cheeks….

He is was so lost in her………..

The soft cheeks against  her lips.the taste of heaven…………………………….

After sometime he left her as the color of her cheeks is deep shade of red of shame………………..

And she runned leaving him enjoy the bliss.

His heart realived the jealous prang………………….from him ……………………………….

And he won against the animal……………………………………..

A smile curved his lips and touch his tips…………………………and close his eyes………………………

 

 

 

 

 

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Posted: 11 February 2012 at 4:35am | IP Logged
superb update dear finally he got wat he wanted lolzzz
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superb update
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waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...TongueTongue

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