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Dadimaa enter into th kids room

Where there are busy……………………..

He called both of them……………….

Vicky concerned hey girl friend what happened why ar u upset

Is ur health ok………………………

Please tell me girl friend

Oh no boy friend im perfect fine

But the thing is

Anee beta Vicky beta tum dono jante hoo mere tabiyat aaj kal…………………lekin beta  I want all the happiness of my kids

And u know ur MB  more than anyone.

I am looking a girl for him.if u both approve.

They both remembered regarding samera……………..and .

They face changed

Beta its ok.if u both approved…………….

Im thinking if geet…………………………………….

And maan.

She fumble d with words

The voice shocked both and she turned to find the smiling faces of grand children,,,,,,,as they heard worlds beautiful news……..

Oh girl friend

Ok…….we all like geet

Geet,as my bhabi.and rajji come along .

Bonus.

Oh my god………………………………….i will be ediot if I reject……………………………and anee.she is top of world……………….

But one thing………………….

Dadi first we need to do some clarifications an d tests then we can go for conclusions

For that we need ur help.

Ok dadi lets us plan……………………..

Maan enter KM.he is still inthougths geet thinks of him…

And he.

Not knowing the curious faces looking at him,,

Dadi winked at Vicky..and anee

And she started

No Vicky means no.how many times I told u to not to waste on these and concentrate on studies……………….

She said in a huge tone shocked maan,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

He looked at the puppy face…made by Vicky and anee,.

What s wrong…………

Its ok he can enjoy some time………………………

Bhai……I want to go for farmhouse for picnic……………..

Picnic………

He looked at dadi………………

U guys play and enjoy but I didn't have one to company……

Then I had a solution..

Anee said……………..

Why can't we take geet and rajji along with us

Vicky me.and even arjun also accompany us……………………….as there are fields belong sto him……….

I and arjun ……Vicky and rajji will have.

And geet will company to dadimaaa………..

She said a matter of fact

The name geet……………shocked maan …lifted his head……………..and a small twinkle.noticed by all but behaved a s nothing is happened

And geet she will be alone na………….

Vicky popped in………………………………to look the face of his elder who lost in his own world……………

But maan bhai……………he is not in a mood to leave

Don't worry adi will come

The n pinky also come along with us…………………………………

Maan said in………….a line

So ………………………

Maan top of the world the thought of geet 24 hours with him.not a bad idea

 work assigned to adi………..

and pinky busy with…………………dadi……………………………………….

And he an d geet……………….

Dadi smiled the thoughts of her grandson…………………………..

Thinking how resemble her husband……………………………….

She pick the phone

To make agree her future grand daughter in law for so called house picnic…………….

But dadi had different plans

Maan u know what happened in previous days it is not good

And I don't want geet to get pressurized…………………………so if u can call geet and ask her to accompain her………….with us.

With that……………………she lef the dinning table giving a imaginary hi fi to other grand children,

After some time.

In maan's room

He resemb le a young teaneger going to propose his girl friend first time,.

He is pacing round

Dadi and gang……………looking at him

Maan what the problem….call her the second maan popped out

Look im already in trouble don'tput me I n get out…..from here.

Dadi and gang looked a tmaan and wondered whom is talking to………………………

Maan 2 not mood to leave

U know u want to talk to u

Want to hear her beautiful voice

Maan blushed………..

Dadi and gang shocked to the core

Dadi did u see……………………maan bhai is blushing

Shut up monkey we can se e that

They start fighting

Dadi told them to shut up in msk style…………..

Where the convo is still goingon

Come on maan pick up the phone……………………..and call her………………and aske her to come to farmhouse for picnic…………………………..simple

Ye s maan as simple as that ……………………….

Hetook a deep breath…..and di dsome excersise like he is going to give speech.

Then with nervousness he dialed the number……………………….

But unfortunate to him the phone lift by………………………his saali..

Hello……………………….

As the voice startled he accidently switch the speaker phone

He muttered dam………….

The other voice little bit high…………….hello……..

As he about to cut the phone the other sound………………….kaun hay rajji………………..

The voice……he loved the most the sweet.music to his ears.

Kaun hay rajji iss waqt……….aur to ab tak apnaa khana katam kyon nahi kiya…phir se who movie………………..kitni baarkaha hay,.ke khana katee waqt kisi aur par dyan mat dena………..

Ab chup kyon hoo hamesha chitar patar kathi hay,..

 Uffo di…………break.dijeye………………………………………lagtha hay apka dimak kahii aur hay koya koya saa……………..

Nahit toh mein toh khana pehle hi katam kiya tha…….aurTV toh band hay………………………….

Di kal se aap parishaan hoo.sab teek ho na…………………..

She fumbled…………haa rajji.lekin tum phone yesinkyon………….pakdi huwee hay

Pata nahii koi awaaz nahii arahi hayu 2 baar baj chuke hay………..lekin awaaz nahii ararahi hay

Ok mein dekhte hoo………

As she took thebphone

Geet its me……..

Maan voice startled

Sir aap………………………….

Haa geet who muje tujse ek baat karne hay…

Jee sir sheis busy in hide her nervousness,

Maan smiled prob she ………….fidging her dupatta end……..

He smiled.

Who geet dadi Vicky anee sab chahtee hay ke tum aur rajji………………….

Hamere saath………………picnic ke liye farm house chalogi.toh ….

Toh……………….

Dadimaa aur sab ko achaaa lagegaa.

Satyanaash ho yeh tere.

Dadimaa Vicky anee shaadi karegaa use yaa tu

Tujse kuch nahii ho saktha ……………..

Geet shocked .

Maan sir asking her to accompany

She thought it is good occasion to share his problem.

Ok sir…

Iwill come along with rajji………………

She is completely lost………………………..

Maan put his phone down and close his eyes

Maan u need to do something before things out of control and this heart makes u crazy…………………………

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