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jab dil mile updated 03/03/2012 last pars epi (Page 5)

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Posted: 17 February 2011 at 8:21am | IP Logged
awesome
continue soon

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awsome part.
cant wait for the nxt part.,
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He came back to the senses…………………………………

And another second…………………………….

He is still………

He checked…………….the pulse…it is dropping down……..he came out…………..

As it is going to be morning……………

He lifted her and drove back to the hut……………..

He called for help………………………….a  person open the door…………………………………….

The person welcomes in…………..

He checks the girl.and gives him some medicines………………………………………………

He tooks her and brought to the big mansion……………………………………..

With a name……….written………..it is khurana…..mansion………………………

He enters and with a  carrying ………………..into his out house……………………………………

As he puts her in the bed………………………

Winds blows and duppatta on her head………….flows and

He shocked to see the face………..

The most innocent face…..he ever seen………………her white face like a moon light

He brushed off the thoughts…….no maan there is no place for u for girls….these innocent face and innocent looks destroy…………………….the life…………………………..

And he moved intothe room…………………………

Geet open the eyes…………….

Tofind in avery big room.she is little dazzy…..and ……….she looked at her dress..it is messed up……..

Next day morning………….

Maan singh khurana……….

A person with lot of attitude………do everything what ever he wants……………………….

He saved the girl…..due to humanity nothing morethan that…..

His life revolves round only one olderly lady…………………she is savitha khurana………………….

His parents died on accident………………

At the time of death..he promised that he will take care of his younger siblings………both…………..vicky and anee……………….

Vicky.his younger brother………………………..had been into wrong people……………..he is addicted to drugs.

He was into the business and work……….so he didn't pay attention…………….

Due to this anee also left him and went to………………..london.

With his one mistake ………he believed sameera………….the most dangerous woman on the earth………………………..she wanted to marry him for money………………………….

She cannot succeed……………….as maan got his plan .and he dragged her out of his life..

He stopped smiling..and he always maintaineda  safe distance for girls…………………………he knows that woman are problems……

His grandmother tried her level best to agree for the marriage…but he is very much recluant……………he  never want girl in his life……………………

Where ……………as……another brother.dev………………………..

He had…………………married a girl………………..in which maan unaware of the fact that she is sameera 's sister…….

He hated her for core…..as she also married his brother for property…………………..

Maan had removed them from the mansion………………………….in order to save the remaining……….property which is managed……

This created hatred for his younger brother…..to fall for evil trap…and run away from him…………

He is trying level best to……get back to him…………………………….but his trails are veins…………………..

He always upset…………he always……………….stays from his home…….

He came to find his brother…..and also…………….land deal……….for his new construction.project………

The land which belongs to geet……………………as brij and malini wanted to sell……………..

And due to this .malini managed geet to marry rudraskh…………..

She mamaged to sell……..the land………………..but cannot marry geet…..to rudraksh…………………………but she failed.as geet run away from the mandap…………………………

 But u nware of the circumstances…….

The destiny planned for the both………….

As geet is life with maan………….

As both are aware of…………….

This is game………………..

Going to start……………..the new journey name life

Let us see what happens next…………………………..

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Posted: 22 February 2011 at 5:31am | IP Logged
nice update.....
continue
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Posted: 22 February 2011 at 7:13am | IP Logged
amazing ff.............cant wait to see things unfold in their life.................cont soon.............
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Posted: 22 February 2011 at 10:23am | IP Logged
Luved ur ff just read all part in one go. Will u plz add me in ur pm list n update soon.
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Posted: 23 February 2011 at 6:26am | IP Logged
nice........con soon
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Posted: 02 March 2011 at 1:35am | IP Logged

Geet open the eyes

She is scared………………….and she remembered that she fallen in lake.and some stranger picked her up……………………..

And the person bought .here what is the place………..

Why is she…………………here….

She felt happy as she is free from the world…………………..into her new life……………………..

She had never feared of life…

But she need to thank the person which saved her life…………………..

She thanked to god.

She came out.

It is a small house……..connected to a big mansion………………..it is like a palace………………………….

She feel like dream………….

She enter the mansion.with her lower steps…..she heard sound………..it is the payal sound of own…………………………..

She scared as when ever her payal sounds…………darji.used to……………scare her with the looks………………………..

She feared at stopped at the moment………………….

She move ahead…………………………………

She heard some…………sounds………………

She scared……………

And hid behind the wall…..

She is middle of the room.

The sound is the practicing…………………of maan……who is doing his tai chi…………….

He is shirtless………………..

He once again failed…………..

His anger………………………………..showed on the chair……….he broked……………she grasped remember the anger brij used to show on their old furnature……………..

She scared………………..

Maan suddenly felt some presence…………….in that room.and he heard the payal sound………

Geet grasped………………..before she could run……………..she slipped and a strong hands..caught her…………………..

Geet open her eyes as she didn't hit the ground…………..

She saw the dark brown eyes with lot of arrogance and anger looking at her………………….

She lifted her self……………………………….

And he asked still holdingher……

What the hell ur doing here….why u came here……………

Look I saved u because of humanity…..nothing more than else.

Now leave before my anger reach its stage………………

Geet feared………….at his arrogant voice………..

And she ran from there..without…………seeing back……………………………..

He got a call from the office……….

Ok I will be there in 20 minutes…………………………..

And he moved into his room………..

Geet ran from there……….

Kitna ajeeb insaan hay……itna gussa kyon…..are mein toh unee ………….thanks batane ke liye……………………….ayee tha…………yeh kya tareeka.baat karnee ka….but she felt happy……….babaji.pl acche insaan hay………samaal………..na………..ok..ab kya karoon……………..and she remember channi giving the address of…………pinky……………………..

Address:…….no-12…………karwadi……………….

Ok…….and she came from the haveli……..didn't see the photos………………….she ran away from the house………………………….

And she enter into the taxi……………………………and get in………….

Maan came out of the room…………….

His mind…………………….

Thought..why did I shout at her………..she may not the one which ur thinking of.maybe she came to say thanks……..and she seems to be an innocent village girl…………………

Innocent village girl.what the hell probably for her runaway boy friend………………………………………

Stop thinking about her maan…..you are not the one which run out of the problems…..u have lot of work …………focus maan……..

But still he feared of safety…………………………….

With in his thoughts he enter into the biggest……………………….construction company………his own company……………………………………..he had lot of companies…………………..but kc has its own image……………

His empire……..

No wonder he is the king…………………………………….

The office…………………………….

Sasha:his top artectect……………………………….the talented………….employee daughter of munshijii………….one of the………………..most old employee of kc…………………………..

Aditya:adi…………………………..the accountant…………………………….

Tasha:assistant to sasha….she is modern girl……………………………………….

And all others………………….

Geet exit from the taxi .she touched the bell……………….

A chirpy girl…………………………….open the door on seeing geet.she shouted geet and hugged her..

She is pinky manichanda…………………………..daughter of mr manichanda……….

And she work as receptionist with kc…………………………………………..

The destiny begins…………………………

New life…………………. 

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