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jab dil mile updated 03/03/2012 last pars epi (Page 4)

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awsome update.
plz..stop this wedding.
do continue plz.
thx.

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part 7

 

Geet is getting ready

In a few minutes…her marriage is going to happen………………………………….

And she is in thoughts………….

She Is  like  a dead cell…………………….

At that time suddenly a sound from the window

Geet

Geet turned back to find charni…………………

Charni
:chalo geet..tume yeha se bhaag na hay…..guvin ne saari tayarri ki…….pls…………….

geet:yeh to kya kaha rahe hay charni.bhagne……….pata hay darji sab ko kitna badnami hogi………

charni:chatto geet….yeha tere zindagi katere men………too insaan se nahii ek khooni pyaasi………..daride se said  kar rahi hay.woh tujse sirf badala lene ke liyee.shaadi kar raha hay………………………….dekh men tuje aag men  khoodne ke nahii Chad sakthi hay……..dekho zindagi ne tujesaas lene ke liye ek m oka diya………………………..agar tu yeha se bhag jayagee.toh tu apna padaai kar ke apne zameen wapas kareed kar sakthi hay…………………..

geet:zameen wapas.kardena……….yeh kya .keha rahii hoo………….

Charni:haa geet.shayad tumee pata nahii……yeh zameen…………kivi ameer Adm. Ne karedaa.suna hay woh Delhi ka ………………sab se ameer Admi hay………………..

Aur haa………..

Kya…miami ne kaha.hay..ki agar mein ne rudraskh se Said karlee.toh woh zameen muje wapas degii……….

Charni:are zameen…………………………….uske bikari.kab ka ho chuki hay……………aur haa………agar mere baat ka yakeen nahii hay………..toh woh insaan abhi bhi.hp mein hay………………..

Geeet………yeh sab sochne ka waqt nahii.hay……..humne apne jaan jokat pe dalke.sirf tuje bachane ke liye…

Tere pass….sirf………………….2 gante……ka waqt hay…………..

Isse pehle tume yeha se bhagna hay…………dekho…..tume mere dres s pehenle……..jaldi se………..she closed the door………

And inside the bag…..she removed a clothe…….

And she know s in a storage room….there is a route to escape……….

She dragged geet to the store room……………

And with in the window……

The two girls made a escape……..at that time…..rajii.came into the room.calling…..geet 's name

They turned…………..

Rajji:didi aap bhag ne wale hoo…………

Charni:haa………rajji….pls..

Rajji:are charni didi……………..geet didi..ko eh kaam pehle karna hay………………….mere sweet sister……………………ko who saitaan nahii…kisis prince charming se shaadi kar nee hay……………..

And she sees her mother is coming in other direction….

And she slowly covers with red duppatta……………and ………….

Charni.and………….geet moves into the storage room………..

Where geet s completely covered ……………herself with duppatta.and her dress.is churni……color…………

So it is hardly anyone recognizes her………………

She covered bcause her mehendi………….may create havoc……

That is the reason.

Gurvi:geet and charni…………hhumyeha tak tere madad kar sakthe hya…………………

Abhi.shaam ko 6 baje ho rahi hay…

Bus pe toh nahii jasakthi hay………….

Ek truck hamesha………..santroo.ko lekar………….jaati hay……….

Tuje…usee se jaana hoga…………….

The time is running ut………………..

And geet managed to get into the truck………and other side………………………….

Brij and family found out geet is missing……

And he turned into anger……..

He wanted to kill geet…….and get rid of her.

Hp.he started roaming into the jeep..

Geet look at the jeep……………..

She is terrified……………………

she donotknow what to do………………………………..and at that time…………………………she almost caught……………..at that time……………………………

brij jeep and truck……………….

The mandir bells ring…………..

And suddenly a jeep comes in between………..them……………………..

He is maan…………………………

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I NEED PM OF YOUR FF



Edited by maansee - 11 February 2011 at 4:23am
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awsome update.
thx.
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Posted: 11 February 2011 at 8:26am | IP Logged
nice cont soon

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awesome
just loved it
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Next part

 

Geet is confused………………….

And suddenly the jeep stops the  truck……and everyone starts ………………………..searching………..

But they didn't find anything……even the person is surprised……….he knows that there is a girl in their truck……he is managed…………………….but he feels relaxed and also worried where the girl is…….

As anyone hardly knows where geet is….

She already……………ran from the truck………as the truck stopped and she saw brij and his men………….

She quickly jumped and run into the bushes……

She is running……….

She donot know……………..at that time she reached the dabaa……

And some weird people looking ather ………..

She sensed the danger.and run from there…………………

And suddenly she caught by some people.

She start running…..and bumped with a thing…..

Later on she realized that it is not a thing it is a person……………………..and the person is not reacting…………………………

He is disturbing mood………….

And she start running away from them……………….

And suddenly the person realized something and he start running after her……………..

And the people running at them…………………..

The person…….starts yeh uu stop………….

But geet is no mood to stop…..

She turned to find the person is open his jacket………………………

And she moved back

The person asked to stop…………………

She is running………until she reached the edge……………..

And she suddenly she fall in water…….and he too jumped in water and caught hold of her…………………

She lost consciousness …………………………….

Flash back….

Maan jeep stop at the mid point…..

He came to dabba…………..to get some water for his jeep…………

He suddenly bumped with geet…………

But geet hugged him tightly.due to this her chair stucked with…………..his chain………….

And it went with her…………………………

When he realized that his chain was missing

It is the chain where his mother and father  last thing with him.……………….photo in it……………..it is with him always……………………….

He wants his chain back…….

He ran after her……..

But geet thought he is also……………member of the gang…..

So she start running…….and edge fall into the water……….

Maan lifted the girl…………..

He carried…..out………

Wow what a trouble.

When his jeep stopped…………..he checked the engine.it is so hot………………

He is……………so angry..he is on fire.

He saw dabaa……

He asked for water…..but the person is so rude……….he told him totake water.from the pond nearby…….

He went to the side

Suddenly he bumped with a  girl……….which is running in a ramdom direction……………..

This jerk made him to leave the can…………in his hands……….

She hugged him so tightly……………………

His chain strucked with her chain………….and he asked her to stop…………..but she didn't …………………

he saw she is edge of the pond…..and exactly that is happened what he expected…………………

she falled in water………………………………..

and he lifted her up….and saw her lost senses……….

He is confused……..

So he get back to the jeep……..

He open the kit………….

And carry his stuff…and prepared a tent and also

And carried her to the tent…………..

To make her warm…………………..

He didn't see her face……..

As geet is altime covered herself with long dupatta………

He could see her eyes………………….

And he turned back to find her eyes……………………they are so bright………………………………………………………

He wanted to see her face in light…..but brushed off his thoughts……………hecame back to his senses…………………………

 

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