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jab dil mile updated 03/03/2012 last pars epi (Page 39)

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Geet smiled…………………………..

Seeing the face of the owner

As he is in shock.to see the person who is outside the world…………………….

Sir…………………………………..

Mineral water

Geet wishpered sir yeha par who sab nahii miltha

Napkins…………………..

She wondered

Cannot able to control her laughter she laugh louder

Maan again lost in her smile

Just then maan 2

Oyee…………….

Too joker kab se bangayaa.

Joker…he looked at ………………………………..him…………..

Ab normal insaan nke tarah behave kar nayeee prince ke tarah……………………………….

He smiled.

And before he asked some stupid questions

Geet ordered some food

Maan lookeda t the food as he is seeing some alien

But he need to be normal……………….

The food is nice……………………..

But it is spicy and he cannot stand spicy

He started to cough.geet got frightened.and suddenly she came before and made him drink lassi.

She caught hand in this process

He looked a t her

The second maan is doing dance…….

He is surprised…………..

After some time.sir are u ok she asked confused…………………………………….

He pay the bill……………………………

They left the place………………

It is the best dine after so many days

They reached the site and worked for long time……………………………………….

After some time ……………………………

Geet drossed into sleep

And maan stared a the sleeping beauty

Geet u look beautiful when u laugh

I want ur smile always onur lips

Sorry I hurt u …..but I promise…………….

I always make u happy.

They reached the hotel…………………………………….

He enter the room.

Geet enter the room.

She is waiting for long time.

His room is adjacent to the other side

Did he have his dinner inorder to……check………….

She enter the room.

But his room is locked…..

May be he gone out.

Even she didn't order food………..

At the night geet woke up

She checked for other room,but it is locked

He didn't came where he is

He is at bar.

She came to the reception……….

And she called to his number

After some rings he picked up…………………..

Hello sir

Hello

He is completely drunk

Sir……………..maan sir

Yeh babaji h e is drunk

And after some time she find out…………………………him.

He is totally drunk………………

She caught himh\

He is fumbling

She made him to lie on the bed…………………..

Akhir tum apne aukaa t mein agayee.naa tum……….

Geet looked a thim shock.

Tum bhi unnladikyon ke tarah hoo…………………….joo apne masoom aur.bolee chehre leke………………………..

Mujko bala pushurakar…………mere daulat hadap ke bagna chahtaa hoo……………………….bolo………………………………………

Tum jaise masoom ladki……………………….ke natak karke ……………………………………..

She cannot.take his words………………………………………………..

……………she ran away to her room………………………………………..

Next day morning……………..

He open eyes………………

His head is heavy…………………………………..

Just then bell rang………………………

He open the door.to find waiter with lemon juice in the tray

Along with a  note

He open the note

Sir………………….i need to go im leaving……………………………………

Geet………………………………….

He took the juice

He went to shower

Close his eyes

At the afternoon after meeting

He is very happy he thought of spending some time…………………….with geet

He enter the room.to find a envelope

He open to find th e shock.

As geet Is talking to someone……………………………..is the person from competitor company…………………

And handover a envelope.

He want to ask geet for explination………………..

Just then he saw her…..she is the same.how can he forgot her.

Once again.

He called geet number bu t it is switched off……………………………..

Then a person came…..with letter

The letter………….

He read it and throw on the dust bin.

And he move towards bar.

And start drinking

On the other hand geet didn't know what happened……………………….

She cried.a lot.and decided that she should be strong and be independent………….

For her and also rajji………………

Next day morning.

Maan enter office in a foul mood…………………..

He called someone.

And adi enter………….in the office

He know there is something going on the office………………….

He saw geet sad face.

After few days

Adi discovered some weird behavior in sasha .

She is happyh.lll

And talking on someone s phone…………………

So he decided to keep a eye on her..

Next part

But geet is same

She decided to notn tom come infron t of maan.

And maan also start avoiding her

He donot want to disturb dadimaa.

But dadimaa found some fishing…..

Geet want to find the truth.

So she told adi about his behavior…………………………………….

So adi and geet decided of the plan…………………….

 

 

Part 2

Geet in office

 geet is working on something

She is not smiling……..

Just then….adi enter………………………………………

And she bumped with sasha……………..

Sasha dropped the phone.

Where no one noticed that pinky……………………took her mobile

And handover to adi………………..

He took it and after some time

Alarm alerted……………..

As maan came back from his tour .

He attending some work in Mumbai

Want to avoid geet completely…………………

He enter the office he lookeda the binds and didn't found her

He knows she is avoiding ……………

His heart saying tobelive geet

But his mind……..says to not to believe her……………………………………..

He is working on something…………

Suddenly……………………..he got a voice mail.

He open to find some voices

He fumed in a nger

Along with some photographs.

The telephone conversation……

Yes you will get the money…………………………..

U had helped us to get the contract…………………………………………

And ur the one who had took money from us…………………………

And how did the great .msk fooled by u………………………

Don'tm worry he will never doubt me.i had shifted all the blame on a stupid girl working in our office

She is so stupid……………….and his past………..

I know that is a why this emotional plan…………………………..

Ok listen…….don't act oversmart

And the photos u exchanged urs with that girl.

And the letter…………

Ur genius.

I know

Ok…………………..

With that the phone hanged……

That means geet is innocent.

And I bashed geet.

Oh no one more mistake

His heart won

But once again.

He felt bad.

On the other hand……………..

Geet ison phone………..

Sir……………..please I need this job…

Please………………..

As soon as he saw maan…………………she cut the phone.

Next day…

Vickys and anees  birthday….

NT came down to find rajji and anee are helping…………………………for nthe preparations……………………………………………

Geet came.

NT looked a t her.

And she said

Anee u should not trust stranger s……….why are u treating them as part of family………………….

They are working for us.

So better they should know their limits.

Geet looked down

Where rajji is about to speak.geet looked………………….her.

She knows there is something inher eyes……………………….

She remembered dadimaa words

Beta…please…………for my sake please stay for some more time………….

U can go after Vicky 's and anee birthday………………………….

Dadimaa.mein apke liye kuch bhi karsakthe hoo.lekin dadimaa.mein yeh kabi bardaasth nahii karsakthi ke koi mere charcter par ungli iutayee…………………………………….

Is liye………………………………………

Mein nahii chahtee hoo.rajii ko mere wajah se koi dukh hoo…………………

Isliyee……………………………….

Teek hay beta………..

She also told rajji also……………………………..

She knows her didi had hurt…………………………..and pain in her eyes………………

But she did not want to ask questions.

Just then pinky came……………..

Ok…………………geet.howis ur new flat………..

It is nice………and residential place.

I hope we didn't have any problem……………

And geet what about ur new job………..

Im searching.in few days Im going to get………………………….new one…………………………………

Geet………………..

Why are u leaving……………………….

She cannot answer the questions

Why babaji everytime u always test me pinky

First my parent s leave me and rajji in this world…………………………………….there after brij bhai aur malini…………………………bhabi…..ke torture………..aur uske baad who rudraksh.badi mushkil ne kudh ko samala  me ne.aur ab.

She cried a lot…………………………

But later on she consoled……………………………

On the other hand maan is feeling………….so bad…………………………………

He again broke the trust………………………………..

At the evening…………………………………………………

He came home it is vickyu and anees birthday………………………………………………

Rajji also maintained a distance between……..vicky anda nee

Which is irking vikcy…………………………………

On the other hand dadima is sad…………………………………

She knows geet was hurt badly…………………….

Once again maan hurted her………………………………………………

Maan reached the mansion to find the party in thehouse…………………………………………

The party is full on.

But geet is in her room

She is wearing some dress.

She knows she need to leave this house tommorrow………………….

Yeh Hosla Kaise Juke,

Yeh Aarzoo Kaise Ruke - 2

 

Manzil Muskil to kya,

Bundla Sahil to kya,

Tanha Ye Dil to Kya

Ho Hooo

 

Raah Pe Kante Bikhre agar,

Uspe to phir bhi chalna hi hai,

Saam Chhupale Suraj magar,

Raat ko ek din Dhalana hi hai,

 

Rut ye tal jayegi,

Himmat rang layegi,

Subha phir aayegi

Hooo

 

Yeh Hosla Kaise Juke,

Yeh Aarzoo Kaise Ruke - 2

 

Hogi hame to rehmat ada,

Dhup kategi saaye tale,

Apni khuda se hai ye Dua,

Manzil lagale humko gale

 

Zurrat so baar rahe,

Uncha Ikraar rahe,

Zinda har pyar rahe

Hooo

 

Yeh Hosla Kaise Juke,

Yeh Aarzoo Kaise Ruke - 2

 

She held her breath

As it is new beginning………………………………………………………..

 

 

 

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