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Rajji chalo deer ho rahi hay aur pata hay kal muje kahi jaana hayh

Lekin didi kal……………………………

But seeing geet face she understands

Ok didi jaisa aap kaheen………………………………

Next day morning

Dadimaa observed thatboth girls are sad.

And they went somewhere……………………..

Just then.rajji came along with a  packet in her hand.

As maan and geet left morning……………………

Dadimaa saw the packet…………..

Kya baa thay beta tum dono parishaan hoo.

Kuch baat hay kya.

Jee aaj…………………maa  aur bauji ke  barsi………..hay

Kal didi se poochne ke koshish ke muje laga didi kaam ke chakkar mein bhool gayee

Lekin didi ko yaad tha

Isliye muje mandir beja thi…………taaki mein unkaa prahsaad collect karoo………………………………………………

Aur muje boora lag raha hay.ke didi itne important din ko bhoolgayee……………………………………………………

Lekin who hi bolti hay ke

Kaam sab se jyada upar hona chaheyee…………………………………………………

Aur kaam may bhi bagwaan hota hay……………………..

Isliye thoda upset hoo…

Dadi surprised at this girl…………………………………

It is her sanskaar…………………………

On the other hand.

Maan is busy in staring session…………………………………………………

Just then inner voice

Oye gadee…

He looked  round to find a distant image of him..little bit causal dress.looking at him.

What are u doing

And who are u

Im u………..idoit

Maan………………

Maan was me………….

No….it sme…………..

Whya r estaring .;and u didn't do much after that

What do u mean maan hurted.

Oyee oyee………..kya plan kiya tha…………….geet se baat karegaa…

Yaa sadoo shakal banake…………use dekhtee…………………..rahegaa

Maan 1 was angry

And maan2.and haa.tumara gussa ego apne pass rakha.mera saath nahii……………

Ab jaldi kuch karoo.warna muje kuch karna padegaa

Kya karegaa tu.

Kya karunga.with in a minute he start tickling.and the car start going different directions and stopped at once;.

Where maan is breathing heavily

Which brought geet to open her eyes

As she woke up early.she cannot sleep.;as it is thesad day happened where she lost everything…………on thisday she did not want to comeout but she always respects her work……..and maan sir words hetrusts her

She did not want to break the trust so.she came along she knows rajji mood also off……………………………………

So……………………..she is busy in thoughts not realized when she drozed into sleep…..

Not knowing the double role of maan J

With him and himself…………………………………………..

And the car stopped with panting maan,

Sir all u alright………………………………………………

Helooked a t her

First she is the one for all these……….

Yes……………..

And now her cute and innocent face asking are u alright

How .can i…………………………….

Sir…………………….

Maan sir…..

Geet asking repeatedly

I think there is a probl with thecar…

He openthe door to come out other wise he is going to get mad………………………….

He smiled.

And it is not a dejected place.

And there is a dhaba.

He remembered that nether of them had breakfast.ofcourse of his stupid plan.

Geeet lets us go there and eat.

Sir here.

She pointed the place.

She knows him.

Haa geeet mein yeha why what is the problem.

Sir this is dhaba…and the food is completely unhygienic.

And u…….here

She is completely confused.

Sir…………………………………

Maan is lookingat her

First time.she is opening up///////////she is talking more of a work……………

He smiled.

Good work maan step 1………..

He just looked at the dhaba……yes it is truly not his style………nor the ambience

But now his beautiful dream with him,,,,,,,,,,,,so he need to do this.

Why geet we are human beingsf .and whyu do u think I can't t enjoy food ehre……………………..

Let us go.my stomach is grumbling.

Geet is shocked……………………..

He sat at the bench.

It is too small..where about to fall.

Geet is verge of smiling but controlling hers elf

Where all ar elooking at them,,,,,,,,,,,,,the person in the suit…………………

Then next question geet stomach churned to laughter

Did I get mineral water here…………..

Maan asked innocently……………………

Precap: more of dhaba………………………………………..

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