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lovely update
cont soon
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nice update
 
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Maan closed his eyes in frustuation………………………………

He didn't trust her………………………………….

He looked a t his hand………………………..

He scanned the whole party

No where…….geet…………………..

He move and bumped with sasha

Sasha is top of the world…;.

Mk did u like the party na………….it is so awesome I made all the arrangements……………………….she is blabbering

 But didn't notice the restlessness in maan's eyes

He is scanning.

He came out a nd looked for driver……………………………..

He called driver

The driver informed that geet madam had left with Vicky baba as she is not feeling well…………………………………

He came back and told adi to take  care of party

And said a quick bye to mr Mehta and ran towards the car……………………….

Sasha look bewildered……………………………….

Geet ran back to theout house whe vikcy…………………

Fb:geet came to the corner

At that time she got a call from rajji………………

She informed rajji that she is coming back.

Where rajji asked vicky's help as shefelt that her sister is not well…………………….

And soon Vicky came in his car and took……………………geet with him……………………………..

Maan is driving..

His mind is wandering

How can I hurt her…………………………how cannot I trust her she is the person who changed Vicky and anee

Is she the same person brought smile on his dadimaa face…………………………………….

He closed his eyes

And he stopped a tteh mansion

Looking  at the outhouse

The lights are off……………….

Just then he enter the mansion to find…………….rajji bumped with him.

The water In her hand fallen down….

Maan looked a t rajji

So sorry sir.woh garam paani lene aye thi who didi ke haat meinchot lagii hay

Didi kuch n ahii bolege……….

Who pehle hi yesi hi thi.jab bhabi unke haat jaan bhooj kar jalathiti tab bhi who chup chap kar apne kamre mein soo jaathi thi.
who mein dekh kar……………………………

Maanm remembered his grip on her wrist……………………….

He is in pain……………………………….

Rajji wen t to the mansion

He came to the window

Heis looking at the window.he want to see her……….he want to hug her sooth her the pain but today he gave the pain…………………………………

The next day…………………

He came out…………….but dueto luck.the window is closed……………

He went for work out.

He remembered pinky words……………………………………

He broke the ice………………………

He looked at his hand

He broke the ice with his hand

Blood oozing out.he destroyed all………………………..blood is all over

He called nakulto clean everything.

He went to shower……………………………

He came down………………………..at the breakfast table

Maan what happened to ur hand………….

Nothing dadi.work out karthe waqt lag gayee……………………………..

U should ……………….take care of ur self beta……………….

He turned to find rajji and anee are coming.

Theya re discussing something……….

Before he could say something

Dadi :are rajji beta where is geet…………..

Rajji:didi office chale gayee hay……………………..

Maan looked…..at her…………..

Uske haat mein chot lagii aur office……..maan asked not looking a tdadimaa's expressions……………….

Chot lagii hay geet ko kya huwa.

Who dadimaa.pata nahii kuch soch rahi thi……………………….ki unoo ne gharma milk pot utaya tha………………..

Yeh sab kab huwa

Jii kal subha koo…………………………..

Maan closed his eyes.

That means………….it is due to him,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

He enter the office…………………………………….

He looked  at her cabin…she is busy insomne file.

Where adi is explaining her something.

He observed her she is wearing long sleeves………

Just then…….pinky enter

Are geet tera dress bahut achaa re…..but to hiss long sleeves kyon pehnee hay.ispe na short sleeves bahut acchee dikthe hay….

She said munching the chips

Maan realized that ……….she is wearing because she want to hide his grip marks…………………………………….

He quickly called her to his cabin,………..

Geet black coffee to my cabi n right now…………………

She didn't glance at him……………………………even though he is seeing her through the binds……………………….

He felt bad.

Oh god she is  not even looking  at me………………………………..

She came in…………………………

Put his black coffee on the table……………………..

She didn't looking  a thim.

She is waiting ………………………

Maan she is standing and not looking.at u………and why the hel l ur not talking…………….

He is reharsling………….

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ossum dear
great
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