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jab dil mile updated 03/03/2012 last pars epi (Page 21)

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loved the update...
hope soon they escape with raji...
pl cont soon
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great part!
cont soon!
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awesome ... loved last 2 updates ...

continue soon ...
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Geet is tensed as  she is moving to the haveli….

A tear escaped her eyes

When she saw the store room……………………………………

Suddenly she hugged maan.

Maan felt bad for that girl………………………………………

Then he looked at a older person with a stickin hand………………………

He is saying something to other person.

At that time a weird person came followed by group of people.

Kya who ladkiyeha kya karne aye hay

Pehle ghar se bhak kar usne hamara  izzaat ke saath…………khele thil

Us din tume us ladki ko marne thi

Maan remembered the person he is the same after geet.

He did lot to hide geet….

They are after geet to kill.

Are they really humans.

He turned to the side to find geet is missing………………….

 

And a weird lady

She is manali wife of brij…………………

He is roaming around. Insearch of geet.

Suddenly he saw geet hugging someone…………..

A girl around 16 yr old……………………….

She is pretty enough

Maan feel she is geet sister.

He made a sound.

Geet turned .

Sir aap yeha.

Mein ne apse kaha tha ke mere peech mat karne ka…..

U didn't left me other option………………………

As she contd to speak.

He came closer and close her mouth with one ha nd and dragged her to the corner which is dark……………………………'geet lost I n his eyes..

Where a srajji stood there knowin g what is happening.around there…………………………………………..

Geet di with this person.

And with in a second .maan dragged geet along with rajji to the next room.

He quickly glanced and he found a window……………….

Sir what are doing……………………………..

Geet asked in wishpers,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Geet if one word u spoke…I will tie ur mouth with ur own duppatta…………………………….

Geet looked at him ins hock know his capabilities of doing so.where rajji look a thim in horror.

And he throw some things down……..

Geet and rajji………………..looked at him not knowing………wha t he is doing.

Rajji…didi who is he.is he helping us or creating trouble…what happpedns…………….if everyone……………………..knows.and all ar e after us………

What we should supposed to do know

Geet not knowing to be happened……

She also looked at rajji in shock…………………

As the sounds in creased all start running to the direction…………………..

Mean time maan dragged geet and rajji out of theroom to the hall…………………………

As the malini trying to stop he pushed her rougly and left the haveli holding geet where geet holding rajji.

And he quickly made them to sit in the car.

And crossed the haveli with out glancing backwards……………………………..

Geet looked at him.

He is not paying any attention.

He need to go to back route there the security will be no where seen..

While dialing.

He quickly dialed adi's number

By that time adi was busy in his fantasy dreamy world with pinky with him………………..

Broke out and seeing the number ……………..he feared.and quickly answered.the phone…………………

Sir………..

Adi mera baat dyan se suno…mein iswaqt hp mein huu.aur ha.

Yeha pe security ka probl hay.tum yeha ke chief se baat karo aur clearly instruct to leave my way if it is required talk to………………..commissioner immediately.

Sir and one m orething.

Inform them that im alone…………………………..

Tha tis particular……………………

Any m istake make them clear that I will drag them to the hell………………………………………..

Hope it is clear.

Now any prob call me……….ok.

Ok sir………………..

Si rar e u alone.

Shut up adi dare to aske me any questions.

He barked on.

Rajji horrified……………….

Geet looked at him…..she is well aware of his tem per.

After sometime.

As per maan singh khurana's instructions.everything is clear.and they are their way to delhi.

He turned to lookback the girls.which ar ecompetely engrossed in sleep.

Both are cute………….

Rajji didn't have same eyes…………but resembles geet……………………………………

He smiled.

No one can be duplicate to geet ha nda.

One geet handa is enough for him……………………………

He smirked forhis thought………………………………

Just gave a look.

He saw geet face it is like tension is relived.

She hugged rajji as if she leaves she may run…………..he smiled for his thought.

Why this pagal ladki make things difficult for him always………………………

He never dare to enter any house without permission.

He even snapped into her haveli.and made a escape plan for them………….

Oh this girl.is definetly something.

But doing something for her make s feel so relaxed

He  just cannot stand tears on the hazzle brown eye.s…..he loves them to smile………………………

Shy………………………….fear…………………………helpless…………………..cherriness…………………………blim in happiness…………….but not…………….with tears………………………………………

It cause s him pain.

Because she is the girl m ake his morning beautiful………..her smile.her mistakes…..her presence always feel different…………

 

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wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! maan took away geet n rajji with him
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thank god they escaped...

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