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jab dil mile updated 03/03/2012 last pars epi (Page 20)

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awesome update.
love it

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oved the update...interesting they will b travelling to hp..
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i had problem with my os

so i upgraded it

so this took time

sorry for delay

i will update soon

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i had problem with my os

so i upgraded it

so this took time

sorry for delay

i will update soon

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waiting for ur update...
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Geet  closed her eyes

She boarded the bus…………..

Her mind shifted to flash back……….

A 8 yrs old girl running after a 6 yrs old girl.

Rajji ruk………yesi bagoogi…..mein tume pakad lungi…………………

No di aap muje pakad nahii sakthi hay………………

At that time…….they saw some people surrounded by their house

Saw their parents laid down…………………….

Soon their life changed and they are brought to……………………handa haveli and their life changed.

She always take care of rajji as a father and mother

And she cannot afford to…………loose her ………………

Tears flowing from her eyes…………..

As she about to get down the bus.

Some guys spotted her

Are yehto wahi ladki.hame kuch karne hay………………………………

And he called someone.

As geet felt some body following her

As the person going to caught her hand…………………..

Within a swing.

A strong hand on her waist and a hand on her mouth…………………

And the dragged to the corner………………………

Words stucked at her mouth.

As she about to scream………………..

Stopped the strong intense eyes……………infront of her

He slowly removed the hand…..

And she wisperedmaan aap yeha

But his concentration on the people finding them

'he slowly dragged to the car.

She started .saying

Sir…………..maan sir……yeh aap  kya kar rahe hay………………………..

Shh.

Chalo mere saath………………….and he started the car.

And parked at the outskirts…..

Sir kaha jaa rahe hum………….

Sir…mein apse………

Geet hum delhi wapas jayengee………………………

Sir……………….

Muje yeha se……………kahi nahii jaana……………..kyonki………..

Muje…………yeha ek jarori kaam hay

Dekhoo……………

Muje tujse behes karke apne time waste nahii karne hay

Suno tum mere I mean dadimaa…………..ke responsibility hoo……………………………..

Isliye mein tere jaan…………katre mein dalsaktha.aur waisebhi……………………………

Sir.mere baat sun lijeye

Nahii sir mein apke saath nahii aa saktha …………………………………………………

Please sir……………

But he is not bulging………………….

Sir.muje mere behen ko bachana hayh

Mere wajah se who musibat mein hya aur mein apnemaa buaji se wada kiya hay ke marde dam tak uske raksha karungi…………………..

Aur mere behen ke alaw mere iss duniya mein koi nahii hay.us ke saheli ne bataya hay ke who wahi karne jaara hay.jo……..unoo ne……….mere saath kiyaa.hay.

She is blabbering………………..

But maan is not listening.

But at that time.suddenly a young man called geet.

Geet turned to find……………..guruvindar……………………….

The Punjabi person came front……………………

Guruvindar tum.yeha.

Geet ek dost ne tuje dekha.aur pata chala ke tum yeha hoo

Who unlogo ka peeche kar raha tha.

Lekin tu achanak…………………..gayab ho gayee thi.is liye mein ne tume bachane.yeha agaya……….

Chal yeha se………

Nahii guruvindar muje rajji ko bachana hay.

Tu uske tension mat lena

Kaise na leloo.maa bauji ke baad rajji mera sab kuch hay.

Agar use kuch hogayaa toh mein kabhi kudh ko maaf kiya.

Usdin mein akele jaakar…galti kee hay…………….muje use……………….bhi apne saath…………………

Nahii geet.tension mat lena mein ne ek admi ko handa haveli mein rakha hay

Lekin geet yeh kaun hay

Guruvindar yeh mere boss maan sir hay

Aur maan sir yeh guruvindar hay………mere dost………………..

Maan didn't like geet with someother person…………………

He felt jealous

And they enter into a house

When a lady around 19 yrs……………………came there

And geet hug her……….calling channi…………………..

And maan felt relif as guruvindar…introduced his wife………………….

And they chatted.

And maan is stucked .

Next day morning.

He woke up from a bed………………..

And saw geet is sleeping in the other small bed.

Her dupatta is flowing.

A smile crossed his lips…………………

He felt what is there in this girl.

At first she behaves like a small kid playing in rain.and playing with kids………sand another time she will be extra careful with dadimaa health and do lot of mischief things with………………..vicky and anee……………………….and he remembering crying little baby for her sister……………….

He smiled…………………………..

 

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awww..amazing

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