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jab dil mile updated 03/03/2012 last pars epi (Page 19)

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Geet enter the mansion to find daadi ma……….

Hurrying and running giving orders

Nakul……………..room saaf huwa.hay………bachee arahi hay………………samal ke…..

Vicky and anee also running……….

She tried to stop………………..vicky and asked something.but he is busy….

He didn't answer..

She didn't find maan.

Nakul.woh rasgulla tayaar hay na.

In mean time there is a car sound.

Dadimaa like running……

Geet turned to find…

A cute girl of 5 yrs running and hugging dadi……………….

Along with him a 7 yr old boy.smiling,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Just then.

A very cute lady and her husband entered…….

And anee called simii didi………..

Vicky and anee hugged…………..her.

And they both touch feet of dadimaa…………..

Kush rahoo beta…………..

Dadi maa turned to geet

Geet beta….yeh hay………………….

Simran.hamare bade poti……………..

Just then.are dadi………………….baba kaha hay…………

Wah didi,yeh pe hum hay aur apko apni baba ki pade hay

Just then.

Maan enter calling didi…………..

She hugged maan saying baba.

Kaise hoo………………………………..

Geet shocked………

The lady is calling…………..maan singh khurana baba…..

She start smiling louder

Just then.

The two kids.

Aap bade log hum ko introduce nahii kiya.maamu……………the little girl is khushi……….and the boy is Aryan……………………….

Hai khushi………………..

Before geet could say anything..aryan came to her and she lift him up and he kissed her cheek and said hai beautiful.

The sound made maan to look at his 7 yr old naughty nephew…………………….

Geet first surprised.then showed him othercheek.he kissed there………………………..

Maan looked at the scene……………………

Simran.is very nice lady and his husband raj loves them  a lot.

And geet is well mingled with kids.\

Anee, Vicky and geet played with all kids.

They played together………….

Maan just watching them………………………………………

It was evening.

And geet is watering the plants…………

Aryan is feeling boring is no one is playing

As Vicky is busy with khusi 's painting

And raj has gone out………………….

Where as anee and simran busy with dadi chatting……………………..on shopping………………

Aryan………………..looked for maan…………………..he is busy with the work.

He got a playing pipe……………………………

He filled with water…………..and threw.

It accidently fall on…maan's

Maan fumed in anger and started running after Aryan.

And Aryan…………………ran and hide behind geet………………….

Geet shocked.and find maan……………………with water on his face…

She cannot control the laughter……………so she started laugh louder.

Maan first lost in her smile.

First time she is smiling…………………………….

Aap yeh kya halat banadiya apne

She is laughing louder………………………

Maan fumed in anger.

And he took pipe from geet and poured water on her

She is completely drenched………..

Suddenly his eyes flashed on seeing geet in wet dress

Her pale yellow dress is drenched acting like another skin to her

The wet cloths……..

Maan completely lost……

Not realized that Aryan……………………….took pipe from maan's hand and poured on maa n and also geet………

They start playing with water………………..

Vicky and khusi came out and find.maan and geet playing along with Aryan………………..

And they are playing and laughing………..

They shocked to find maan……….playing with them…..and laughing louder

Dadimaa, simran and anee came out to find the scene

They felt so happy as..after many years.he is laughing……………….like old maan…………………..

Whom they used to play……………………………

In mean time……………………..geet running away from Aryan.

Suddenly slips………..

Maan looked at her.

And said geet..and caught her in his arms.before she fall………………….

Water flowing from his forehead…..and to the hypotonic eyes……………………….

But his eyes on her

Her beautiful face surrounded by water droplets………..

Wet hair lock.

Both are lost in each other……………………

Mahi eye lock……………..

Vicky noticed…………..

That there is different scene………..is going on.

He sighed loudly.

And Aryan shout maamu…………………………….

He came back.

Geet also came back to senses………….

But cannot move…………………….

As his hands ar estill in waist.

Simran looked at daadi with a meaning full expression…

She also smiled………..

And she whispered.yeh hay tumare baba ke dulhan…kaise hii hay………….

Simran….perfect…………………………..maan a padegaa..dadi…….khurana khandaan ki badi bahu bahut sundar hay……..

What next.

U know ur baba…………………..we need to sort this matter out.

But dadi.bahut khusi huwa baba ke muskaan wapas agayee……………………………………………..

Acchaa hame jaldi kuch sochna hoga……………………..

They turned around to find Vicky lost In thoughts……………………..

He remembered a girl.

He woke in the morning to find giggling.

He reached…………….the window ,,,,,,,to find a girl smiling and playing with kids……..

They all playing with water…

Her smile…………

Anee poked him.

What's wrong bhai.aap kaha koyee hoo.

Vicky put hand on his hair……………………….

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They both come back to senses

Suddenly geet felt something..

She felt very happy as maan laughter………..

She smiled for the thought………….

Yeh babaji inee yeh hasee rahee…….

Suddenly he looked at geet..who is staring at him with a smile.

He smiled back……………………………

This causes some different sensation inside her and she turned different direction……………..

And she went back to the outhouse…………..

She closed her eyes…..

To find…maan eyes.

She open eyes quickly……

Yeh kya hora he hay muje…….kyon maan sir ke chehre muje baar baar dikh rahe hay……………………….

And she sees him in the garden…………………………..and his smile…………

Oh geet tu pagal ho rahi hay………………

She cannot able to sleep……….she remembered all the incidents with maan…..

Lifting her in his strong hands……………..and their close encounters……………….

She smiled…………………………..

When ever he touches or talks………………..she just want to stare at the big eyes……..which give orders…………………

Next day morning………………..

Dadimaa..told her to call maan………………..

She went to his room.to find maan practicing his tai chi…………..

He cannot forget her…….

Her smile……….her face…….everything………………………….

He is not able to concentrate ………………….on his tai chi..his mind is wandering in the confuse state….jab se geet mile…tab se………………..hame uss ladki ke alawa kuch nazar nahii araha hay

Kya ho rahe hay mujko.

Geet felt breathless with his form.his well toned body.his movements.

She hid at the pillar…………………………………

And watching him while hiding……..

Yeh babaji…………….yeh to yeha hay.she cannot breathe properly………………..and agar ussko pata chala ki mein……….inne yesi dekh rahi hoot oh.pata nahii yeh gussa karenge………………

At that time maan distracted……………………..due to payal sound of her………………………………

He turned around to find her duppatta……….

And whispered………………………geet,

And he stood up and went near the wall………………….

But geet start running.

But he caught her…………………………..

Due to his sudden appearance……….her heart beats start rising and her chest heaving ……………..

He caught her and pinned her to the wall………..

Tum yeha…………….it is sound like wishpers………………..

Maan……

He looked at her…………his name on her lips so sweet…………….

And sorry……………maan sir……..dadimaa aap ko bula rahi.hay

She is trying to avoid eye contract.

Strange….

He always liked her eyes…it is filled with lot of emotions.

He loosed his grip.

She ran  away from there…………………………………

Yeh muje kya ho jaate hay………..he put his hair on frustuation……………

Of two days.

He is observing her.

She is trying to avoid him……………………..

She is dared to not to look at him…………………..

But he saw her face something is different………………………..

Next day……………….

Morning.she got a call………………….

She looked t the number

Hello didi……….

Geet rajji………………………….

Didi….woh muje bachalee……………..woh…..

Her phone cut off………..

Geet.suddenly feared..

Yeh babaji.kuch gadbad hay.rajji teek hay na………………………..

Ya phir bhabi phir se…………….koi nayee chaal chal rahi…………

Yeh babaji shayad ab rajji ke zindagi….katre mein hay

Nahii.muje rajji ko har haal mein bacha na hay……………………

Lekin isliye muje hp jaana hoga…………………………….

Who bhi kal………..

She ran to the mansion..

She is completely lost in thoughts

Dadi and simran observed..

Her mind is in fear………………….

She called ashram…but………………they informed that rajji is not coming to ashram from few days………………..

She called rajji's old friend simi.

She informed thata rajji is house arrest

Just like her………..

Oh no jaroor rajji kisi musibat mein hay.

She is crying……

When.maan saw her.

What 's wrong with her.first she is avoiding……….and then………..she is crying……………………………

He want to ask her………………………………….

Yeh babaji please mere behen ko bachalo……..muje usee akele nahii chod na chaheyee……..woh log.sab.achee nahii hay………………………………………………

Pehle……….mere zindagi aura b ……………rajji ke zindagi…………………………………..

Mein kya karoon,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

She hurriedly..nahii,,,,,,,,,,,muje wapas jaana hoga.apni behen ke zindagi barbaad nahii kar sakthe……….

With that she start packing………………….as she need to leave at the night……………………

She already took permission from dadimaa…………

Maan saw her leaving the mansion.

He asked chandu and informed that she is going to her village for some work.

She didn' said to anyone.

And he only knows …….that her life is in danger.

And now this girl want s to go back to the danger…………………………….

I need to save her……………

With that he left in his jeep………………………………….

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