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jab dil mile updated 03/03/2012 last pars epi (Page 15)

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Geet  closed her eyes

She boarded the bus…………..

Her mind shifted to flash back……….

A 8 yrs old girl running after a 6 yrs old girl.

Rajji ruk………yesi bagoogi…..mein tume pakad lungi…………………

No di aap muje pakad nahii sakthi hay………………

At that time…….they saw some people surrounded by their house

Saw their parents laid down…………………….

Soon their life changed and they are brought to……………………handa haveli and their life changed.

She always take care of rajji as a father and mother

And she cannot afford to…………loose her ………………

Tears flowing from her eyes…………..

As she about to get down the bus.

Some guys spotted her

Are yehto wahi ladki.hame kuch karne hay………………………………

And he called someone.

As geet felt some body following her

As the person going to caught her hand…………………..

Within a swing.

A strong hand on her waist and a hand on her mouth…………………

And the dragged to the corner………………………

Words stucked at her mouth.

As she about to scream………………..

Stopped the strong intense eyes……………infront of her

He slowly removed the hand…..

And she wisperedmaan aap yeha

But his concentration on the people finding them

'he slowly dragged to the car.

She started .saying

Sir…………..maan sir……yeh aap  kya kar rahe hay………………………..

Shh.

Chalo mere saath………………….and he started the car.

And parked at the outskirts…..

Sir kaha jaa rahe hum………….

Sir…mein apse………

Geet hum delhi wapas jayengee………………………

Sir……………….

Muje yeha se……………kahi nahii jaana……………..kyonki………..

Muje…………yeha ek jarori kaam hay

Dekhoo……………

Muje tujse behes karke apne time waste nahii karne hay

Suno tum mere I mean dadimaa…………..ke responsibility hoo……………………………..

Isliye mein tere jaan…………katre mein dalsaktha.aur waisebhi……………………………

Sir.mere baat sun lijeye

Nahii sir mein apke saath nahii aa saktha …………………………………………………

Please sir……………

But he is not bulging………………….

Sir.muje mere behen ko bachana hayh

Mere wajah se who musibat mein hya aur mein apnemaa buaji se wada kiya hay ke marde dam tak uske raksha karungi…………………..

Aur mere behen ke alaw mere iss duniya mein koi nahii hay.us ke saheli ne bataya hay ke who wahi karne jaara hay.jo……..unoo ne……….mere saath kiyaa.hay.

She is blabbering………………..

But maan is not listening.

But at that time.suddenly a young man called geet.

Geet turned to find……………..guruvindar……………………….

The Punjabi person came front……………………

Guruvindar tum.yeha.

Geet ek dost ne tuje dekha.aur pata chala ke tum yeha hoo

Who unlogo ka peeche kar raha tha.

Lekin tu achanak…………………..gayab ho gayee thi.is liye mein ne tume bachane.yeha agaya……….

Chal yeha se………

Nahii guruvindar muje rajji ko bachana hay.

Tu uske tension mat lena

Kaise na leloo.maa bauji ke baad rajji mera sab kuch hay.

Agar use kuch hogayaa toh mein kabhi kudh ko maaf kiya.

Usdin mein akele jaakar…galti kee hay…………….muje use……………….bhi apne saath…………………

Nahii geet.tension mat lena mein ne ek admi ko handa haveli mein rakha hay

Lekin geet yeh kaun hay

Guruvindar yeh mere boss maan sir hay

Aur maan sir yeh guruvindar hay………mere dost………………..

Maan didn't like geet with someother person…………………

He felt jealous

And they enter into a house

When a lady around 19 yrs……………………came there

And geet hug her……….calling channi…………………..

And maan felt relif as guruvindar…introduced his wife………………….

And they chatted.

And maan is stucked .

Next day morning.

He woke up from a bed………………..

And saw geet is sleeping in the other small bed.

Her dupatta is flowing.

A smile crossed his lips…………………

He felt what is there in this girl.

At first she behaves like a small kid playing in rain.and playing with kids………sand another time she will be extra careful with dadimaa health and do lot of mischief things with………………..vicky and anee……………………….and he remembering crying little baby for her sister……………….

He smiled…………………………..

 

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loved the update...
hope soon they escape with raji...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 02 August 2011 at 9:13am | IP Logged
great part!
cont soon!
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awesome ... loved last 2 updates ...

continue soon ...
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Geet is tensed as  she is moving to the haveli….

A tear escaped her eyes

When she saw the store room……………………………………

Suddenly she hugged maan.

Maan felt bad for that girl………………………………………

Then he looked at a older person with a stickin hand………………………

He is saying something to other person.

At that time a weird person came followed by group of people.

Kya who ladkiyeha kya karne aye hay

Pehle ghar se bhak kar usne hamara  izzaat ke saath…………khele thil

Us din tume us ladki ko marne thi

Maan remembered the person he is the same after geet.

He did lot to hide geet….

They are after geet to kill.

Are they really humans.

He turned to the side to find geet is missing………………….

 

And a weird lady

She is manali wife of brij…………………

He is roaming around. Insearch of geet.

Suddenly he saw geet hugging someone…………..

A girl around 16 yr old……………………….

She is pretty enough

Maan feel she is geet sister.

He made a sound.

Geet turned .

Sir aap yeha.

Mein ne apse kaha tha ke mere peech mat karne ka…..

U didn't left me other option………………………

As she contd to speak.

He came closer and close her mouth with one ha nd and dragged her to the corner which is dark……………………………'geet lost I n his eyes..

Where a srajji stood there knowin g what is happening.around there…………………………………………..

Geet di with this person.

And with in a second .maan dragged geet along with rajji to the next room.

He quickly glanced and he found a window……………….

Sir what are doing……………………………..

Geet asked in wishpers,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Geet if one word u spoke…I will tie ur mouth with ur own duppatta…………………………….

Geet looked at him ins hock know his capabilities of doing so.where rajji look a thim in horror.

And he throw some things down……..

Geet and rajji………………..looked at him not knowing………wha t he is doing.

Rajji…didi who is he.is he helping us or creating trouble…what happpedns…………….if everyone……………………..knows.and all ar e after us………

What we should supposed to do know

Geet not knowing to be happened……

She also looked at rajji in shock…………………

As the sounds in creased all start running to the direction…………………..

Mean time maan dragged geet and rajji out of theroom to the hall…………………………

As the malini trying to stop he pushed her rougly and left the haveli holding geet where geet holding rajji.

And he quickly made them to sit in the car.

And crossed the haveli with out glancing backwards……………………………..

Geet looked at him.

He is not paying any attention.

He need to go to back route there the security will be no where seen..

While dialing.

He quickly dialed adi's number

By that time adi was busy in his fantasy dreamy world with pinky with him………………..

Broke out and seeing the number ……………..he feared.and quickly answered.the phone…………………

Sir………..

Adi mera baat dyan se suno…mein iswaqt hp mein huu.aur ha.

Yeha pe security ka probl hay.tum yeha ke chief se baat karo aur clearly instruct to leave my way if it is required talk to………………..commissioner immediately.

Sir and one m orething.

Inform them that im alone…………………………..

Tha tis particular……………………

Any m istake make them clear that I will drag them to the hell………………………………………..

Hope it is clear.

Now any prob call me……….ok.

Ok sir………………..

Si rar e u alone.

Shut up adi dare to aske me any questions.

He barked on.

Rajji horrified……………….

Geet looked at him…..she is well aware of his tem per.

After sometime.

As per maan singh khurana's instructions.everything is clear.and they are their way to delhi.

He turned to lookback the girls.which ar ecompetely engrossed in sleep.

Both are cute………….

Rajji didn't have same eyes…………but resembles geet……………………………………

He smiled.

No one can be duplicate to geet ha nda.

One geet handa is enough for him……………………………

He smirked forhis thought………………………………

Just gave a look.

He saw geet face it is like tension is relived.

She hugged rajji as if she leaves she may run…………..he smiled for his thought.

Why this pagal ladki make things difficult for him always………………………

He never dare to enter any house without permission.

He even snapped into her haveli.and made a escape plan for them………….

Oh this girl.is definetly something.

But doing something for her make s feel so relaxed

He  just cannot stand tears on the hazzle brown eye.s…..he loves them to smile………………………

Shy………………………….fear…………………………helpless…………………..cherriness…………………………blim in happiness…………….but not…………….with tears………………………………………

It cause s him pain.

Because she is the girl m ake his morning beautiful………..her smile.her mistakes…..her presence always feel different…………

 

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wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! maan took away geet n rajji with him
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thank god they escaped...

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