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jab dil mile updated 03/03/2012 last pars epi (Page 11)

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ur  ff is awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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hi everyone
i met with accident.......................
so not possible for updates
pray for me............for get well................
i will update once i will get well
thanks

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get well soon.
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hey get well soon...
no worries abt the update...
take care of urself
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Hey Srilu...get well soon...like ur FF...when u feel ok please update.
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Awsm update soon plzzz n do pm me plz
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Geet is in mandir…………………

An older lady enter the mandir…….

She is talking on phone…………………..

She is smiling.

She didn't see geet…………….geet also returning not seeing her…………..

They both bumped…

Oh madam……….im so sorry………………..geet scared.as she spoiled her saree..she will shout…

But she smiled…..

Are beta…it is my fault…..i didn't see u.im on phone……………………sorry………………..

No madam………….

The lady saw……….the girl of 18 yrs but maturity of a older girl.her lovely eyes and smile……just like god had specially created her………………

She smiled on seeing her.

Geet observed the old lady……………her seventeens…but yet beautifull………………..the lovely dark brown…..eyes……..resemble someone…………………grace in her appearance…..she must so be so beautiful at the early ages………….

She liked geet on her first look……………….

Next she phoned to someone…

Dekhiyee unke pata lagana………….badi jaroori hay………..apko mein ne 3 saal ka waqt diya….agar unee apne pata change kiya………….janta hoo who gujar gayee….lekin unke family ke mein unke beti zinda hay.hame unke baremein pat a chalna chahiyee………………………………

And she cuts the call..

Yeh bagawaan.yeh kya ho raha hay.hamere saath.

Hamare beta jinke pass sab kuch.hay.par akela hay………..

Hameree ghar bigar gayee…………………koi aisee bejeyee jo sab kuch teek hoo………………

Hamee hamara maan ke halat dekh nahii jaate hay.

On the other side………….geet is horrified…….she forgot that house keys with her…as she forgot to give back to pinky.

And her office ends before her…

And her keys had problem…………….so.she rushed to the kc office…..

Msk is very bad mood…..

As she enter into the office……………………….

Lights off…….

She is scared of darkness…………………..

She feared……….

And she ran to the random direction.

As sh e move she bumped with a hard chest………………………..

She is sobbing……………..

She wanted to scream……………

But as soon as she shout.a person closed her mouth.

She reconigned the touch…………….

The same……..

Maan is coming out to attend the meeting…………..

He came so fast………..suddenly he felt a soft petti figure………..touched with his chest…………………..

As the figure shout.he got she is a female……..and she shouted louder.blow his ears on the way……………..

He got angry…….and shut her mouth with his hand…….

And dragged her to the corner………………

He slowly removed the hand……….as due to the light……………………….

Tum……………

Aap..

Tu hamesha…………………kisi na………………kisi bahane se……………kisi ke saath bump karthe hoo.tumee aur koi kaam danda nahii hay……………

geet ji woh……………….

Woh.she blabbered…

His eyes focused on her…………..

She is scared of darkness………….

Her eyes ar e glittering in the darkness……………………

Her lovely eyes……………………

Her touch…………

His hand on her waist…..

Kya hay iss ladki mein joo mein sab kuch bhool jaate hay………..

At that time………..his phonerang…………….

But his hand is still on the waist…………………………………

He took thee phon.e..

Ha dadimaa.;…hum arahee hay…………..jaldi arahaa ho………….

In mean time geet try to free from his grip………..

Due to this…his mobile slips..\

An d choree muje…………………………..

Dadimaa:maan apke saath koi  ladki hay kya………………

No……………….

Maan said no……

He instantly freed her…………………………….

And………..she ran from her……………………

She ran towards street……………..

And took the taxi…….and ran to the home……………..

Kya insaan hay………………

geet got the phone...it is churni...

geet:ha churnu batawoo...

guruji ka phone aya tha...tere baaremein pooch raha tha...ek bar tu gurjise baat karle 

geet:nahii churni.agar unnlog ko pata chale toh.

charni:nahii geet kyonki...rudraskh jail mein hay...phikar karne ke jaroorat nahii hay.

bas...ek baar...toobaat karle...

teek hay.

and geet tooks the landline and calls to the ashram...

guruji:haa...

geet:sasrikaal... baba...mein...geet...

guruji:haa geet beta...kaisee hoo...beta tunee ek ladka ko.yeha layaa tha...uske e halat mein sudaar hay...uske dimak i halat teek nahii hay..pehle...lekin beta...agar woh teek hogayaa toh unke ghar waloo ke..madad karnee hogi...

geet:nahi baba...woh mujee nadi ke kinaree mila tha...lekin baba mein unke rishtadooroke baare,mein pata karloongi...

and she cuts the phone...

FB:one evening...she is returning with rajii...from the school...

as it is darji instruction to...return from school...in time..

tatoo...as usual...

suddenlyshe find a person lying at the bank...

heis not in good state...

she with the help of rajji...took him to ashram...

and joined him there...

darji and other s know baba...and ashram,,,,,,,,,,,,

so she used to treat..the patients...there...

when she brought...the person...

she has only a locket...

on that three letters...

VSK...

on the other hand...

maan opens the cupboard...and opens  a locket...

in that three letters...

MSK

he remembered that his grand maa.had brought four lockets...like that 

with all the three letters...

MSK:Maan  Singh Khurana

dsk:Dev Singh Khurana

VSK:Vicky Singh Khurana 

ASK:Anwesha Singh Khurana


part ends 

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