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jab dil mile updated 03/03/2012 last pars epi (Page 10)

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Geet is ready

She moved to the table……

It is a small house……but neatly arranged……..

She wondered is the person is alone……..

Why he stays here alone if he has such a big bunglow………………………..

And her questions still on …….

As she find ……….him on the table……one minute cannot take eyes………..

Him in marron color shirt and his office suit.

As soon as she reached………………………..he looked at her with his killer look………….

Oh babaji kya ankheen hay inke……………………………

Sab log ko ankhoon se maarthe hay kya…………………

No doubt pinky is right he is dhak dhak………………..

She is still staring at him……

As she didn't notice …………………….he is also the same..

When she came the anklets of her make sound…………

First he used to think how girls wear them…..but now it is giving him hint that she is here……….

Her …………………..suit.making her alegant.

The twinkling lovely hazel eyes………………………..

The lovely cheeks…the cute face…………….

The person would be fool…………..if says she is just beautifull……

She is angel…..no doubt…………………………

She smiled………….

His heart skipped a  beat…………………….stop to beat..

She is taking my tenses……….

Both came to the world…as soon as the servant bought the food……

She lowered her head down……………………..

She is standing,.

He wanted to control…………so with a straightvoice

Need invitation to join………………..

She looked at him………………he turned his face.to hide his emotions…………………

As……………….the servant served the breakfast…..

He finished with in a minute as he is taking part in ..marathon.

With in minutes he informed that ……………he is waiting for her in the car………………and he will drop her at the place……………………

And he donot want to be late………….

Just like a warning….

Warning to himself….

As the girl is going to drive him insane……………………………..

And he marched..

Geet finished fastly……..and started to run behind him…………………..

Unexpectedly she bumped with the girl……………………

She is the same….girl………….

But she knows she won't reconignse……….

Later she remember  that she is sister of him…………………

Oh no…………………..

And she ran away from her…

And she ran back to the car.

He is waiting.

As she about to back seat…………..

He gave a anger look..

She understood……….and open the front door………………….

To take the seat…….he don't lnow why……………..

Why he gave a look when he take the back seat………………..

He just don't want the driver………………………..

And he is behaving differently………………………………..

And he don't know why………..

Meanwhile geet is…………trying to not to look at him……………………

She is looking at the window.

Her dupatta on the hand brake………………….

He try to move……………

But he saw her..

She is looking at the window.

Ahmm ,,,,,,,,,ahmm..trying to get the attention,,,,,,,,,

Donot know why….

He is not hating the signal today,,,,,,,

Nor the time,,,,,,,

He want to spent the time,,,,,,,,,,,,,,weird……………….what 's wrong with me.she is a stranger……………….and he wants to spend time………….

Have he gone mad.

Suddenly she asked to stop…………

He stopped the car……….

It is the straight…………………road to……….pinky's house………………..

She try to open the lock..

But failed…..

He looked at her effort.

And he bend himself to open……..

On this the hand touch dthe smooth hand………………….of her……………………

He felt electrified………………with the touch………………….

Geet move from there.

As he looked at her ..she vanished from the road.

She wanted to mouth thanks……………….she turned to find car went away.

Ajeeb insaan hya………………….doborra thanks nahii bola….

And she checked the time…………………………

To find………..it is late..she ran towards the house.

As pinky is running………

Oh no today….DD is going to kill me…….im late…………with out saying hi and hello……she ran away to the office……

Geet mean time………yeh insaan mere zindagi ka isaa ban gayaa…………

She smiles and runs for her hotel.

She reached the hotel.

She ran to change her dress.

She greeted romeo and others.and get Back to the work……………

Yesterday was horrible experience for her…………but she remember her words…….

He feel im idiot……………………..

Even he said so…………but internal………..he wants me to take of me.by own………..

He is right………………..is he god or someone…I need to take car e of myself.i cannot be dependent on him everytime…………………………

Yes geet…..

Meantime………….the miss melisaa informed…that………..geet is called by manager….

Manager:geet:I know ur new…………and yesterday……there is…..something…………………

Geet:sir…..i m sorry yesterday…..i t happened………………………………..

Actually.she is fumbled with words.at that time……………mr sundar entered…………………….

He is the bar tender……………….

And he told geet to leave..

Geet is confused..

At that time…………………….romeo.meet geet..

He informed that somebody tried to create a bad mouth to our hotel…………….

And he also said that ur the girl who try to save the reputation……………..and he had evidence……………………………also………………….

So manager is impressed with you.

So donot worry…

Geet is wondered who done this…………………………………

Maan in his cabin.

He cancelled all the meetings………….

He thought of last night incidents.

He knows very well……………………

So he asked adi to call the hotel……………………..and give the details.

He also informed to find the details of the person who tried toattack geet……………………….

He relieved after seeing this………..

Geet is surprised………..

And she back to work.

On the other side………..adi……………confused about his boss

Maan singh khurana……………………he never done this….and this fact that he never done work without any reason……….

He smiled……………unique smile…hahaha…………………………………..

Next day……………..

He got a call………..

The call is from…………his grand mother coming from her friend 's,place…………….

She is after long time………………

He made arrangements for her reciveing……….

He knows very well.

She is the only one who can reach hard core msk's heart…………………………….

She is the key to open….it……………to find………………him…………..

He closed his eyes…………………..

And he left for home to receive………his grandmother

Savitri devi…………….khurana…………………………

Next day…………………..geet is in mandir…………….

She is praying………………………

 

 

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lovely update 
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nice update
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awsome update.
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