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jab dil mile updated 03/03/2012 last pars epi - Page 22

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome part dear...

loved it...

continue soon...

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Next day morning

Nakul came down running from stairs as he had seen a ghost………………………………

Dadimaa and gang got worried

Nakul kya huwa tum kyon gabrahe hoo.

Who dadimaa mein ne maan baba ke kamre mein

Kya maan

Kya huwa hay usko

They rushed to be shocked the sight of the room…

All clothes are shattered on the bed…………………

And  maan is like a teenager looking out at his clothes for his first date…………………………..

He is  busy  in throwin g clothes

Where dadi and gang guessed as he is going to pick geet and rajji as it is Sunday…………………………………………………………

He is selecting dress to make presentable

But cannot find one he never gone for shopping and never paid any visit

Is the same maan..he looked at himself in the mirror

The day remembered when he met geet.

Her lovely eyes in pain

Her tremble seeing him…..

He closed his eyes to cherish the moment……………..and thanked god for sending geet into his life

Making his dream come true…………………………………………………..

And he remembered worrying for her..

And next day she came to office with flowers and cake how flowers and papers flow on her……………….

Their moments at dabaa..everything…………………………………………

He got a call.

On seeing it he flashed a beautiful charming smile

Thank u so much veer im expecting such a good news from u………….

With that he left to the house

When he reached the apartment all are looking at him……………….

Ofcourse he dressed in casuals.with first two buttons open

And his chalised body making him look hot.

The door open to find rajji ……………………..looking at him.

Ar e aap andar ayeeyee…………….sir………

Call me Maan jiju………(in mind) but said only maan……..these two girls had ahabbit of calling sir…………. Rajji he said casually

Ji maan ji……………aap mujse badi hay

Conventional answer from rajji

Helost when he sw geet in white dress.looking not less than a angel.

Then rajji looked at maan who is lost in her

Maan jiju……………………smiled and said maan ji chale…………………..

And they left the place.

As rajji sit along with him

Geet on back and maan is looking at geet……stoling glancing and holding his jumping heart want to come out.

They reached……………….Km.where all set for party.

Rajji and Vicky sat along with pinky………………where adi is about to accompain…….maan.in the front seat

Vicky stopped and said.

Are adi sir why won't u sit along with..pinky……………………..

The terror he cannot risk to sit beside………………..the great MSK

He quickly slided to next seat to his dream………….girl pinky

Where .geet has no option to sit with himin the next seat……………..

She sit bowing her head down………………………………

Seeing the …………………….floor of the jeep.

Why she is so much interested.on the jeep floor not on him……………..

All the four at the back enjoying.

Where suddenly arjun came and anee jumped on his bike…………………………

Maan looked at them as they warned

Geet stopped him,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

What.

Sir please don't get angry.due to arjun anee is back

What.

Yes……………………………….when I got know about anee she blabbered on that night that she is alone when Vicky is not with her  and at the same time she also lost arjun friendship………so she start drugs

I met arjun a the college……………he told everything

He likes anee but cannot stand her with drugs

I told him to continue his friendship  as it gives her strength to fight with the bad habits.

So he played the friend role .to bring anee back………………

Sir….i know u don't believe people easily……………………

But still sir………

Sometimes………………..we can believe……….someone…..who can be stranger………………………………………….sometimes can change our lifes the n arjun is anees c hild hood friend.

Maan smiled…………

And moved closer to her……….

Geet trembled want to move back but he trapped.her and pulled her and whispered in her ear

I believe u……………so no need explinations geet he said so husky voice causing geet to tremble

She lost for sometime then came back to senses

Where maan smirked………..

And gave a look a t Vicky who is busy with rajji and adi with pinky………………..

He smiled.

And they reached the farm house.

And geet setted dadimaas room.

Everyone were happy.

Adi and pinky working as maan giving them instructions……………

Are kaha bagoogi……….i will catch u,,,

Trio lookeda thte sounds.where geet and rajji running after arabbit.

And finally.geet catched it and kissed him.

Maan felt jealous of the animal.

It got what he wanted the most

He remembered when he bend on her

It took all his self control to hold back the trembling lips inviting to touch by his.

Oh sweet torture …………..

He is lost.

Didi aap ne use pakad liye……………………….

Both are panting,

Vicky lost in rajji…………………….who is busy in pampered the rabbit.

Now he is also jealous with that poor animal…..getting lot of attention………………..

After some time he is reading some file

Where the jealous animal enter to his roomfor hideout

Where his angel came and running after that.

She got scared as her puchii(the name kept for the rabbit by both girls)

Puchii.not knowing that she enter the lion' den

It spill the coffee on the table and even destroyed the file.

Where maan got angry

Before he do something

Geet covered it and hushed it outside

Sorry sir.woh galti se.she is blabbering

Maan smirked…and got opportunity to take revenge…………………………

And as geet about to move.

He start walking towards her

By that time the puchii jumped out of the window.giving the hero and heroine some privacy.

They continue their walking…………….

As geet is cornered………………………….

And he put two hands side of the wall making her trapped ..

And u wan tthat I leave the animal which spoiled my coffee and file…………………..

Who sir.she is trembling not knowing that fear or his close.encounter……………………………………………….

Sir……………………

She bowed her head down

And he lifted the chin……………to see the beautiful……………eyes…………………

And said

Instead of animal I feel u need to be punished………..

She looked him wide eyes…………………………..

He bend his head………………………and whispered inears

And ur punishment is………………………….and he lifted his sexy fingers brushed on her cheek making her shivering with his touch…………….

And he bend……..and kissed her cheeks……………………………

She  caught hold of her kurthi…………………………………..with her trembling hands

She want to lift her hands

But maan caught it right time and kissed her other cheeks….

He is was so lost in her………..

The soft cheeks against  her lips.the taste of heaven…………………………….

After sometime he left her as the color of her cheeks is deep shade of red of shame………………..

And she runned leaving him enjoy the bliss.

His heart realived the jealous prang………………….from him ……………………………….

And he won against the animal……………………………………..

A smile curved his lips and touch his tips…………………………and close his eyes………………………

 

 

 

 

 

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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update dear finally he got wat he wanted lolzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear...👏👏

loved it very much...😃😃 ❤️❤️😃😃

thank u very much fr such a lovely update...👍🏼👍🏼

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...😛😛

continue soon plz...😉😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome part dear...😃

loved it...😳

continue soon...😛

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Posted: 12 years ago
thnx 4 pm 

wat he wants he gets it n he got it :)


lovely 


do continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome
lovely part
Maan got what he wanted
Cont soon
Luv
TC
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update dear
loved it
they were jealous of the poor rabit 🤣
so finally maan got what he wanted
n is happy that he won against the animal 😆
tooo goood
cont soon
thnx 4 da pm
 
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Posted: 12 years ago

Maan is still lost in his dream

They called for the food…served

Meantime maan busy in staring at geet where Vicky is lost in rajji

Where arjun and anee are not in way

Dadimaa came down and looking  at Vicky

Which is lost in rajji eating but not knowing that there is nothing going to his mouth…………..

Where maan is also busy

Dadimaa came down and looked at both grandsons

I thought only one is fallen

I can see the other also…………

Where rajji is busy in talking to geet not noticing the eyes of geet which is completely lost in her world

She remembered the naughty expression of maan's eyes

And his lips onher cheeks

She cannot help blushing herself

And not able to keep her thoughts

Maan smirked knowing what her thinks

Now a days he is so happy that the other maan is not popping from him.

He is happy

Just then dadimaa snapped………….

Beta I know u love salad but don't u think u can eat better than this………………………………………………….from past hour…………

She said with a naughty smile

And bf don't u think the food need to be in plate to eat ……………

Then both the brothers came from their dreamland…………………….

Seeing their plates

Yes he is eating salad for past hour.

And looked at Vicky who Is staringat empty plate

He bursted into laughter

Causing geet to lift her head…………..to see him laughing

Her shyness , left her and she thought how great he looks.

Her perfect jaws, her eyes……………

And Vicky made a puppy face which makes rajji laugher loud……………………………….

And soon Vicky joined,

Then maan saw geet is looking a t him

And he simply winked at her………..causing her blush a lot………….and……………bowing her head down'dadimaa.felt happy

Seeing his lovely grandson enjoying .

Prayed togod for their happiness

Not knowing the storm going to come………………………………………

And at the stairs.

Geet is looking at stars………………………………..

Thanking babaji and wondering why maan sir kissed her

And what is she thinking.

He is happy today

And whyme,

He isso great and so handsome and every girl could be so

He is so sophisticated and so……………………………….modern girls

Is he aware of the girls effect

Pinky came and hugged…………..adi

Finally………………………………im so happy geet

What happened pinky why are so happy

Did adi sir propose du…………………..

It is like that

He is so happy and through excitement he kissed me

What.

Geet mentally kicked ……………oh babaji mein kiss ke baaremein……soch rahi roo aur pinky

Not knowing that ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,maan is listening to the convo………………..

Just then geet saw pinky blushing

Oye oye mere pinky sharmarahi hay

Haa geet muje adi sir bahut pasand hay unka sweet nature………………………help karne walee attitude

Sab se jyada maan sir ke liye unka wafadari………………………

Maan sir.pinky tum toh unee dd kya dhak dhak kehetee hay na

Aur yesi ke huwaa hay……………….ke……………………………unee itne kushi milee…………………………………

Haa gee t pata hay sameera aur uska baap jail ke andar hay

Kya.

Ha.unoo ne sasha ke saa th milkar………………who metro project keliye bribe diya tha

Aur sameera us company ke partner the

Maan sir veer singania gthe famous lawyer ko appoint kiya aur …….case jeet gayee

Pata hay uss baap aur bte ne khurana parivaar ko bahut barbaad kiya…aur ………………………………..ab maans ir unee……………harakar bahut kush hay…………………………..

She smiled happily………………………….

Ab sab teek hogayee.,,,,,,,,,,

Aur gee  t maan sir bahutacchee hay……………………..

Janti hoo geet tere zindagi mein bahut dard dekee hay

Tuu jab 8 saal ke haya ur rajji 5 tum log ne.apne maa aur babuji kho diya hay

Aur darji sab log ne tume apane ghar layee hay

Malini brij ke bewee ne akar tum e muft ke kaam wali bhai banadii..tere masoomiat aur bhole pan ke faida utana chahii…………………………..

Aur tumeaur rajji ko bahut takeleef huwe hay

Aur uske baad…..woh rudraskh……………………………………………….

Tuj par nazar dala aur  tumse shadi karne ke koshish kee aur phir tune………………..gurvindar aur chunni ke madad se bhag gayee…………………………..

Lekin muje samaj mein ne ataa hay

Ke tum gurvindar aur chunni ke saath.

Pinky

Ekdin mein college se wapas arahi thi

Us din hamere college late se chuta tha

Raaste mein ne……………..ek payal dekha who payal mein chunni ke janam din par use gift di hay

Muje lagaa ke chunni musibat mein hay

Mein ne dekha ki rudraskh useke saath she feared

Jabardasti karne ke koshis h kar raha tha

Mein ne uss samay………………….kuch log ko waha ate huwe dekha

Phir mein ne chillay.

Aur rudraskh ne muje dekhliye

Aur gwon wale use police ke hawale kee hay

Iss baat se malini bhabi aur……………………………………..brij bhai gusse mei  hay

Aur.mere shaadi uske saath

She started crying

But that time babaji ne madad ke lieye gurvindar aur chunni ke bejja tha

Mein e satre ke truck mein waha se nikile thi.

But failed.a s brij bhai ke log mere peeche kar rahee the

Aur achanak se mandir ke ghante bajee aur…mein ne ek jeep ko dekha aur uske andar chup gayee………

Aur kuch der ke baad mein jeep se ..nikal gayee aur ek adme se tak raa gayee

Mene ne use peecha dekha toh wohmere peeche kar rahe the

Muje lagaa who brij bahi ke admi hay

Aur mein nadii mein……………gir gayee………..

Aur ankheen kholte hay

Ke mein maan sir ke bahoo mein hoo…

Maan closed his eyes

And mein ne dekha ke mein KM mein hoo..

Aur tum sab kuch jante hoo……………

Geet too darr mat .yeha .

Haa pinky jab tak maans irk e saath hota hoot oh dil ko ek sukoon miltha hay

Aur jab who mujse door jatee hay toh………………………….yesaa lagtha hay jahaan mujse chut raha tha

Pata nahii yesa kyon laghta hay…………………………..

 

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved it