DEWANE-E-MUHABBAT/DOSTI(MERIS OS GALERY)ON PG53 - Page 21

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Posted: 13 years ago
heyyyy meri

faaab os
i actuly felt d pain of sajan n esp gnjn...
n d last wrdings of sam was realyyy veryyyemotional
veryyy touchng os dear
thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Meri yyyyy u always do this
such a touchy & emotional os
tumne to mujhe rula hi diya
u know my heart was paining badly
yar plz itne emotional os mat likha karo
hamare dil bahut kamzor hai ase shocks bardasht nahi kar sakte
vaise 2222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222 gud os
thanks for the pm
jaldi se ase hi ache 2 creations likhna
luv
kritika
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Posted: 13 years ago
Meriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii...it was sooooooooooo beautifullllllllllllllllllll
very touchingggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg OS
Luved it soooo muchhh...
very adorableeeeeeeeee luv sjaan and thr nishani aman.

luv u

sara

Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by: Kritianya

Meri yyyyy u always do this
such a touchy & emotional os
tumne to mujhe rula hi diya
u know my heart was paining badly
yar plz itne emotional os mat likha karo
hamare dil bahut kamzor hai ase shocks bardasht nahi kar sakte
vaise 2222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222 gud os
thanks for the pm
jaldi se ase hi ache 2 creations likhna
luv
kritika

thanks kritika n m glad to know that u loved it.......i love stories which are very close to realties thats why i write it ........i dont write usually such os....it was i thnk first try.......mera dil bhe bohhaat kamzor hai tmsey bhe zyada mein yeh os 10 martaba padh chuke n at the end just aik thought whyyyyyyyyy.....lyf is so cruel.....next os wil be a happy one dont wory😉thanks a lot for liking n comenting really encourages a lot.........
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome os
loved it
do write more
ar_sajan4evr thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
edited my rp on pg 29
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you meri .
I had read a sajan ff TUM BIN JIYA JAYE NA . It is also really good .
Your update is very sweet , simple and emotional .
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
😭 omg that was so sad
yet beutiful awsome job
Posted: 13 years ago
                       Kudha janney...
Shergill industriez the number 1 among indian top industriez..Samrat shergill..The well-known businesman owner of shergill industriez in last 5 yearz he got so much success that v.few people get it at ths young age 25 yearz..today was his birthday but he totaly forgotten about it..
Samrat was buzy in his office work ..it was almost 6 oclk..when a peon came n gave him a red bouqet n a red heart shaped card.he was hell shocked while recieving it..he opened card with trembling handz with a hope n a wish to get true...

Hi Jaan.
I know is waqt tmk hath kamp rahe hon ge..ankho mein nami ho ge..dil mein herat aur kushi ka ehsas ho ga...labon pe sirf mera nam ho ga

(Chashmish....he whisperz to himself....kitna achey sye jante ho mjhey..)
Ab meri tarefien karna band karo....yaqen to a gya ho ga na tmhey k tmhari chashmsh wapis a gae..(yup.thats mean u r back.),apna wada pora kiya na(han..tm kbhe apna promise nai torte).wasey yeh tmhare smile dekhney k lea taras gaein hai meri ankhein..(aur mein tmhare smile)..u know mein ney tmhey bohat miss kiya..(.i 2 misd u a lot.samrat as wanted to get knw did she wrote somethng about where she is so thought to skip the starting but stoped as read next)Kabar dar samrat jo tm ne skip kiya.(samrat make a face).i know tmhey bohat besabri hai akhir 5 saal wait karaya hai...aur yeh 5 saal ki judai..(he rembrd those yearz without her..he thought to skip but wasnt able to)...oh mein again kho gae the un yadn mein aur tm ney again socha ho ga na skip karney ka.(uff meri filmi chashmsh)hana..k kitni filmy hon mein.....bohat he zyada batamiz ho..par mjhey bohat he pyarey ho meri jaaann...hayee..(chashmsh k bachi tm pori film ho haad hai jaan pe bani huwe hai mere aur tmhey sataney k elawa koe kaam nai)
tmsey milney ko yeh dil bekarar hai....
terey hansey dekhney k lea yeh ankhein bechain hain...
tmhare bhaon mein smitney k arzo hai...
bus tmhey apna bananey k khuwaish hai...
aur kudh ko tjhey sonpaney k tamana hai..
(samrat was touched with these lines.)..ops..sory sory.ok ok let me serious..par(ugh chashmsh filmi)..acha acha gusey mat ho jitney tm bekarar ho usey khaein zyada mein hon par ab tumney mjhey filmi keh he diya hai..to apni filmi mehboaba ko filmi ashiq k trah filmi andaz mein he filmi jagah pe milo..bye sweetheart..love u n cant w8 for u jaaan..come son tmhare mashoqa bahein kholey tmhare he rah tak rahe hai.....
Best ov luck majnu..tmhare lela bohat bekarar hai tmsy milney k lea...
Tmhari aur sirf tmhari chashmish.

.he saw up n down left n r8 of card but didnt find any line teling about her location.
S:God!chashmsh!ab mein tmhey shimla mein khahn dhondhu??ghar?nai..park?nai..cafe?nai..hmara colege..nai yar ...cinema?shut up dude.filmi hai par itni nai..phr phr ...oh mein kasey bhol gya hmare favourite place..yup..chashmsh i am coming..ab koe tmhey mjsy dur nai le jaye pae ga..
As Samrat runz in coridorz to the main door.every employ got up from seats n get shockedd....he doesnt care for any1..he just want to meet his lyf after 5 yearz...
He smilez while driving thinking about their lovestory...


Sajde Mein Yuhin Jhukta Hoon Tum Pe Aake Hi Rukhta Hoon
Kya Yeh Sabko Hota Hai 

(kitni ajeeb hai na hmari khani..kitna lartey the hum jb miley colege mein pheli dafa.....pranks...punishments..cheating..parties....par hmesha aik dosrey k oponents....Jani dushman..he laughs...God! Chashmsh tm tu meri jaan kha jate the agar mein basket ball mein tmsy jeet jata tha..aur mein tmhare jb music mein tm..wo pal kitney achey the jb pora gang canteen mein masti karta tha..)

Humko Kya Lena Hai Sab Se
Tum Se Hi Sab Baathe Ab Se Ban Gaye Ho Tum Meri Dua..

(the camera moved to a waterfall between two hils...and a girl wearing white salwar suit..the back covered with her black silky hairz.....staring at the waterfall.....
Humari larae he hmari muhbbt k nishani the..hmare 1st valentine night colege k music room mein jb struck ho gae aur phr hmari dosti huwe hum ney sari raat baatein k..aur kitni herat huwe jb hmey pata chala hmare lykes dislykes kitney similar hain..aur pyar k barey mein hmare behas.kitna mazak banaya tha lela majnu ka romeo juliet...pagal kha aur kudh malom nai tha k yun aik dosrey ko dil dey behtein gey...)
Sajde Mein Yuhin Jhukta Hoon Tum Pe Aake Hi Rukhta Hoon
Kya Yeh Sabko Hota Hai Humko Kya Lena Hai Sab Se
Tum Se Hi Sab Baathe Ab Se Ban Gaye Ho Tum Meri Dua..

(now again samrat..kitney achey the na wo din hmare dostii...kitna hmarey dosti sy jelous the clasfelows..ktna misundrstanding create kein par tm ne mjh par trust kiya..
Scene shifts to gunjan.
Aur mein ney tm par..na janey kuin hmare nazdekian bharti gaein..aur hum itney kareb a gae k doorie ka soch k bhe kouf ata tha....) 
Khuda Jaane Ke.. Mein Fidaa Hoon
Khuda Jaane Ke.. Mein Mit Gaya..
Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere dua..

(scene shft to samrat..kbhe socha nai tha k pyar k izhar k bad k juda hon gey...aur itne dur ho jaein gey....
Scene shft to gunjan..she heared the car stoping at back.she heard his stepz..as feel him closer n heard his heart beats..she turned quickly n without wasting tym huged him tightly n he too hugs her passionatly....)

They broke hug n samrat wipe her tearz n she blushed n turned as to go but samrat held hand puled her back n held her 4m waist..n whisperz.
S.ab nai janey don ga dur kbhe nai..
G:bohat yaad kya tmhey in 5 salon mein..
S.tm bilkul bhe nai badli chashmsh..she smilez felt awesum hearng ths name 4m him..she turns n cuped his cheek with her palm...
G.tm bhe nai badley..
S.aur na hmara pyar..both smilez..they stared. samrat helding her both handz....she blushd n moved gaze..he smiled n lift her chin...so Dr.chashmsh...yeh surprise deney ka thank u..wasey tm ab bohat sharmaney lage ho phely....
(five years ago gunjan had to leave with her parents n her dad has wish to saw her as doctor so she left to fulfil his dream.........while samrat fathers want him the most successfful businessman of india so he remain india to achive it.......they remain away for five years with out meeting n talking to fulfil the dreams of their parents........)
Gunjan smilez n then becum closer to him puting armz around his neck..

G.aj bhe sirf tmsy muhbbat karte hon..he smilez kises her 4head..
S.janta hon..
G.happy birthday jaan..she kissed his cheek.....he get surprised n then remebrd it was his bday.
S.tmhey yaad tha
G.kuin wada nai kar k gaye the k tmhari bday waley din wapis a jaon ge..
S.thank u chashmsh.i love u jaan..she blushd hard...
G.i love u 2 samrat.she hugs..after that they both sits..gunjan helding his hand n head rested on his arm while he having arm around her...
S.jante ho tmharey janey k bad aj yahan pheli baar aya hon..jb bhe aney ka sochta tmhare yaad rula deti...
G.jante hon mein tmhey..bohat rulaya hai na mein ney tmhey.
S.ab kbhe chor k mat jana
G.kbhe nai jaon ge.i promise..
S.thanks.
G.tmharey bina har pal katna mushkil tha..tmhare yadon ney kbhe tanha nai choraa...aur jantey ho har kadam pe hmarey pyar ne mera sath diya....
S.chashmsh!!!hm ney apney mom dad k sapney porey kar diye na..
G.han shergil industriez ko no.1 pe ley aye ho tum..tmhare daaad deni padey ge....
S.aur tm Doctor....Doctor.Gunjan Sharma...perfect..
G.nai.
S.kuin?kya matlb?
G.tmhey apna bday gift nai chahye??
S.tm aa gae wapis yahe hai mera gift..
G.sirf mera ana kafi hai?
S.han.kya mtlb?kya huwa chashmsh?
G.mjhey aik aur wada bhe pora karna hai chalo.
S.konsa?khahn?
G.shut up samrat.kitney sawal pochtey ho....tmhari koe adat nai badle,ab bhe subha dair sye uthtey ho gey.
S.nend ate ho ge to sota hon ga na
G.breakfst lunch diner kuch tym pe nai.
S.tmharey bina bhok he nai lagte the
G.oh iselea khaon k itney smart kuin ho gae ho warna phely to itney ...
S.chashmsh mein hmesha sy smarat tha..
G.bus karo samrat jhot mat bolo..key do?
S.tm chalao ge car?ate hai?
G.yup of course kudhe to sekhae the..they sat in car n gunjan start driving.
S.aur 3 dafa car mari..aik dafa tree mein..dosri martba..
G.galti tmhari the kisney kha tha k mjhey tang karo.
S.aik kiss he to k the cheeks aur..
G.samrat..she glared.
S.aur 3rd tym kuta dekh kar steering sy hath he hata lya shukar tha k samney wall the kise aur ka acidnt nai kar diya tha.gunjan stoped car with jerk...chashmsh
G.utro.
S.kya?
G.han kha na utro bahr ao...she 2 came out n he 2 ..
He saw mandir.
Gunjan held his hand n take in..n adresd to a pandit. Ji hmey shadi karne hai abi..
S.chashmsh!yeh..
G.kuin?kya huwa?mjsy pyar nai kartey?dar gaye?
S.chashmsh..mein ne aesa kab kha,..par achanak itne jaldi....
G.wada kar k gae the na jb aon ge wapis to kudh ko tmhara bana lon ge.samrat had tearz ..she 2 had..gunjan held his hand n he firmly held back..

Tu Kahe To Tere Hi Ek Dhum Ke Mein Nishano Pe
Chaloon Rukoon Ishaare Pe..
Tu Kahe To Khwab Ka Bana Ke Mein Bahana Sa
Mila Karoon Sulaane Pe..
HooTumse Dil Ki Baathe Seekhi 
Tumse Hi Yeh Raahe Seekhi
Tum Pe Mar Ke Mein To Jee Gaya..
Khuda Jaane Ke... Mein Fidaa Hoon
Khuda Jaane Ke.. Mein Mit Gaya...
Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere dua.

(they tok pehrass..samrat tyed mangulsutar whch he had always with him n filed her mang..he wiped her tearz.they hugs n left 4m there..both were feling on top of world..they stealng glances..smilng non-stop..they reachd home n samrat did welcmd ritualz..both were hapy n contented....gunjan came in their room n samrat hugs her 4m back whispering thanks.gunjan blushed..samrat gifted her a pack having red bridal dress...samrat asked her to wear it..she blushd n left)

Dil Kahe Ke Aaj Chupa Lo Tum Panaahon Mein
Ke Dar Hai Tumko Kha Dunga
Dil Kahe Sambhal Zara Khushi Ko Na Nazar Laga
Ke Dar Hai Mein To Ro Dunga..
Hooo Karthi Hoon Saugaate Tumse 
Baande Dil Ke Waade Tumse, Yeh Tumhe Na Jaane Kyan Hua..
Khuda Jaane Ke.. Mein Fidaa Hoon
Khuda Jaane Ke.. Mein Mit Gaya..
Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere dua.

(samrat changed into black jeans n kurta.gunjan came out n blushd hard..samrat was memorized by her beauty..he had saw her first tym without dupatta.he held her hand n then made her sit.. Made her wearz jewelary n then put dupata on her shouldrz..held her 4m shouldrz kised her 4head n he hugs her..) 
Sajde Mein Yuhin Jhukta Hoon Tum Pe Aake Hi Rukhta Hoon
Kya Yeh Sabko Hota Hai Humko Kya Lena Hai Sab Se
Tum Se Hi Sab Baathe Ab Se Ban Gaye Ho Tum Meri Dua..
Khuda Jaane Ke.. Mein Fidaa Hoon
Khuda Jaane Ke.. Mein Mit Gaya..
Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere dua...

(they heard door bell..samrat make face.gunjan smiled.they both came down..n samrat saw a choclate cake n delicious diner awatng 4 them..samrat looked at her..n she heldz hand n walked to cake..she asked him to cut n they both cut cake together n fed eachother.some was left outside her lipz..samrat slowly kised her n she 2 respondz...after few secondz they broke kiss n gunjan blushd n samrat smilez..they did dineer.,gunjan gifted him album having their memoriez.samrat hugd her n lovd it n then samrat asked her to wait.n he came back after 15 minz...samrat lifted her in armz..n gunjan blushd n then whisperz..bday gft kasa laga??samrat smilez n whisperz back..the best 1 i ever have after u....gunjan smiled n asked..sachi?samrat smild back n answered muchi..they were in room n gunjan saw lighted candlez in whole room n decorated with red rose petals..she blushd hard n hugs him..i love u samrat..i love u 2 chashmsh...n the night spent by two loverz loving each other..tonight another story have a perfect ending or must say a beautiful begning of their love....two people becum 1...love blossoomss......sometimes in lyf we have to wait for our love....with this faith that one day u wil get ur love back.....n that day u wil promise urself not aloowed ur love to left u next tym.............
held the special people close to ur self......
who trusts u dont break their trusts it break that person.......
dont hurt each other even in a joke it really hurts a lot....
thanks
soory for mistakes
love u 
meri
Edited by mars14 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow another awsome os
i just loved it
sajan were just perfect
loved it soooo much
fabulous job
 
love
tanzeel