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~Beautiful Sin~SidShi FF: Chapter 30//Pg 108 (Page 95)

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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 12:25am | IP Logged
Simply brilliant.ClapClapClapClap The way you went from one character to another from self centered Riddhima to guilt ridden Armaan(this was long overdue) to the self realization of both Sid and Shilpa, I can just say wow and nothing more.Thumbs UpThumbs Up Somehow the creatives of the DMG show equated Armaan to Romeo and there was never an iota of shame or guilt on his part.OuchOuchOuch But the way you have written it and the way he went through the self realization that he was guilty and self centered was brilliant. The character of Armaan got redeemed to a certain extent for me. But Riddhima would never redeem herself.OuchOuch I wish Armaan or Shashank gives her a good dose of what kind of selfish woman she turned out to be. I still can't believe that she expected Sid to be with her. Maiyya needs to come down to earth.Sleepy

Sid and Shilpa, what can I say, They have suffered enough and now they need to admit their feelings for each other and hopefully get married.Day DreamingDay Dreaming The way you wrote the Sid tempting Shilpa scene, I had goosebumps feeling all over me. Now eagerly awaiting your next update when both Sid and Shilpa have heart to heart confession of their true feelings. They need to do it ASAP.Smile I just felt like coming in and smacking both on the head and then realized that this was an FF.ROFLROFLAngry Sigh. Please por favor do not torture them for eternity.



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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 12:56am | IP Logged
awesome update...at last armaan realised his wrong doings but ridz still thinking what wrong she has done?...after this act both sid and shilpa know that they love each other and nothing will be the same as before
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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 1:01am | IP Logged
awesome update dear  Hippie 1





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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 1:08am | IP Logged
wow...jst wow yaar...ClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
u knw u sod proud of u i never read dmg ff's..bt i had gone through ur's...jst bcz i didn't like d story ws treated especially watever happen to sid and shilpa...aaarrrggghhh
i hate riddhimma...man cant c be happy wat she has...js't one hell of self obssessive soul...
lv u ff...as told u i dnt follow dmg ff so wenevr u update plz pm me and also add me to ur buddy list...
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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 1:27am | IP Logged
Reserved!

Goosebumps, tears, heartburn... what have you done to me!! Confused
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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 1:56am | IP Logged
Every time I read ur FF, my heart yearn for more SidShi confrontations.
I could visualise KW & SA  in their romantic avtar* sigh, CVs are u listening????????????????
I  feel sorry for Armaan who ruined his as well as others life for that self centered woman .

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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 4:17am | IP Logged
Thanks Sidra for this quick update...Sorry for lack of comments in previous updates...Actually my lappy's screen got damaged..I read all of them from my mobile.

This was really awesome update...Although I would have preferred if Siddy had been a bit less manipulative in this part...I would like to think that Siddy had changed a lot since he agreed to give Riddhima and his marriage a chance; fully aware that Riddhima is yet to fully fall in love with him. No ordinary man can do this. Especially Armaan. He had never known the meaning of patience or tolerance that every relationship requires. I remember, when A---R were together, in their earlier days when Riddhima denied her feelings, Armaan used to indulge in street fighting and bike racing and get himself hurt to compel Riddhima come running to him. When Shashank refused to give him Riddhima's hand, instead of trying to prove his maturity as a worthy life partner, he began his emotional blackmail by holding hunger strike in front of Shashank's house. That was always his mentality...

I really don't feel any sympathy for him, nor do I think he can ever learn anything from his past mistakes...He wouldn't have been Armaan Mallik then...
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Posted: 06 July 2011 at 5:13am | IP Logged

DiiiHug


tht was so beautifulEmbarrassed


i m literally speechless after reading dis partBlushing


i really dnt knw wat to do, i was bust staring my PC for a long time, n den wen my cell rang, i came out of d tranceEmbarrassed


too good diEmbarrassed

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