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~Beautiful Sin~SidShi FF: Chapter 30//Pg 108 (Page 84)

nomadsoul Senior Member

Joined: 08 October 2010
Posts: 888

Posted: 22 June 2011 at 12:27am | IP Logged
This FF is absolutely beautiful it's like reading a poem!!! Just too awesome!!

You know this Vivek-Shilpa-Sid angle is sooo beautifully knitted you cannot hold any of these three responsible for  the tangle! I am soo loving it!! You are truly gifted!! I say you should think about writing a book!!
But you know what i badly wish... to read an SR FF of yours!! Gowd that will be THE BEST EVER SR FF for sure!!! Please keep this request in mind! and mind you I DONT WANT SR IN THIS FF!!! TongueLOL

Continue soon!!!!

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-veena.shona- IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 22 June 2011 at 7:35am | IP Logged



so Shilpa n Vivek broke d engagement, coolBig smile

i hope Sid n Shilpu talk outBlushing

lukng forward to d partyEmbarrassed

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Maheen210 Senior Member

Joined: 16 July 2007
Posts: 458

Posted: 23 June 2011 at 3:47pm | IP Logged
Yayy u updated!! amazing updatee!WinkWinkWink im sooo xcited for the next part! Hopefully sid is going to confront shilpa about his feelings..Cool Pleasee update soon..

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nm21 Goldie

Joined: 27 February 2008
Posts: 2055

Posted: 24 June 2011 at 4:56am | IP Logged
Wow Sidra.

Honestly I always underestimate how good your updates are going to be, but that's probably due to the unexpecteed twists which leaves me spellbound every single time...completely unpredictable.

Amazingly written.

I love the Sid, Yuvi-Naina scene in the beginning as a way to set the scenario from each person's perspective. Naina-Yuvi asking the questions and Sid answering them in a way...lovely.

I particularly liked Shilpa and Vivek here, two simple beings...and I actually appreciate the similarities between the two aswell. The reason why Vivek is able to understand Shilpa and what she shares with Sid, without ever having the need for him to tell her. And in turn, she allows him to come back if things don't work adorable. Both are such cuties..but as Shilpa mentioned, they're not meant to be because Vivek is not Sid! :D Loved loved loved! The way you describe ambiences is breath-taking, why did I feel I was actually on a beach at that moment! Really makes you want to go away on holiday :D  hehe!

A special mention, if I haven't already done so but may have done in a previous post, is the relationship you have shown between Shilpa and Naina. I love these two together and because of your FF would loved to have seen them on screen together too! They're wonderful girlfriends so close they could actually pull off being sisters! (Yeah Boo you, Riddhima!!)  Love how Naina is aware with everything that goes on in her mind/heart and isn't afraid to let her know, even if it's just to reassure her of her presence and the fact that everything is sweet.

I also saw in one of your comments that you mentioned a confrontation between Sid and Shilpa-definitelty dyyying to read that! Cannot wait.

Kudos to you my love, can't stress enough-please continue asap! Also saw the message, patience is a virtue. I undertstand your busy :) but your updates are always worth the wait!

Lots of love! xoxo

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-Aliya- IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 27 March 2009
Posts: 15170

Posted: 25 June 2011 at 5:44am | IP Logged
ok firstly i hate that i won't be able to give a decent, long comment. I just LOOVE this FF so much, Sidra! Its genious. so brilliantly written with all heart. I cannot wait to read more. btw i like how this ff is long..not just because i personally like my fav ffs to last for quite sometime but also because your giving a lot of patience and time into each and every much effort in them. Excellent work sidra, keeep it up and update soon =)
BTW i am amazed by this simile that ya used:
it was like closing a broken door. No matter how tightly you shut it, a part of it would always remain open. No matter how you hard you tried to put things behind you, some of them would always escape through the cracks.

Edited by -Aliya- - 25 June 2011 at 5:51am

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-jas- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 25 June 2011 at 8:17am | IP Logged
-Aliya- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 25 June 2011 at 10:43am | IP Logged
i just realised that ya said that this was your second ff. what was your first one?
shamil IF-Sizzlerz

Joined: 01 September 2006
Posts: 17194

Posted: 25 June 2011 at 10:58pm | IP Logged
why do u always make me speechless dear sidra???
I have no words to explain how much I love ur each update! the only thing I didnt like is that u ended this part too soon. u better update it as fast as u can

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