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~Beautiful Sin~SidShi FF: Chapter 30//Pg 108 (Page 83)

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 12:02pm | IP Logged
hey
WOW awesome update

The way u showed Shilpa taking care of Armaan again awesome
Armaan seeing the pics of Shilpa analyzing...The way he was thinking over the bond that SidShi shared
And Shilpa telling armaan abt Sid's pain...Armaan realizing that Shilpa loves Sid
The cafeteria scene... loved it...Yuvi really is aawesome

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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 12:08pm | IP Logged
Edited my comment on pg 82 Embarrassed
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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
lovely part..
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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 12:17pm | IP Logged
i i jyst love you ff i have whitet it relly good tanks 

when are you gonna uppdatd the next one??

you own oss one more tody becas you have been away so long :P??
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Gosh!! I have never ever read anything as beautiful as this piece of writing.. You really have a way with words.

i wont say the story transported me into its world.. Nooo that would be a big understatement.. In fact, the story, the characters, their emotions, their feeling all came alive in front of my eyes. they had the power to transport themselves right in front of my eyes..

Great going.. Please Pm me when you update next.. :)
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Posted: 30 May 2011 at 2:21pm | IP Logged
feel bad for shilpa and thanks to yuvi for knocking some sense to sid baba. 
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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 12:40am | IP Logged
awesome update
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 31 May 2011 at 4:01am | IP Logged
Firstly, I am so so so so so elated you managed to save all your data! Data actually undermines the full appreciation of your creations nonetheless it's more of a technical term of recognition!

With good reason, you made us wait for the update but my gosh what an update is was! Absolutely awesome!!
I loved everything about it conceptually, again completely unexpected the whole Armaan-Shilpa faceoff and I will admit that I always look out for the SidShi "scenes" but reading about this couple was acceptable firstly cause of the way you reckoned with their emotions so accurately! It was very spot on! You know where you are able to "hear" the voices of the characters-that happened throughough only cause I could imagine them saying the words...and secondly cause it was much required-you always find solace in the person you least expect and it was the same, the part where Shilpa "lessens" the burden by admitting albeit indirectly she likes Sid to Armaan and in the same way Armaan needed to acknowledge his responsibility and role in the tornado which literally uprooted Sid and Shilpa's lives. Loved it!!!

These two quotes I really liked...there was just something about the way you write...

But the more she thought about it, the more she realised that those memories didnt hurt anymore...they seemed so far away now...like old pictures that had turned yellow with the passage of time.

"Its hurts, doesnt it? Realizing that your time, patience and love means nothing to the one you have spent it for...welcome to Sid's world.

That last quote...I smiled at first cause of the way in which you had written the sentence...that quickly became more sympathetic when I understood the meaning behind it :( my heart actually went out to him, poor Sid...

I loved the apt detail with which you write! Your chapters are always so unique with the words you use and the way you mould things before the reader's eyes...
The part where Shilpa walks over cautiously to Armaan, Armaan's reactions... that whole part of the chapter was  my favourite..
I love the way you wrote about the different reactions to Shilpa's story in the Cafe. And again, Naina to be judgemental, Yuvi to be the one to help the "underdog" and Sid to be silenty fuming is the way I expected them to act too! Amaaazing!!


Kudos to you! Round of applause! Can't wait to read the next update!
Loveee
xo



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