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~Beautiful Sin~SidShi FF: Chapter 30//Pg 108 (Page 52)

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 12:15pm | IP Logged
Sidra... I know what you mean when you say Sid has to go through a lot more before he could come to terms with his feelings. I fancy the idea because Sid isnt the kinda guy who would just accept he could get over loving someone he loved more than life so easily. He needs a few jolts and few circumstances to make him realize the fact. It's not easy; and I just appreciate the fact that you make it so evident. For Shilpa, what Armaan cost her was only her confidence. For Sid, Riddhima cost him his life - figuratively and sometimes even literally. it's not the same for both... and you make it so obvious. Definitely a trait of a brilliant writer! =)

As for the update, I loved it. Like I always do whenever I read ur updates! I adored the dance. Entirely - every detail, and every word you wrote out. But before reading the Note, I had though u were inspired by P&P or DE. LOL but you know, just the way you described it, I never could picture anyone else in the exact same position as Sid and Shilpa were in. I could just about imagine everything that happened. It's that brilliant!

Shashank has always been one of the better characters in DMG. He has always been the giving one, very much like how Sid was. But like everyone else in Riddhima's life, he was in the rotten end of things. I am glad he sees the obvious, and hopefully will help Siddhant move out of his past. 

Armaan on the other hand - i was shocked. More because he isnt much like Riddhima. Unlike his forever love, he tends to want to see people happy if it doesnt affect his happiness... After reading it once more, I guess I drew the conclusion that it was more of an ego problem. He hated it when Sid got attention, when Sid was more important, more loved and more cared for than him. When it came to shashank, riddhima or even shilpa. Now he realizes that Shashank is gone, Riddhima - although physically with him - might just be thinking about Sid, and his last option shilpa (who he thought loved him to no bounds) is in love with Sid. It's like everything he has is with Sid. The love he craved for is with Sid, the people he loved, loved Sid. 

I think Sid brings out the bad person in Armaan. Because A is jealous of a Sid he could never be. He is jealous of how Sid's life is so beautiful even when he lost everything - aka Riddhima. How his life is almost miserable even if he had everything.... He realised that maybe he was better off with Shilpa, just like Sid was right now. But unlike Riddhima he might actually just feel guilty (maybe?)... The kind of character A is, I dont think he is worse that Riddhima. Maybe I just hate Riddhima, but I feel A has a chance to revive himself somehow... Riddhima absolutely cant! Or maybe not... 

At the end, I love the fact that Sid and Shilpa is getting their share of happiness... something they deserved a long time ago! I am sure one day, Sid will be glad he lost R to A... Because if he hadn't he wouldn't find his true partner! =)

Amazing update - pretty much like always! I love the way you  write Sidra, and no word could ever describe how much I adore reading this FF! =)

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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 1:46pm | IP Logged
Sidra

I loved dis partEmbarrassed

SidShi dance Haiyeeee I could visualize d whole scene Day DreamingDay Dreaming
Ohhh & I loved d song <3

I really like Shanky in ur FF Smile
This is exactly how he would hav behaved wid lusty couple but clowns ruined his character also Dead
I hope later on he'll help Sid to move on in his life Smile

YuNa r cute Embarrassed
Indirectly dey r playing cupid to SidShi Wink

Haraam DeadDeadDead
He was always like dis selfish Angry
Now he's jealous of Sid
I mean C'mon u got everything what u wanted & still ur jealous of him
Shameless creature I tell yaDead

Ridz
I think physically she was present wid Haraam but was thinking abt SidShi & getting jealousWink


Can't wait 4 d next part
Continue superrrrrrr soon....


Edited by sidma_love - 17 March 2011 at 1:48pm
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Sidra...!!! I just read ur latest update and wow!!

I love ur writing!! its like I can imagine whatever you r wrote taking place. The corsarge part - wow....i am loving the unspoken tension between the too - cant wait for it break Day Dreaming

I love Yuvi & Naina so much  - they are so adorable - wish they were given more importance in CMG.

and Sid-Shanky convo was sweet - i have always loved their bonding and its great to see that shanky didnt succumb to his daughters - but stood with his principles - and always valued SId - aww i miss shanky

and as for Ridz - you are bang on with her character (at least in my opinion) - she is one selfish confused soul who has no idea what she wants in life. When i was reading the truck accident part - i wanted to slap that woman!

thanks girl for writing such an amazing FF and taking me a SId-Shi world!! Update Soon! Looking fwd to it!

Edited: wait i just read chapt 17 - chapt 18 is up 2....*running to go read*


Edited by sidra2007 - 17 March 2011 at 5:20pm
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You just left me speechless with the last update...

I knew Sid was gonna be her escort - and the way you worked it out was great. And the song the dance - all of it was just perfect. I am at a loss of words at how beautifully your writing is - and even though i dont watch TVD - i can was still able to imagine the dance - all i can say is wow! Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming

Also YuNA are so adorable - the drunk and the fly part LOLLOLLOL

Shanky - i love you man!!! You saw and now i know he's gonna do a little match-making himself

as for the lusty-birds - i am so enjoying their sad lives - ApproveApproveApprove

ahh - now i cant wait for the next update!!!
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Cess - i like reading your viewsSmile, but can i say well IMO that i dont think i can see Armaan revive, i mean the things he did - is beyond selfish, i mean who goes to their ex lovers honeymoon and does what he did - he disrespected his so called love for Ridz and her as woman firstly (and a woman he claim to love) and then she did itself by giving in, and then stalk her constantly and then throw eveything back in Sid's face - he was selfish and didnt even think he was hurting someone who accepted him as a person and as a big bro who helped him as well, he even disrespected marriage as a whole and even had the gaul to go to Sid's house to fetch Ridz, what a selfish hormonal prick, see thats why i hate Armaan probably more then Ridz, with Ridz i just feel disappointed so really no feelings come for her from me in a way and that word Farz is forever attached on there thats make me even more numb to her lol but Armaan so called love was made out to be so true and great, when it wasnt at all it ended being selfish, immature, a thing he couldnt have and wanted, and shameful - its somewhat disgusting that this is what they call love.......... and not only that he used Shilpa to some extent
 


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@ Lennie - I love reading your views too! LOL But I have to say I agree with everything you say other than the fact that it is only disappointment that could be felt for Riddhima. 

I did say how I think Armaan can be revived. I think it was more because of the relationship they showed Siddhant and him to be in before Sid left. They drank together, talked about life. I think Armaan is an extremely and utterly selfish character. He sees nothing but his own happiness. When he realized he couldn't live without Riddhima, he went after her, because he was convinced she still loved him. But wasn't he right in the end? She did 'love' him - at least that's what they showed... So in a sense, what he did, although pathetic, was somehow justified, because "he was saving 3 lives" - whatever the heck that means. 

Riddhima on the other hand has her life ahead of her. She had the choice. Armaan stalked her; but did she truly not like that? You see, for me, being stalked by someone I dont want to be stalked by - is bad. But Riddhima loved the attention. She wanted Armaan to still love her, and when he didn't (When he acted like he loved Shilpa) She despised it. So pretty much, she wants both the worlds. One where she is safe, secure and loved. The other where she fulfills her happiness, and where she thinks she belonged in. The problem with Riddhima has always been selfishness. She wants everything to revolve around her. Everything is always about what she wants, what she needs, what she thinks. Everyone around her is nothing above her. IMO, Riddhima is the one at fault here the most. Much more than Armaan would ever be. And that is only because she had a choice. She could have chosen to tell Sid she still loved Armaan. She could have chosen to not betray him like that. She could have chosen to tell Armaan she wanted to be with Sid and if he kept it up, she will take serious actions. She could have chosen to just speak up and tell everyone the truth. But she never chose. She just decided it was alright to stand in the middle of cross roads. And it wasn't fair for the two pathways to wait till she finally chose them.

To me, Riddhima made it look like she had a choice between Sid or Armaan. Reality is, she never had the right to choose Sid after what she did. Sid was the only one who could choose her instead! He didn't and I was glad. The last lines of Riddhima when Sid left were that she was to leave him, and he left her instead. I think that pretty much sums up the kind of character she is. She thinks its always she that is the priority, and that's probably why I hate her so much. 

Sorry for the really long reply! LOL I got a little carried away! But I agree with you Lennie, on Armaan not being able to be revived; but riddhima is long dead for me, compared to A.

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WOW
Loved the way u described Sid's feelings
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WOW
Mindblowing update
While reading the update,i thought it was like TVD, then at the end u put the noteLOL
I just loved these lines
"But Armaan was not at all happy with what he had just seen.
Why......why does he get everything that I want?
Even though they were divorced now, no one could change the fact that Sid had been Riddhima's first husband.......something Armaan had always dreamt of.....still did.
Riddhima had gotten married to Sid so easily but here whenever Armaan spoke about marriage, she would turn depressed all of a sudden.
Sid never had a problem with gaining Dr. Shashank's love and respect even though he had joined Sanjeevani much later than Armaan.
And here,so many years later, Armaan was still trying........he had never seen anything but disapproval for him in Shashank's eyes.
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