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~Beautiful Sin~SidShi FF: Chapter 30//Pg 108 (Page 51)

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Thnx for the pm and awesome update!!! :)

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 10:17pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shamil

sidra, am speechless again!
I cud visualize the whole sceneDay Dreaming
hormone is getting affected by ridhimmaria , I guess
how come he too is conphoosed like his forever lowwe??ROFL
I loved it when u wrote "
a painful realization went through him at what he had lost in Shilpa.Tongue
waiting eagerly to know how much farzy got affected seeing sidshi dance. was she staring at them, the same way she had while she watched hormone dance with shilpa??Wacko


Shamil You crack me up. Especially this line

"how much farzy got affected seeing sidshi dance"ROFLROFL

You will never forget the farz dialogue now will you. LOL. Me too will never forget the way the creatives killed the character of Riddhima by making her utter the stupid farz dialogue. I mean no one does all that she did for farz. Hell even in Kekta serials too even when the lead does get married for revenge or other reason after doing all the things Riddhima did(wearing a sexy lingerie, dancing with Sid) I don't think they would make her say it was a just a farz and nothing else. In that way I feel DMG creatives made this serial worst than ekta maiyya's serial.

Sidra good  work. I liked the dance the way you wrote I could visualize it completely. Now that Shashank has seen the spark for Sid and Shilpa I hope he takes it upon himself to get them married and yes I want Shashank to push for marriage and he should be really happy on getting Sid and Shilpa married making the eternal lovers fume with anger. Looking forward to the next part now.



Edited by psarada - 16 March 2011 at 10:18pm

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it isnt easy to forget that dialogue, is it??LOL
I still cant believ that cmg writers turned out to be brain deadSilly. They forgot they had made maiyya hug, get  kissed & kiss sid happily  b4 a particular actor decided the future track.Clown Unfortunately for them , the audience didnot forget what they had shown earlier & the show ended with a low  trp. Thumbs Down

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 10:59pm | IP Logged
heyyyyyyyyyyy

superb part yaar

jst luvd sidshi dance EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

i cld actually imagine dem in dis part Big smileBig smile

i hope Sid realises tht its luv EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

i jst hated tht psycho AngryAngryAngry

he shud knw tht bcoz of d person tht Sid is he got everything fast in his life. he was nt lyk him hurting everyone AngryAngryAngryAngry

ab usko Riddhima mil gayi hai, ab usko Shilpa chahiye AngryAngryAngry

kya kameena hai yaar AngryAngry

pls cont soon

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Posted: 16 March 2011 at 11:29pm | IP Logged
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amazing update. Clap
when i read it i exactly remembered Damon elena dance scene Day Dreaming..... but last you mention the note. LOL

i can visulize that..... u made me again crazy......so many times i had watched that scene .

i hope shashank will help in future......yuvi & naina......how cute they r Day Dreaming. last line we both r drunk cracked me.......ROFL

no comments for that mean. after reading his part......i still can't comment on him. Dead

keep it up dear.Thumbs Up......

@ jenny - that i see you song .....is mine fav.......now again i m going to watch i see you VM on DE.....Day Dreaming



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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 12:19am | IP Logged
Your FF is makinng me make sigs out of nowhere. just made the scene u wrote sig. 

now, trying to make the dance sig. damn, this is hard.

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This clock never seemed so alive

Mesmerizing I sat dazed for a long time and your words had magic that it can create the picture in front you

Beautiful


Riddhima like I was telling one of the members portrayal by you makes me very upset with her Infact I hate her Angry




Edited by DJ.. - 30 March 2011 at 5:49am
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Ok firstly...listened to the song-perfect. I really loved it, I've never heard it before so it was so fresh yet/and soothing to my ears! ( This is cheesy, but i didn't play the song until you mentioned it in ur FF so I could listen alongside-having said that though, I think it was the best way to read your FF! Made the moment so real.....at first I could only see the whole thing before my eyes, the sound made it as if I was there *shivers* bravo!)

Now then-

This was it! The moment where Yuvi left, your FFs always surprise me though so I wasn't expecting Yuvi's departure so early on in the extract hence I had to sit up and read the first few lines again and again, teehee...

I liked Sid trying to separate himself from the crowd so he wouldn't be disturbed when Shilpa came down-that was really sweet, I "aww"d. Especially when he was dumbfounded by his own gesture! Bless, I'm glad he's moving on-it's exactly how I'd expect him to act...(so well done for carrying on your accurate depiction of the characters!!)


Yes, yes...do that. That's real brave.
She noticed that oddly her inner voice was starting to sound just like Naina.

This made me laugh! Loved the integrated humour!

Attention to detail is amazing....the first party I didn't have to attend to know the SMALLEST detail of what went on ;) brilliant!

Shilpa's lacking confidence is understandable, she's never boasted or bragged about herself ever, she's a free spirit living in the moment, loving the moment....thus in a situation where people are generally judging her on her beauty her little confidence boost ie. "she was Shilpa Malhotra after all" was apt for the occassion.

This surprised me...Up until this point you'd never let on that Sid was going to be the escort, it's only since the FF is based on them that everyone wanted it. However, if I'd been watching DMG where all couples seem to be tangled up in some way....and had this happened I would have been jumping up and down on my sofa as I watched Sid Modi "take to the stairs"!!
BEST PART EVER. (arguably) but no this was terrific!! Loved how you desrcibed everything, how he voluntarily came forward and that too without anyone having to say anything, he didn't hear Naina, he didn't hear the awkward silence from spectators in the room, no external factor motivated him to walk up and essentially save Shilpa...but it was Shilpa herself, her face as he had watched her....this touched me! Soooo adorable (Please, I want a Siddy too!! )

This was a very smooth transaction, I loved everyone's reaction and the timing! Sid as an escort, Yuvi rushing in, no one knowing if Sid would pull off the dance! Soooo smoooth!!

Here is where I played the music, the most beautifully written part I have ever read in my whole life. It's one thing to write it but in order to paint that picture for smeone over a computer screen to visualise is a completely different level in itself!
I loved everything I won't choose, the dance and the description= *flying kisses*


"A content smile came over his face at the possibility that his son might find happiness in his life after all." I'm not kidding <<< that made me cry! :( Aww shanky siddy! Like the son he never had<3

Love the strong implication of Shilpa being the "missing piece" in Sid's life, how she completes him :)
The cute smile they exchange at the end of the dance....


Armaan epitmoises the phrase "you don't know what you got till it's gone" or "you always want what you can't have"  Choice is up to you :)

Wonderful! Keep it up Little Miss!

BRAVO xxxxxxxx

P.s. I didn't before but I checked that scene on youtube and I now have a new found love for Damon and Elena so thanks for introducing me to Vampire Diaries :) xx


 


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