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~Beautiful Sin~SidShi FF: Chapter 30//Pg 108 (Page 49)

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 2:18am | IP Logged
I just recalled something
the piuur lob waali auntyji was wearing a white saree while she was having a *ahem*  scene with a lusty hormone, wasn't she? now she wears it again to impress siddy boy??? Wacko
sidra, u shud have made armaan gaze at her & say " basket, remember how we almost did 'it'  while u had worn a similar saree
"Evil Smile
 as much as that I wanna puke at the scene, it also made me laugh out aloud . I mean the cvs showed her enjoying herself thinking its sid first & then let her continue having a ****** time with armaan too. That was the last blow to R's character. She was suddenly turned into a w*reDead
She was a selfish B* & shall remain so for ever

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 1:22pm | IP Logged
Sidra Hug

Firstly your opinion on Riddhima made me really think and you are so right she is just insecure.
Yep KW needs to come in a new show and soon!

Your updates leave me speechless...
The last part with the corsage, OMG it was so simple yet so impactful, you said everything without saying anything.

Shilpa coming to terms with her feelings is going to be a treat to watch. I really can't wait to see Sid work out how he is feeling

Riddhima meh! Dead OMG how can she stoop so low, just live your life and let everyone live theirs! They have moved on and happily without you!

Dr Shashank's offer, I feel it has a big part to play but that's me done guessing!

I can't wait to see what happens next...

Cont soon


Edited by nikita_88 - 14 March 2011 at 1:24pm

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 7:19pm | IP Logged
Where do I begin? I am still in speechless mode at the moemntEmbarrassed

Let me begin.. This was one of the best updates ever, but it was disappointing that it was so short.

I love Sid. I always have and this time, I loved him even more. I loved the small things, Him putting the corsage on Shilpa's arm, him admiring her. I actually tried to find her in a purple dress so I could make a sigLOL I should try to color her Salsa dress from AR times and then maybe find some Sid caps that would work or something.LOL

I love the title. you draw my soul. <3 Oh wow. that is so deep.

Haha. Riddhima. I cannot believe she tried to wear white to impress Sid and she banged into him, but didn't get the reaction that she wanted. Haww, she should keep trying. It makes the story def interesting, the ay she keeps trying. Is Armaan gonna try for Shilpa in the future then?

I love how she thinks she's not deciieving Armaan. Oh god, someone help this womanLOL

I love Shanks-Sid talks man. They are so heartwarming. Sid and Shanks is one of my favorites things and add Shilpa in there, it be a great trio.

I love how Sid moved out of Riddhima's way and the line you used. He would never feel guilty for saving Shilpa instead of Riddhima spoke so much!!

Naina and Yuvi are the cutest man! I love love these two and I love how indirectly they play cupids is amazingg!!!

For your FF and for SidShi:

Notice me
Take my hand
Why are we
Strangers when
Our love is strong

Bravo once again Sidra. Update karo jaldi, because you know, I LOVE LOVE your FF!




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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 10:25pm | IP Logged
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u rock sidra....
love love love love ur ff
i read every update n its brilliantClap

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Posted: 14 March 2011 at 10:32pm | IP Logged
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love sidshiDay DreamingDay Dreaming
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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
Do update soon:)

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Posted: 15 March 2011 at 2:09pm | IP Logged

I love this FF....I'm actually lost for words because I want to say something meaningful since what you wrote was undescribeable...

To start off, the way you described Shilpa, how even in a crowd, essentially she was pretty much on her own with her feelings....it just shows how distracted she is-unable to comprehend anything apart from Sid, the fact that she hasn't spoken to him since her accident being the main focus probing her mind.

You made the other girls seem so immature haha! I loved Naina's role as a matron of sorts, going through the 'procedure',scolding the particular girl who wasn't listening! It's great!
I don't know whether you watch GossipGirl/ The OC but it reminded me of the "Cotillion Ball", but even if you don't-beautiful concept! (bearing in mind-and not to ruin it or anything but I'm hoping the "right" guy will escort Shilpa in the end ;) )

I've watched DMG from the start, I've not ever seen this side of Riddhima but that's not to say it's impossible. In the sense that Riddhima has never blatently tried to see if another has feelings for her when she's been in a relationship. But having said that, we know that she's a crazy jealous-i.e. if Armaan was going to be with Shilpa we can imagine this being her next move, for example, when she confronted Armaan about Shilpa she was only reassured when he admitted he "didn't feel anything for her" , I can see her doing this with Sid-despite it not being in the show, I think you've done justice to her character cause hey! No one's perfect :) so kudos to you for showing it in a realistic manner!

I've always loved Dr. Shashank's relationship with the interns, he's like the underlying foundation according to me and I've always loved how he's tried to be understanding but also guided the "youth" when they were "led astray"!
I was so overwhelmed reading his conversation with Sid for that reason...it was so so accurate (honestly, HOW do you do it?!)
It really touched my heart, you can see the respect they share for one another...its a beeeeautiful bond! Very well executed!
Oh congratulations for Sid for doing so well at work! (Always knew he had it in him :P)
Banging into Riddhima-you can tell he now has the power to walk away...he doesn't crumble at the sight of her, although he was momentarily caught in a "moment"-the thought of Shilpa kinda woke him up, the fact that he knew he was right for what he did and he didnt need to explain himself was excellent! for him...

yet not quite what Riddhima wanted....I can't wait to read her thoughts on the whole thing!

Also-I love Yuvi-Naina, your posts make me wish that the producers etc. would read this and bring them back...they had awesome potential to hit greater levels a couple on the show, sadly it didn't reach fruition! However, I'm sooo glad that they're such a masive aspect of your FF since they really add the "cherry" on the top for me! I'm kinda referring to their behaviour in previous posts in this one, what did it for me was the "Yuvi rolled his eyes at his wife's not-so-subtle actions.
For a few seconds, Sid looked blankly at the corsage in his hands.
He turned to Yuvi hoping he could give to Shilpa but found that he had suddenly disappeared."
Haha, such a weird wacky yet lovely! pair! Its great that they have such a perfect understanding between one another, helping each other out in their little missions! teehee!

Considering that this is one of your shorter posts, I have to admit I was lost in it...reading ever sentence again and again....I actually believe "quality not quantity" when I read your posts! Splendid!
The flashback that Sid has as he remembers the painting when he sees Shilpa..the way you described her...I can just imagine that sun setting on her face, the rays, her eyes as she dreams (of Sexyface) there was an unhappiness that I felt, Sid didn't describe it as such, but the justification for her looking so dazed was because of the emptiness she was feeling ever since Sid didn't get back in touch...she was kinda blaming herself for his behaviour (eventhough he doesn't feel like that at all-illustrated by his little confrontation with Riddhima)

Actions speak louder than words....they didn't say anything, yet so much was conveyed in their little rendezvous! I am in awe of how well u managed to portray that....I can experience the chemistry through your words! Creepy yet amazing! Shows how FAB u are as a writer!
The way she blushed as he watched her....wow wee! Brilliant!

I rate you highly, one of my/ favourite author you are my dear!!

All the best, wonderful wonderful stuff! Thank you so much for writing this, else I know I would have missed out!!

Keep going, can't wait for the update!

All my love,

Mwaa N
xoxo

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