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~Beautiful Sin~SidShi FF: Chapter 30//Pg 108 (Page 47)

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 9:06am | IP Logged
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Firstly sorry for the late reply........... I reserved this spot a long time back and could not get back to it

Ok .... before coming to the update........ I am the only person whom many in the SR CC rightly say call upon being ragged by himself. So everyone from the CC here is one more opportunity to rag me

When I thought of how you would shape up RIddhima's character this was the last thought that came to my mind ......... Not negative but one with a grey shade but not negative.

She has her flaws. She is very insecure. I did not understand her insecurity cause she was always doted on her father, armaan Sid and lastly Shilpa. Hence I call her selfish also Why because she is one who can never be happy with what she has but always wants more than her share. And here also she is doing the same thing. She cannot digest Sid's attention being diverted from her She cannot handle anyone else in his life Again a human emotion of possessiveness. Riddhima will always remain possessive of Sid. Infact in the serial I always felt she was less possessive of armaan and more of Sid. In case of armaan it was more of concern that he moved forward properly so she can live guilt free. I am extremely sorry I disagree with all who think that Riddhima hated armaan warming up to Shilpa for reasons of jealousy or love or affection. I was again for her own self interest. She just wanted to live guilt free. She is one person who feels she cannot do anything wrong and also does not want to do anything wrong.

But in case of Sid it is just plain and pure possessiveness. She feels and always felt she had every right over him. It was given under the
name of marriage first and by Sid later under the name of love. Also this possessiveness comes to her naturally cause she knows Sid well He is one who always does the right thing he will move forward. Hence her possessiveness comes from her insecurity. Insecurity of losing Sid while he is moving forward in life be it when he went to see a girl for marriage, gave her divorce papers, everytime

What you say about Riddhima is incorrect She does not have an ego She has a real gigantic ego which stands taller than Mt Everest especially when she is offended angry or hurt. And to get her offended angry or hurt it does not take anyone much effort.

Here in your update when she was testing Sid she was actually doing it as she was insecure And Sid by saving Shilpa hurt her ego. Actually crushed it to pieces. And I am proud of Sid for that. (I am sorry this may sound very chauvinistic But way to Sid you are the Man)


But again ........ people evolve and the people around them influence while they evolve. Achi sangat ache vichar buri sangat bure vichar ............Riddhima is a beautiful character who evolved into a miserable selfish person because of the sangat she had ......... I would blame Anjali (one selfish person from the beginning) and then armaan ............

Sid Shashank
and Padma had decent effect on her but it got over ruled due to the tremendous pull towards armaan and anjali during the day of crisis (initially during the adoption bit and later the confidence gained in these people from that incident lead to the tilt during post divorce time)

No I don't say that Riddhima was all nice but I always try to rationalize why a person behaves the way he / she does But yes this is also true that I cannot accept what she did post second marriage Post divorce All things

Ok coming to the update

Shilpa is a beautiful person ....... her beauty comes from within I remember I have a friend any boy would not consider dating her cause she is less than average looking infact one can say she is ugly. But the person who dated her right commented once. She is very beautiful cause her smile is so genuine and warm Her beauty lies in it. A smile can be genuine only when one's heart is genuine Similarly in case of Shilpa her beauty lies her heart

and hence only she can think this way about the man she loves

Was he feeling guilty that he had come running to her instead of Riddhima?

Riddhima encounter with Sid ........amazingly describe ............. and the way you sealed the fate for Riddhima was lovely

If he was supposed to feel sorry or guilty for saving Shilpa and not her ..............then it was not possible.
Yes he was extremely astounded by his actions but he wasnt sorry or guilty for them....
never.

But the best scene was Sid and Shilpa ............. it just drew me in ......... captivated my attention completely so well described. ................ It felt as one could see Shilpa's beauty as Sid saw it and Shilpa she was every bit of a lady in love

awesome updateClap


Edited by DJ.. - 15 March 2011 at 1:59pm

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 9:43am | IP Logged
heyyyyyyyyy

nyc update yaar

jst luvd sidshi Embarrassed

n hated Riddhima Angry

pls cont soon

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omg! its getting better n better
Can say only one sentence
can u update this one as fast as u can??????

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 10:21am | IP Logged
ClapClapIts brilliant Sidra...But what the F is this Riddhimaiyya's problem?? You know after watching DMG all these months, I think there can be 2 possibilities

1. Either she's suffering from dual personality disorder i.e. when she's with Sid, she thinks 24x7 about Armaan and when she's with Armaan, she wants to impress Sid..Angry

2. Or she's a filthy wh**e who can never be pleased by any one man.Angry

Anyway Loved it. Please continue..Tongue


Edited by Darklord_Rehan - 13 March 2011 at 11:07am

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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 10:42am | IP Logged
Sid and Shilpa seems so achingly beautiful - i cant say more then that
 
Sid does need an life in his life and that is Shilpa
 
 
As for Ridz, i am kinda glad that Sid can read her like anything
 
I hate Armaan for everything and anything, i have never seen a man act like how he has done and in the name of love, thats not love thats selfishness and beyond, and as for Ridz - she is a disappointment that i simply have no words for but i respect Sid's love for her,  right now her mind is only concertrated on one thing and thats Sid right now, just cant let go and needs to know if he loves her still, like you said at the start, she knows that she will never have peace the day he walked out from the hospital - leaving her
 
I love Shanks and Sid's convo


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Posted: 13 March 2011 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
Sidraaaaaaaaa HugHug

This is freaking awesome !!

SidShi r soooooooo beautiful EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Ahhhhh finally Sid is going to get some happiness Big smile

I loved Naina & Yuvi <3

Also loved Sid & Shanky's convo Embarrassed

SR scene was nice Smile
Without saying anything Sid read her mind dat why she is looking hurt
But I am glad he didn't felt anything 4 herEvil Smile

Ridz Maiya Wacko
I am happy dat ur not making her negative LOL
& u rightly said , she is an insecure & selfish woman
She can't see Sid or Hormaan loving anyone else other than her

Now she wants to know dat Sid still loves her or not
She can't accept d fact dat some else took her place in Sid's life

The ending was just isshh Day DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming

I am craving for more Tongue
Phuleezzz continue superrrrrrr soon....

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Originally posted by nm21

EEeeek!

Apologies for the late reply!!

I didn't like this part very much....


BECAUSE I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!

honestly, favourite part till date.....woowwwwww! I was actually in awe, absolutely absorbed by your writing...it has this power to entice, the way the story developed from the initial aftermath you gave a little bit more information and a little more....

The fact that Armaan was the one to call out Riddhima's name essentally is the part I'm referring to here...no one knew where that voice had come from, everyone (Shilpa) having their own ideas as to what the sound was! Riddhima realising that Sid had actually pushed her out the way to get to Shilpa (haha, harsh as it seems LOVED tht too!)

The slow build up of Shilpa's consciousness in the beginning, every word is used perfectly, sentence structure is spot on....your so good!!
Loved the vision of Sid and Shilpa rolling down the road "tangled" before Riddhima-honestly nothing spells "Im over you Riddhima" more than that ;)

Vivek third wheeling amused me too-how he can feel something cooking between SidShi (ah i love themm)

Sid in the shower? veryyy nice :P
"It was forcing him to think about the question that had been haunting him all evening..............the one question he had successfully avoided so far.
What exactly was Shilpa's place in his heart? What did she really mean to him?"

Very well written!  A concern for Riddhima but a fear of losing Shilpa! Genius..

Riddhima's reaction was one that I understood the most, the fact that she's still caught up in a little bubble of her own, her disappointment in the resurrection of her relationship with her former lover, she wants out. Deliberately walking infront of the truck to spark those feelings with her and Sid, she wants that excitement and thrill back in her life....
Sid saving Shilpa is the last thing she has ever wanted, she didn't like her with Armaan, she would hateee her with Sid-he's her former husband! It was pretty much a slap in the face for little miss possessive...

I'm secretly hoping that Sid is her escort tonight (as much as I adore Yuvi!)

Ah the last paragraph illustrates the beauty of your writing, the turmoil she faces is so relateable, should she call shouldnt she call? Its a girl in love...
"She couldnt deny it anymore....................that she was hopelessly in love with Siddhant Modi."StarHeart
 

WOW.
*round of applause AND standing ovation*

Brilliant!!


Nish you always leave me speechless and extremely humbled with your comments...really I dont know what to say after reading them.......I dont think I deserve such praise but still thank you so so much.Hug
I lobe how you point out all the imp parts and interpret them in the same way that I want to portray them.

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