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~Beautiful Sin~SidShi FF: Chapter 30//Pg 108 (Page 46)

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Sidra, amazing update. i know i've commented after a long time but i'm a silent reader. finally shilpa knows that she loves Sid. and as for Ridz i'm happy for her that she realised what she has lost. confused woman!
 
but i'm curious. is Ridz gonna do further attempt to gain Sid's attention? is shilpa going to be able to bear that? is there gonna be a fight between ridz and shilpa? please reply to my comment.
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omg wat a brilliant piece of writing......i ve read d last 3 parts in 1 go n i m speechless.....ur scene sketching is brilliant......n ur FF is getting owsome by every update.....Smile
n i must say Riddhima shd b in panchgani mental asylam.....ds hopeless woman is conphused again,,,,ds is riddiculous dat she ws again two timing js like she had done in hr past,,,,grrrrrrrr,,,,,bt let me tell u dat riddhimas actions r sumhow make sidshi to realize dere inner feeling n bcoz of dat confused soul our angels r sorting dere confusion out!!!!!Evil SmileLOL
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Nikki : Thnx! I am glad you liked it so much.

pickachu : Thnx!!

:Lennie : You nailed it right Lennz. RIddhima can never accept Sid loving anyone else other thna her or even giviong that place in his heart to soemone else....That's just Riddhima for you. Thnx for commenting!!

Cess : Thank you sooo much!The kind of things she has undergone with Armaan, als Riddhima's cold behavior towards her, Shilpa is never going to believe that Sid might ever feel that same way about her.
I agree with you........as much as I hate Armaan, its nothing compared to the hatred I have for Riddhima.....like you said, she always had a choice, Sid always gave her that freedom to walk away from him anytime she wanted......he never wanted to bind her. The only thing he asked from her was honesty.
But noooo..........she made him believe she loved him and then went and got all touchy-feely with her ex-boyfriend, and goes around saying that Sid was only a bloody duty!Angry
And then she did all that natak of staying away from both the guys.In the end Sid had no choice but to divorce her coz all he wanted was her happiness.
But she still carried on her sad facade.
And finally she just couldnt herself and was all over the basket court singing the Imtehaans Ishq has taken from her.AngryAngry
Phew! So sorry for my outburst but I just couldnt control it.LOL

psarada : Thanks a lot for replying! I am glad you like my portrayal of these characters.

Shamil : Thanks!Hug Shashank was ruined beyond repair in the show...I mean somewhere I felt in that last scene where he tells Armaan to go to Riddhima, the actor looked so forced.LOL

Reshu, aamirkhanfan: Thnx!Hug

Zeeni : Hee Hee I am glad I was able to do that.Evil SmileLOL Riddhima is Riddhima. Thank you so much for your lovely comments!Hug

Anu : No No I cant say it LOL......you will have to see who will be Shilpa's escort...it can be Yuvi too.True.......Riddhima never grew up.
Thank you so much for commenting!

Harshu : Thank you sooo much!Hug

jasangel, anmol, shirandeewani : Thnx!

vidyashree : thank you sweety for always commenting!Embarrassed

Jenny: Thank  you so much ....your words humble me.Embarrassed

Miss Cullen : Aww thank you so much!!! I have heard a lot about your writing skills too.........I am glad I was able to make you see SidShi in a different light.Big smile

lovekwshilpa,shiranlovers : Thnx!

Sidra : Hug Lol its weird for me too to address someone else with my name.LOL Thanks a lot for commenting!

Eternalsiddhima : Thank you! Well yes RIddhima is going to continue her attempts.....what will Shilpa do?...you will have to wait and see. As for a fight between them....hmmm not anytime soon but later...yeah definitely.A showdown has to happen some time between Shilpa and Riddhima.

Docnuss : Thank you!Big smile....yeah true Riddhima's efforts are not going to waste...she is inadvertently bringing SidShi closer.


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EEeeek!

Apologies for the late reply!!

I didn't like this part very much....


BECAUSE I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!

honestly, favourite part till date.....woowwwwww! I was actually in awe, absolutely absorbed by your writing...it has this power to entice, the way the story developed from the initial aftermath you gave a little bit more information and a little more....

The fact that Armaan was the one to call out Riddhima's name essentally is the part I'm referring to here...no one knew where that voice had come from, everyone (Shilpa) having their own ideas as to what the sound was! Riddhima realising that Sid had actually pushed her out the way to get to Shilpa (haha, harsh as it seems LOVED tht too!)

The slow build up of Shilpa's consciousness in the beginning, every word is used perfectly, sentence structure is spot on....your so good!!
Loved the vision of Sid and Shilpa rolling down the road "tangled" before Riddhima-honestly nothing spells "Im over you Riddhima" more than that ;)

Vivek third wheeling amused me too-how he can feel something cooking between SidShi (ah i love themm)

Sid in the shower? veryyy nice :P
"It was forcing him to think about the question that had been haunting him all evening..............the one question he had successfully avoided so far.
What exactly was Shilpa's place in his heart? What did she really mean to him?"

Very well written!  A concern for Riddhima but a fear of losing Shilpa! Genius..

Riddhima's reaction was one that I understood the most, the fact that she's still caught up in a little bubble of her own, her disappointment in the resurrection of her relationship with her former lover, she wants out. Deliberately walking infront of the truck to spark those feelings with her and Sid, she wants that excitement and thrill back in her life....
Sid saving Shilpa is the last thing she has ever wanted, she didn't like her with Armaan, she would hateee her with Sid-he's her former husband! It was pretty much a slap in the face for little miss possessive...

I'm secretly hoping that Sid is her escort tonight (as much as I adore Yuvi!)

Ah the last paragraph illustrates the beauty of your writing, the turmoil she faces is so relateable, should she call shouldnt she call? Its a girl in love...
"She couldnt deny it anymore....................that she was hopelessly in love with Siddhant Modi."StarHeart
 

WOW.
*round of applause AND standing ovation*

Brilliant!!

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Hello all...how is everyone doing??
Ok I  know some of you think that Riddhima is going to be full on negative or a villain or something just to gain Sid's attention...but that is not the case. I am not planning to make her negative.This is the exactly the way that I have understood her character from watching the show.
She is basically a very insecure person and has a very huge ego.
When Armaan had stared warming up to Shilpa, Riddhima had absolutely hated it ....so much so that Sid had to turn into Sexyface to control her.LOL My point is that be it with Sid or Armaan, Riddhima can never see them loving anyone else because they both have loved her immensely (yes even Armaan in his own twisted way) Instead of being happy that Armaan is moving ahead in life, all she used to do was make big,sad eyes at him making believe that she was still in love with him inspite of being with Sid. She used to give the cold shoulder to Shilpa who was nothing but a sweetheart to her.

Sid, Shilpa (and even Armaan only when it came to Riddhima)have always been the giving ones....but what did Riddhima ever give them in return?

So this is where my perception of Riddhima comes from......

Anyways enough of my love confession for Riddhima....it can simply go on.

I would have posted this chapter earlier today but I was busy watching the GR8 Indian Women's awards just to see KW's performance.....he looked damn adorable! Nikamma needs to come back on our screens soon......

Chapter 17
You draw my soul to you


The day of the pageant had finally arrived.
Unlike the other contestants who were frantically rushing around the room doing last minute changes to their dresses, hair and make up, she was sitting quietly in a corner of the room almost ready.
She wished she could feel the excitement and apprehension as the others did.
An unusual trance had gripped her since the minute she had realized how deeply her feelings ran for Sid.
Love.............a word she had given up on.
Love...a feeling that she had assumed didnt like to associate itself with her.
And now that it was blooming inside her, she felt too overwhelmed.
It had been two days since her near fatal accident.......and she still hadnt heard from him.
She sighed softly.
Was he feeling guilty that he had come running to her instead of Riddhima?
She shook her head instantly admonishing herself.
How could she even think like that?........This was Sid.
"Shilpa! Could you please zip me up?'
She looked up to see Giselle, one of her colleagues, standing in front of her.
She got up and pulled up the zip at the back of Giselle's dress.
"Shilpa...how do I look? Do you think I need to work more on my make-up? Some of the girls were looking at me and giggling....especially Neha. Do I look funny?"
Shilpa smiled at her and held her shoulders. "You look absolutely gorgeous Giselle.Dont let anyone make you think otherwise. If they are laughing at you that means they are jealous of you."
Giselle squeezed Shilpa's hands." You are the sweetest person Shilpa."
Shilpa just shrugged at her.
"Ok then.........I still have to do my hair...all the best!"
Shilpa waved back at her and sat back in her chair.
But before Giselle could leave the room, Naina came bustling inside.
"Alright girls............ how are we all doing?"
 She ran a quick eye over everyone. "Everyone sober?.......good. Everyone ready....hmm not quite."
"Now lets run over the routine one last time........you all will gather in the corridor above the stairs. As I call out your name...you will descend the stairs ...when I say descend I mean slowly...elegantly not running down in a hurry as if there a fire behind you."
A couple of girls snickered.
"Stop laughing Neha....that was for you."
The grin immediately vanished from Neha's face.
"When you reach the middle of the staircase......stop. I will call out your escort's name.......he will come and stand at the foot the stairs and then only you will proceed further. Then all the couples will proceed to the center of the ballroom in an orderly fashion.....after that all the contestants will stand in a horizontal line facing their partners."
"Wait for the music to start and then the dance will begin. After the dance, your escorts will leave and you all will proceed to the stage. We will have an introductory round and a simple question and answer round.Now remember the sole purpose of this pageant is charity so no need to get too ambitious....this is not Femina Miss India. You all are interns and doctors so no need to get competitive with each other........Am I clear??"
Everyone nodded except for Shilpa......Naina noticed that she hadnt paid attention to a single word.
She mentally shook her head......she knew the reason for Shilpa's distractedness.
I am tired of this cat and mouse game....something needs to be done.
"All right those of you who still need to get their make up and hair done...please go to room B12 and those who need to get changed go to room B13. Hurry up everyone!"

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Riddhima stared at her reflection with satisfaction.
Her eyes ran over her white saree draped elegantly around her.
She had specially picked it out for this occasion.
White was his favorite colour.
Yes....today her luck might change.
And what about Armaan?, an inner voice spoke up.
She frowned as guilt creeped over her.
She had not at all been concentrating on him these days........he had even complained that she always seemed distracted these days.
But it was not like she was doing anything wrong.
She wasnt deceiving Armaan...........she was only trying to see whether Sid still had feelings for her or not.
That's all..........
Having convinced herself, she exited the room and walked downstairs where Armaan was waiting for her.

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He moved slowly through the crowd stopping here and there to talk to a few colleagues.
Quite an impressive amount of people had turned up for the event.
So far he hadnt spotted any of his friends.
Somebody placed a hand on his shoulder and he turned to see Shashank before him.
A genuine smile broke out on his face.
"Sir!......its so good to see you after so long. How are you?".
Shashank smiled and pulled him into a side hug.
"I am fine Siddhant........tell me about yourself."
Sid shrugged casually. " I am good Sir."
They never got to meet each other much since Sid never ventured into the old hospital and Shashank was almost at the point of retirement.
"So tell me son....how is your work going?"
Sid smiled at the 'son' reference.......it never failed to warm his heart.
"Absolutely great Sir."
"Siddhant I have been meaning to talk to you but I wasnt getting time..............you know that conference that is held every two years in London? A few days back I received a call from the organizers and they asked me for your contact number.They want to invite you."
A spark of excitement lit Sid's eyes."Really Sir?.......they want to invite me?"
"Of course! Why wouldnt they?....you are one of the best."
Sid was going to say something but Shashank interrupted him "Oh I see Mr. Nair there...I need to talk to him... we will talk about this later Siddhant...do give me a call."
With that Shashank walked away.
Sid started walking again..............he couldnt believe that he was going to be invited for such a prestigious event .
It had been his earnest dream to attend it and now finally he was going to get his chance.
The thought filled him up with some much needed excitement.
Lost in his musings, he almost banged into a woman making her lose her balance.
He caught her hands before she could fall and was surprised to find Riddhima before him.
He let her go.
She looked lovely as always.......the white saree making her look very graceful.
His mind brought back the memory of their first date after their marriage when she had turned up in a white dress.
She had been the most beautiful woman he had ever seen.
He recalled how close they had come to having their first kiss that day........how happy they had been....or rather he had been.
But today despite her tempting allure, his heart didnt race at her sight as it used to before.
She seemed just like any other good looking girl.
He noticed that she was staring at him with hurt written in her eyes.
Even without her saying anything, he knew why.
She was upset that he hadnt saved her.
But he had nothing to say that.
If he was supposed to feel sorry or guilty for saving Shilpa and not her ..............then it was not possible.
Yes he was extremely astounded by his actions but he wasnt sorry or guilty for them....never.
And so he simply moved out of her way.

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He finally found Naina and Yuvi near the stage.
Naina was rummaging through a cardboard box looking extremely harried while Yuvi ,who was talking over the phone, waved at him distractedly.
"Any thing I can help with?", Sid asked.
Naina looked up at his voice and breathed in relief.
"Sid! Oh thank God you are here!"
She ran her eyes over him, her raised eyebrow clearly approving his perfectly tailoured tuxedo.
"You did wear it.......hmmm not bad Mr Modi.", she said.
He hadnt planned on wearing a tux but Naina had bullied him into wear one...... it had anyway been lying in his closet unused for too long now.
He grinned at her.
"You dont look so bad yourself, Mrs.Oberoi", he commented noticing that she looked absolutely lovely in a emerald green gown.
She smiled widely at him.
"Sid can you please do me a favor?.......I have to go and distribute all these corsages to all the contestants.They are scattered about in various rooms and I also need to help them get ready."
She handed him a small pearl-coloured corsage."Shilpa is the only who is completely ready so could you please give this to her? She is in room B10."
Naina ran upstairs before Sid could say anything. Yuvi rolled his eyes at his wife's not-so-subtle actions.
For a few seconds, Sid looked blankly at the corsage in his hands.
He turned to Yuvi hoping he could give to Shilpa but found that he had suddenly disappeared.
Great.
He was not going to escape this, was he?
He slowly climbed the stairs, hesitance obvious in his every step.
He had not spoken to her since the accident, he had not gone to meet her, he had not even called her.
He just didnt want to face the questions that he knew he would find in her eyes........but he also knew he was wrong.
He should have checked on her to see if she was fine.
He should not have stayed away like this.
He wondered what she must be thinking about his behavior.
That he was such an irresponsible friend? That he didnt care about her?
That thought brought him even more unease.......all that wasnt true.
He did care about her........more than he even knew.
Moving through the corridor, he found the room and had raised his hand to knock when suddenly the door opened and a flurry of girly colors and perfume rushed out making him step back.
The giggling girls vanished into another room and there was silence once again in the corridor.
He turned back to the door in front of him.
With a lot of hesitance he knocked and heard a faint "come in."
Taking a deep breath, he opened the door.

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In his early childhood days, when he had been about six years old, his favorite activity had consisted of locking himself up in his father's library.
His dad had managed to accumulate an extensive library that held more than a thousand books of all genres and priceless paintings from around the world.
It used to be Sid's favorite room.
As a child he had loved going through all those fascinating books and gazing for hours at those mystical paintings.

As soon as he stepped into the room named B10, he felt as if he had been sucked into one such painting.
Seated in a chair by the window, she gazed outside, a dreamy yet distant look in her eyes.
The sunlight streaming though the window seemed to illuminate her giving her an indescribable glow.
After years of beating lifelessly, his heart actually skipped a beat.
He had never laid eyes on such an ethereal vision ever before.
Has she always been so captivating?

Feeling someone's eyes on her, she turned and looked at him.
Not at all expecting to see him here, she stood up immediately.
She noticed that except for the both of them the room was empty.
Where had everyone gone?
What was he doing here?
She tried not to notice how extremely handsome he looked in his traditional black tux.
She tried very hard to curb the emotions that she knew would be visible in her eyes for him.
But Sid didnt see any such thing as he was lost in his own little world.........as much as he tried, he couldnt stop his gaze from sweeping over her in appraisal.
She was adorned in a long, deep violet evening gown that snugly hugged her figure.
Her hair fell in soft waves on her shoulder, covering the halter straps going round her neck, giving her a deep, heart shaped neckline.
His gaze stopped at her neck where a simple silver chain hung with a pearl drop pendant.
That was the gift he had given her on her last birthday.
An inexplicable emotion swept through him.

Her cheeks felt warm and she realized she was blushing at the way he was looking at her.
He had never...never looked at her in such a manner.
They didnt know how many minutes passed as they stood facing each other.
She wanted to ask him where he had been and he wanted to apologize for not calling her.
But words just didnt come to them.
Just then someone knocked on the door and shouted from outside completely breaking their moment.
"Shilpa! Everyone is going to gather outside now! Come out if you are ready!"
He looked at the corsage in his hands and was about to put it on a nearby table when he paused.
He didnt know what came over him as he walked towards her and stopped right in front of her.
Taking her hand in his, he eased the corsage onto her wrist.
Shilpa looked at her hand and then looked back at him.
Before she could react, he turned and walked back to the door.
It was only after he left that she realized that she had been holding her breath the entire time.

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