~Beautiful Sin~SidShi FF: Chapter 30//Pg 108 - Page 36

Posted: 13 years ago
Okay sidra I have no idea why but I feel like crying!
 
Is it because finally.....finally Sid is going to get some happiness!!
 
You must be  tired of  me saying I love your updates! 😳
 
I love Naina! Unsubtle friends are just wonderful when you need them to do the right thing in certain situations!
 
Oh and Im glad your not going to make Ridhimma negative....sorry Shamil!😆 But I agree with you in that she always wanted to be the centre of Sids world so its going to be hard for her to digest that shes not!
 
And the end was just....😍😍
 
Update soon!!😛
 
 
 
 
Posted: 13 years ago
omg! its getting better n better
Can say only one sentence
can u update this one as fast as u can??????
Posted: 13 years ago
👏👏Its brilliant Sidra...But what the F is this Riddhimaiyya's problem?? You know after watching DMG all these months, I think there can be 2 possibilities

1. Either she's suffering from dual personality disorder i.e. when she's with Sid, she thinks 24x7 about Armaan and when she's with Armaan, she wants to impress Sid..😡

2. Or she's a filthy wh**e who can never be pleased by any one man.😡

Anyway Loved it. Please continue..😛
Edited by Darklord_Rehan - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
Sid and Shilpa seems so achingly beautiful - i cant say more then that
 
Sid does need an life in his life and that is Shilpa
 
 
As for Ridz, i am kinda glad that Sid can read her like anything
 
I hate Armaan for everything and anything, i have never seen a man act like how he has done and in the name of love, thats not love thats selfishness and beyond, and as for Ridz - she is a disappointment that i simply have no words for but i respect Sid's love for her,  right now her mind is only concertrated on one thing and thats Sid right now, just cant let go and needs to know if he loves her still, like you said at the start, she knows that she will never have peace the day he walked out from the hospital - leaving her
 
I love Shanks and Sid's convo
Edited by Lennie - 13 years ago
Posted: 13 years ago
Sidraaaaaaaaa 🤗🤗

This is freaking awesome !!

SidShi r soooooooo beautiful 😳😳😳

Ahhhhh finally Sid is going to get some happiness 😃

I loved Naina & Yuvi <3

Also loved Sid & Shanky's convo 😳

SR scene was nice 😊
Without saying anything Sid read her mind dat why she is looking hurt
But I am glad he didn't felt anything 4 her😈

Ridz Maiya
I am happy dat ur not making her negative 😆
& u rightly said , she is an insecure & selfish woman
She can't see Sid or Hormaan loving anyone else other than her

Now she wants to know dat Sid still loves her or not
She can't accept d fact dat some else took her place in Sid's life

The ending was just isshh 😍😍😍

I am craving for more 😛
Phuleezzz continue superrrrrrr soon....
Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by nm21


EEeeek!

Apologies for the late reply!!

I didn't like this part very much....


BECAUSE I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!

honestly, favourite part till date.....woowwwwww! I was actually in awe, absolutely absorbed by your writing...it has this power to entice, the way the story developed from the initial aftermath you gave a little bit more information and a little more....

The fact that Armaan was the one to call out Riddhima's name essentally is the part I'm referring to here...no one knew where that voice had come from, everyone (Shilpa) having their own ideas as to what the sound was! Riddhima realising that Sid had actually pushed her out the way to get to Shilpa (haha, harsh as it seems LOVED tht too!)

The slow build up of Shilpa's consciousness in the beginning, every word is used perfectly, sentence structure is spot on....your so good!!
Loved the vision of Sid and Shilpa rolling down the road "tangled" before Riddhima-honestly nothing spells "Im over you Riddhima" more than that ;)

Vivek third wheeling amused me too-how he can feel something cooking between SidShi (ah i love themm)

Sid in the shower? veryyy nice :P
"It was forcing him to think about the question that had been haunting him all evening..............the one question he had successfully avoided so far.
What exactly was Shilpa's place in his heart? What did she really mean to him?"

Very well written!  A concern for Riddhima but a fear of losing Shilpa! Genius..

Riddhima's reaction was one that I understood the most, the fact that she's still caught up in a little bubble of her own, her disappointment in the resurrection of her relationship with her former lover, she wants out. Deliberately walking infront of the truck to spark those feelings with her and Sid, she wants that excitement and thrill back in her life....
Sid saving Shilpa is the last thing she has ever wanted, she didn't like her with Armaan, she would hateee her with Sid-he's her former husband! It was pretty much a slap in the face for little miss possessive...

I'm secretly hoping that Sid is her escort tonight (as much as I adore Yuvi!)

Ah the last paragraph illustrates the beauty of your writing, the turmoil she faces is so relateable, should she call shouldnt she call? Its a girl in love...
"She couldnt deny it anymore....................that she was hopelessly in love with Siddhant Modi."⭐️❤️
 

WOW.
*round of applause AND standing ovation*

Brilliant!!


Nish you always leave me speechless and extremely humbled with your comments...really I dont know what to say after reading them.......I dont think I deserve such praise but still thank you so so much.🤗
I lobe how you point out all the imp parts and interpret them in the same way that I want to portray them.
Posted: 13 years ago
The last part was just... unbelievably beautiful! 

I soo agree with you that Riddhima is the one who is to blame the most for everything that had happened till the end. She is the kind of person who needs, seeks and begs for attention. Once someone loves her, it is only her from then on. No one can ever take her place because she is that special. Riddhima, for me, has always perceived herself as the most important being in this world. Everyone's world revolves around her pretty little self. I find it all the more disgusting because instead of feeling remorse for the person she stole the world from, she feels anger that he is finally moving on. What kind of person wouldn't feel guilt or at least pity for her oh-so-loving husband? ... She is just pathetic! As for shashank, I have no idea what happened to his character, because I never saw any epi after Sid's departure! It was soo not worth asmaani and 'imtehaan of pyaar winning' 🤢 😆 

Anywhooo.... Sorry, got carried away... 😆 Loved the update!! It's just brilliant. You write like you know these characters in real life. Because everytime they do anything, I feel it is exactly how they must've acted. I just love how Naina is being cupid, even when she promised not to. It's like, she cant quite control herself! 😆 And Yuvi - he's just being Yuvi. I love both of them in your FF... They have such aura it pulls you in. I thought they were good in the show, but in your FF, they are as amazing as SS...

Riddhima thinks she has the right to feel hurt? And she also thinks she has the right to show him she's hurt? That somehow intensifies my hatred for her. As for her not being full-on negative, I believe she already is. To be able to justify her wrong, by believing her own lie, I think that itself is quite -ve. I don't want her to be going on planning to kill someone - that is soo unlike Riddhima, and really - I would hate her less if you did that - coz then I'll just believe she's just psycho! Kinda like how Armaan act at times... 😆

Love the way Sid just stepped back. He has clearly moved on, and he didnt even realize it till the incident. He is done with her, and the pain she inflicted on him. It's his time to see happiness. As for Shilpa? She's a doll. There is no one that could've ever deserved a guy like Siddhant more than her. And Siddhant cannot deserve anyone but a perfect soul - Shilpa. The last part took my breath away. This is the subtleness of these two characters. They never needed words to express themselves in the past - and since they can read each other's heart - what Sid done was proof enough of the love he never knew he could ever have for someone else. Right now, I feel ecstatic for Shilpa! 😆

I am sooo amazed and enthralled with this FF. This is exactly how I envisioned these two, and you write them down more than just perfectly! Thanks for this Sidra, It really and truly is brilliant! =)


Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Sidra,

Fantabulous update once again. I agree with your understanding and with Cess's take on Riddhima. Riddhima was never a person who is truthful to anyone be it either Sid or Armaan. All she did was to put out her puppy eyes and cry buckets and buckets of tears, Pray for what. The logic given was that she was feeling guilty. Oh come on. I felt that more than feeling guilty she just didn't want Armaan to move on in life and now she is doing the same with Sid. She just doesn't want Sid to move on. But Sid is not a person who would fall to her charms now. He is so done with her. I would so love a confrontation between Sid and Riddhima where Sid should blast her for her selfishness. You know sometimes I watch the confrontation between Sid and Riddhima just before the first wedding. I want a similar confrontation where now Sid says "I am so done with you Dr.Gupta and Yes I am now loving Shilpa and I want to marry her. Any problem ? ". 

Update soon and pm me when you update.

Posted: 13 years ago
Wow awesome update Sidra

Love how this is going.. Great

As usual loved SidShi and hate Ridz😡

Awesome update... Cant wait till the next one
Posted: 13 years ago
Sidra 🤗

first of all soooooooooooooo sorry for not commenting on other updates...I've been just caught up on other things anywho read the parts I missed and awwwwwwwwwwwwww I just love SidShi😳😳
And what they're feeling for each other is so beautiful😳

In the last part was tht woman really trying to impress Sid by wearing White saree like she did when she played tent tent with her lusty sitaaraman😡😡
something's really wrong with tht woman she's 🤪

And IDK why but I really feel like crying...I srsly had tears in my eyes reading ur the last update cuz I guess like Zee said I'm just feeling too good to know that finally Sid will get all the happiness and love that he deserves😳

plzz plzzz plzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon....n again sorry for commenting so late...I knw I deserve a FATAK 😆
Edited by indian_beauty - 13 years ago

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