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~Beautiful Sin~SidShi FF: Chapter 30//Pg 108 (Page 23)

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Posted: 11 February 2011 at 12:52am | IP Logged
Awesome update!

I totally get Shilpa's feelings you smile for the world so they don't worry, because if they know you are broken you will break down, bear the pain in silcene because if they are happy you will be happy to right?

I cab't wait to see what happens next!

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Posted: 11 February 2011 at 1:13am | IP Logged
Sidra

Awesome update !!!

how can dat Hormaan do dis wid Shilpa ??
I hate him soooooooo much AngryAngryAngry

Really felt bad 4 Shilpa Ouch
Bcoz of dat Hormaan she lost all her faith in LoveAngryAngry

Loved d way ur showing Sid & Shilpa's relationship..

Plzz continue soon....
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Posted: 11 February 2011 at 1:16am | IP Logged
WOW Sidra,ClapClapClap U r awesome with expressing the feelings of Shilpa & Sid.
 
This update makes me to hate Armaan more and that lusty couple more...................What they have done to Sid & ShilpaCryCryCry...........They can't even move ahead in their lives & believe in life/Love againAngryAngryAngryAngry.
 
Vivek.............Without knowing him, i started to feel for him..........Pls one sid is enough and not one more.Ouch
These lines........................I can feel the feelings............Awesome SidraStar
 
 
, "Happiness scares me Shilpa. I try to stay far away from it as much as I can."
"And that is why I want you to be far away from anything that upsets you. I need you to be smiling always....so that I can live my happiness through you."


Keep goingThumbs Up


Edited by ssdtvgojan - 11 February 2011 at 1:17am
jacobharry10011 Goldie
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Posted: 11 February 2011 at 1:18am | IP Logged
Awesome Update.........I cant u how much i hate ArmaanAngry
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Posted: 11 February 2011 at 3:42am | IP Logged
*Applause*.

You write beautifully....that you knew already, but I want to tell you-your writing actually moves me. Its weird, I completely understand Shilpa...and that's only cause of the way you write.

Her insecurities and hestitation with regards to her relationship with Vivek are relateable...because of what happened to her. When you love someone with your whole heart and they disappoint, rather betray your trust and confidence in them, it has a huge detrimental effect on your personality and maybe even your looks as you feel indifferent to caring for yourself (which is wrong!!) but very human and that came across in your writing...

I feel so bad for her! Bless Shilpa but well done to you, this is an awesome chapter my dear, short but sweet-again, it takes alot to write something which can touch so many hearts so will read it again and again :) as per usual...but definitely eagerly!! awaiting your next piece....

You just keep raising the bar for yourself as well as everyone else! :P lots of love and a big jhappi! You star! Hats off :) xxxx


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Posted: 11 February 2011 at 3:53am | IP Logged
Sidra Hug
awesome update.
i can feel shilpa & sid's pain........Cry

i hate them  a lotAngry....they never deserve my angels sid shi..........Approve
what they have done to my angels.......Sid shi both r scared of happiness to believe some one again.........Cry 

for vivek i hope he will be nice guy ....no more heart breaks for any one....Embarrassed

update soon.
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Posted: 11 February 2011 at 5:04am | IP Logged
Awesome update i loved it Clap i fel pity 4 shilpa she hs so much pain inside her 4 wat armaan hs done to her Angry loved wat sid hd told her abt happiness tat if she is smiling at givers him happiness awww tat ws cute Embarrassed plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 February 2011 at 5:30am | IP Logged
heyyyyyyy
tht was really a short update Angry
nxt tym longer update, ok Approve
i jst hope u dnt end up making Shilpa marry Vivek Evil Smile
hope she finds her soulmate in Siddy Boy Blushing
plss cont soon
Veena

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