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~Beautiful Sin~SidShi FF: Chapter 30//Pg 108 (Page 17)

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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 10:46am | IP Logged
Lennie , Nikki, indian_beauty: Thnx a lot guys!Embarrassed

Jenny : Thnx! Shilpa's pain will coem pout in the later chapters....dont worry...rigth I needed to concentrate on Sid.Smile

harshu, vidyashree : Thnx!!Embarrassed

Originally posted by monty22

Sid shi..... they r always true fighters no matter what life give them........not  like that ppl who always do end of life by doing suiscide or street fight or breaking glass or  self destroying path........LOL.....haha true that Monty. They were never that desperate.they decide to start new chapter of their life.Clap

love u.
PS; i m glad that i meet awesome writers like u , pocco, arpu, DJ in my life............Embarrassed
Awwww that's so sweet of you Hug


Shamil, Mona and DJ : Thank you so much for your feedback!Embarrassed I understand you all want to see a showdown between Shilpa and Riddhima and that will happen. Just not now.......a lot more needs to build up before that happens.Wink
DJ : I am feeling much better now...thnx for asking!

Eternalsiddhima, Sudha, aisha_ranbir, docnuss, Nisha, Manika and Veena: Thank you all so much for commenting!

Poco : Hug I LOVE that Jack Sparrow siggy!



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All you lovely readers....thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment in detail on my FF....your encouragement means a lot.Hug


Chapter 7

Six years later


She stood before the mansion-like house.
The lights were switched off but she knew he was inside.
She walked ahead slowly, her shoes making tiny sounds as they moved over the damp ground.
Taking out a key from her pocket, she opened the door and stepped inside.
She was grateful that he had given her a spare key.........she could always find him whenever he tried to lose himself.
She looked around.
Darkness.
He had become so addicted to it.
She walked further into the house, her fingers moving over the switches, bringing the light back into the house.
Climbing the stairs, she hoped he wasnt where she thought he was.
She passed his bedroom and headed straight towards the room situated at the the far end of the corridor.
It was where he always escaped.
Her hand paused on the doorknob........she knew what she would find inside.
Taking a deep breath, she walked into the room.

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She flinched as the sounds grew sharper and sharper with each passing second.
Her eyes followed him as he smoothly delivered swift blows to a punching bag.
It had been quite some time since she had entered the room but he wasnt aware of her presence yet.
She sighed and shook her head slightly at the man in front of her, as he continued to torture his hands.
So many years had passed and still there was so much anger in him.
His eyes were focused solely on the punching bag but she knew by looking at the intensity in them that his mind had traveled back to the past.
It was difficult for her to watch him like this.............but she knew he needed to do this.
He had too much pain suppressed inside him and this was his only way of letting it all out.
She called out to him softly but he didnt respond.
She felt wetness in her eyes and looked away from him......she hated it when he did this to himself.
He was the only person because of whom she had learned to live again but she couldnt see him like this.......couldnt see him torture himself....not like this.
Opening her eyes, the first thing she spotted was blood on his knuckles.
She knew that he deliberately never wore his boxing gloves.
He had once told her that the physical pain distracted him from the storm of thoughts that raged in his mind.
Enough, she thought.
It was time to intervene.
She strode forward determinedly and in a brisk movement, snatched the bag away from him.
His chest heaved with exertion.
"Move out of my way."
"No. I wont."
His eyes turned darker.
Anyone else would have instantly moved away from him seeing that look in his eyes but not her.
She was used to this.
He stepped closer to her.
"Please.....let it go."
"No....you need to stop doing this to yourself."
Finally losing control over his anger, he grabbed her arms involuntarily bringing her even more closer.
"What's it you anyway? Huh? Why do you care?!"
His tone was harsh and his hands were hurting her.
But she remained silent and stared back at him defiantly.
She always did.....................because she knew he didnt mean to hurt her.
She knew he didnt like behaving this way with her.
But sometimes he couldnt help it.
She was the only one who understood the agony inside him.....she was only one who absorbed his anger without questioning him.
He was an expert in masking his emotions but not with her.
He suddenly seemed to realize what he was doing and let her go.
His eyes lost the wild look that had taken over them as they looked away.
She had always come to him whenever he found himself slipping over the edge.
Walking away from her to the other side of the room, he sat on the floor.
"You........you should go."
She did leave the room only to return with a first aid box and seated herself in front of him.
His fingers were clenched in tight fists......there was still too much restless energy in him.
Without a word, she took his hands in hers and gently started to bandage them.
His hands loosened slowly as her fingers traced the old callouses on his hand that had gathered over the years.
Tears threatened to spill over her eyes but she managed to hold them in.
She hated crying......six years ago she had resolved never to cry again.
Btu sometimes the man in front of her had the ability to shake the walls of that resolve.
He stared at her as she kept her head down intent on her task.
He knew she hated this......and yet she never told him anything.
He moved his hand and slowly raised her chin to make her look at him.
There were unshed tears in her eyes.......and anger.....at him.
He smiled wryly at her and caught the lone teardrop that had managed to escape.
"Promise me.....promise you will never do this to yourself again........please."
He looked into her eyes and saw how deeply pained she was.
Much to her surprise, he nodded his head.
She didnt expect him to.
But how could he refuse?
After all, it was the first time Shilpa had asked for a promise from Siddhant.

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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
StarYAA!! You updated! Woah, that was an amazing update. I could seriously visualize it in front of me. I love how you wrote the entire scene. Sid and his pain. Some wounds are so deep that they never get filled. That was clearly shown there. I love the connection they share, for each other, they are basically willing to forget the pain and I love the end, the promise was adorable. The entire story took me to a new land, it was brillant!

Awesome work SidraClap

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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
God you almost got me all angry ......... and agitated ......it was like actually visualising Sid doing that to himself .........Clap awesome piece of writing
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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 12:18pm | IP Logged

GreatThumbs Up

I could feel Sid's rage and wanting to let it out, and Shilpa watching on and just being there as she knew what he does to himself
 
Six years and still the same wounds that dont heal at all, coz betrayal and lies never fade away and the love and anger for that one person
 
 
It was good to see Shilpa's unshed tears which she has kept to herself and that promise
 
I liked the way Sid grabbed her, it gives intensity to SidShi in a way etc
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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 12:25pm | IP Logged
sidra Hug
amazing update.....
6 years  had been passed.......but that pain. anger is still there......
Cry Cry i can't see him like this...........Ouch 
only shilpu can understand his pain, anger..........Embarrassed i liked last part.......
i m looking forward for next...........Smile
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Posted: 04 February 2011 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
Sidra....wow u updatedEmbarrassed

6 years and Sid's pain n anger still there Cry
I can really picture the entire imagine in front of me....I can feel Sid's anger his rage n shilpa's pain.....amazing work srsly yaar...

do continue soon.....

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