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~Beautiful Sin~SidShi FF: Chapter 30//Pg 108 (Page 111)

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Posted: 20 August 2011 at 1:50am | IP Logged
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Sidraaa!

First and foremost- I know it may not have the same effect in writing, but believe me, I cannot express how bad I feel for the late response. It's been crazy busy and I wanted to read the chapter when everything was peaceful...and trust me I needed it for myself because I always fully enjoy the extracts in those moments and it was the same today. I can't say how sorry I am though! Sorry sorry sorry! *sticks out lower lip* Unhappy

Ok now back to the comment.

Wow. Another deep chapter-the last line stayed with me for a long time, it's an incredibly dark time for Armaan right now. I have to say I'm not surprised he realised his mistake first (i.e. he's not the only "guilty" one! But from the beginning of his relationship when Riddhima would be annoyed with him for very minor misunderstood situations he'd always be the one grovelling to pacify her...it's all very sad.) I again felt my heart go out to him, it's his own self made mistake which I guess he's paying for now, but somewhere down the line maybe he needed his happily ever after...Riddhima managed to actually ruin lives, she moved on from Armaan but he's stuck with her the whole time. Even I think even to some extent Sid and him are in the same boat now.

I lovee how your shaping SidShi's journey! I could visualise the whole plane trip, his distracted mind, how her laughter agitates him simply because another man is the cause for it...and what can I say, the jealousy reallyyy suits him! The confrontation they had seems like a very early one, there's so much more unspoken between them, which they're both kinda struggling to hold in...he tries to accuse Shilpa but she rejects that right he has over her simply because he admitted he'd stay out of her life himself. But...it's just a matter of time before he's unable to hold back any longer. He reminds me of a pressure cooker, he's getting heated up and god forbid what will happenen when he "bursts" ;) Very very well described! I love it!

Oh, also special mention goes out to Sid and Dr. Shashank''s relationship, another one you've managed to do justice to with regards to developing it past the on-screen version we actually witnessed! Lovely jubley! *round of applause*


Great update my darling! Please do update very soon :) I'll be waiting!! xx

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