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~Beautiful Sin~SidShi FF: Chapter 30//Pg 108 (Page 103)

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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 12:30am | IP Logged
spellbounding woman. how do you write it? You inspire me to make ShiRan stuff. You are a bundle of talent Sidra.

This part was amazing, the feelings. I wish Sid did get sick i the show and Shilpa took care of him. It's sad that Cinvestas did not realize that spending money on Armaan-Riddhima, should have paved a beautiful storyline with Sid and Shilpa. The show would have ran for more years with good trps.

This part was magical. So looking forward to London ki trip.

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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 1:23am | IP Logged
nice part...plz continue soon...

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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 1:49am | IP Logged
superb...cant wait for the next updateDay Dreaming

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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 2:26am | IP Logged
nice update lv...
i lv dis shilpa of ur's c is too gud too be true...
d way c took care of sid ws touchy...
dy both deserve each other only no one else ...(espcially dat riddhimaa no + never)...
i lv dr. shasank...kabhi kabhi galti se sahi kaam kar dete hai...
waiting for london trip...
will u update early ... u kept me waitin quite long...
chao...tk
 


Edited by lively-piia - 30 July 2011 at 3:20pm

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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 6:33am | IP Logged

Deliriously reserved!!!! Wink

 
Sidra!!! Hug
 
Awww, this was just so cute... I mean seriously... Sid acting like such a bachcha.. Men can be such bachchas at times, especially when they fall ill.. And to imagine Sid like that is just so adorable!!! I don't blame Shilpa for her maternal instincts taking over in wanting to care for him and not leave him in this state.. I'm not sure anyone would be capable of doing that..
 
At least in his state of delirium, he confesses he needs her by her side.. Ab tho she has promised ki she'll be with him.. Hope Sid holds her to her promise Wink
 
I love how they ended up next to each other in the morning and Sid was wishing he could wake up next to her each morning.. That cough was so irrtatingly timed I tell you..
 
As always, your update is simply beautiful... And I am dying to read what happens in London!! Sid is going to be in for shock when he gets to know that in wanting to keep away from her, he is going to be away from everyone else and be only with her.. Ha! I'm loving this!!!
 
Pls continue super soon!!!
 
Tc
 
Cheers
 
Neet


Edited by neet06 - 23 July 2011 at 7:29am

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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
Res Embarrassed

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Wow just wow Day Dreaming

I loved this part <333 Its one of my fav part of this FF Embarrassed
It was cute , funny & emotional at a same time :)

Shilpuu taking care of Sid & not leaving him in this state .. it was soo touchy Embarrassed Yuvi - Shilpuu convo was great :D
I could imagine Sid/KW doing & saying all those things wid a cute confused expression on his face EmbarrassedLOL so so adorable Embarrassed the way he bagged her not to leave him ahhh I loved it <333

Loved the way he saw Shilpuu lying on his chest & the way he has to try so hard to control his feelings
Also loved how u described the awkwardness after this Embarrassed

This part was beautiful & magical <333

Looking forward to the London trip
Continue soon..

Edited by -Harshu- - 23 July 2011 at 10:42pm

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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
wowww!! i mean WOWW!!! Tell me something... how do you manage to outdo yourself every single time!!?You know your writing is like a magic wand which cast us all into a spell each time we read it!! YOU ARE SOOO FRIGGINN BRILLIANT!!! Pheewww!!!

And what a FAB FAB update!!! I loved the detailing sooo much i dont think i even blinked once while reading it cos frankly i was not just reading but i could see the entire scene right in front of my eyes!! I cant really explain how wonderful it was to actually visualize the entire thing!!
Shilpa's heart vs mind conflict... Sid being an adamant child... Yuvi - Shilps convo... it was all sooo beautifully written!! What i loved the most was how he begged her to stay by his side and the morning scene!!! REALLY BEAUTIFUL!!

I am all set to go to London!! You my dear pilot, get to the cockpit and take us for another beautiful ride!!! THANK YOU SOOO MUCH FOR THIS WONDERFRUL FF!!! and once again i request you to consider writing an SR ff! Embarrassed

adios!

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Awesome Part! :D Looking forward to the conference!! :):)

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