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~Beautiful Sin~SidShi FF: Chapter 30//Pg 108 (Page 103)

-Harshu- IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
Res Embarrassed

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Wow just wow Day Dreaming

I loved this part <333 Its one of my fav part of this FF Embarrassed
It was cute , funny & emotional at a same time :)

Shilpuu taking care of Sid & not leaving him in this state .. it was soo touchy Embarrassed Yuvi - Shilpuu convo was great :D
I could imagine Sid/KW doing & saying all those things wid a cute confused expression on his face EmbarrassedLOL so so adorable Embarrassed the way he bagged her not to leave him ahhh I loved it <333

Loved the way he saw Shilpuu lying on his chest & the way he has to try so hard to control his feelings
Also loved how u described the awkwardness after this Embarrassed

This part was beautiful & magical <333

Looking forward to the London trip
Continue soon..

Edited by -Harshu- - 23 July 2011 at 10:42pm

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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 12:31pm | IP Logged
wowww!! i mean WOWW!!! Tell me something... how do you manage to outdo yourself every single time!!?You know your writing is like a magic wand which cast us all into a spell each time we read it!! YOU ARE SOOO FRIGGINN BRILLIANT!!! Pheewww!!!

And what a FAB FAB update!!! I loved the detailing sooo much i dont think i even blinked once while reading it cos frankly i was not just reading but i could see the entire scene right in front of my eyes!! I cant really explain how wonderful it was to actually visualize the entire thing!!
Shilpa's heart vs mind conflict... Sid being an adamant child... Yuvi - Shilps convo... it was all sooo beautifully written!! What i loved the most was how he begged her to stay by his side and the morning scene!!! REALLY BEAUTIFUL!!

I am all set to go to London!! You my dear pilot, get to the cockpit and take us for another beautiful ride!!! THANK YOU SOOO MUCH FOR THIS WONDERFRUL FF!!! and once again i request you to consider writing an SR ff! Embarrassed

adios!

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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 3:03pm | IP Logged
Awesome Part! :D Looking forward to the conference!! :):)

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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 3:21pm | IP Logged
OMG WOWWW what an awesomeesttt brillant and fabulous update ClapClapClapClapClap 
 
loved it ,
love the way u write it's just soo magical...
 
and  sidshi are made for each other...
too goooddd
 
plzzz continue superr soon plzzz

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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 3:31pm | IP Logged
omg that whas such a beautiful uppdate 
this one is my favorit in this FF
i just simply love it 

cant with to read more plz plz contione super soon 

tanks for the pm 

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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 5:43pm | IP Logged
Eeek
Would like to say-I love your FF for it's originality. This chapter was such a delight to read due to its unpredictability.

I laughed out so loud when I read
"Seriously what the hell"

I could just imagine Sid's weirded out face and kudos to you for doing such a great job in delivering on the spot experiences of what the characters would go through. I'm not kidding...I was chortling to myself for a while and as always I read the chapter a good few times before I responded with a comment.

I loved the manner in which you wrote this chapter-involving the reader by disclosing that Shilpa will be going to that conference (I feel so obliged that Dr. Shanky has me filled in on his little conspiracy, it's an excellent feeling :P) Really looking forward to their little london expedition now too!!

I loveddd the way he saw Shilpa llying on his chest/ rather the way you described the whole situation...its as if things can't get any better and then they do. The way he has to try sooo sooo hard to calm his burning desires when he sees her. The situation is so realistic that I fully relate to the awkwardness the two experience as well...

I know you mentioned you wanted a light hearted chapter to smooth things over a little bit and I think you got exactly what you wanted.
Really fab job Sidra!

Please do continue really soon!

Love and best wishes xx

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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 9:48pm | IP Logged
awesome ff 

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Posted: 23 July 2011 at 10:44pm | IP Logged
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