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...Mitali... IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 8:11am | IP Logged
nice updateEmbarrassed
thanx for the pm Hug
plz update next part soon Big smile

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 9:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...Mitali...

nice updateEmbarrassed
thanx for the pm Hug
plz update next part soon Big smile

thnx dear.......Tongue
valliyah Goldie

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 5:10pm | IP Logged
Fabulous FF..............................please add me to ur pm list..................!!!

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Posted: 21 March 2011 at 11:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by valiyah27

Fabulous FF..............................please add me to ur pm list..................!!!

thnx dear.....nd i'll definitely pm u when i'll update

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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 4:41am | IP Logged
hey frnds.......i'm sorry i can't able to update my ff for a long time.....actually there was some is chapter fourteen.......i hope u'll like it nd plz forgive me for my u allHug

Chapter Fourteen

Mayank: Nupur'.

Nupur: hmm'kuch kehna tha Mayank?

Mayank: ha'.actually Nupur''''..

Nupur: ha bolo Mayank'''.

Mayank: actually Nupur aj jab tum Rahul se baat kar rahi thi'..

Nupur: oh toh tumne sab kuch sun lia''

Mayank: I'm sorry Nupur..main janta hoon aisa kisiki baat sunna bad manners but jab meine tumhe rote huye suna I can't control myself'

Nupur: it's okay Mayank''

Mayank: Nupur agar mein tumhe kuch puchu toh kya tum mujhe jawab doge''..


She knew what he wanted to ask. Nupur looked at Maynak's eye.   There was an urge to know the truth'..his eyes told her that he wanted to know her pain''..


Nupur: ha Mayank''pucho'..I'll definitely give the answer.

Mayank: Nupur tum kuch galtiyo ki baat kar rahe the''kya galti'.aur kisne kiya?

Nupur: meine galti ki Mayank'..

Mayank: tum'..impossible''tum koyi galti kar hi nehi sakti'

Nupur: kyun? Mein insan nehi hoon kya?

Mayank: haa tum insane ho par wo insane jo dusre ki galti shudarte te hey''khud galti nehi karte.

Nupur: nehi mayank ye tumhari galatphemi hey'..mein bhi galti karti hoon aur jab meine galti ki wo itna badha galti thi ki uska maafi mujhe ab tak nehi mil rahe hey''

Mayank: aisa kya kiya tumne ki tumhe ab tak maafi nehi mil rahe hey?

Nupur: meine apna maa papa ka dil tora'..

Mayank: kya?

Nupur: ha Mayank''

Mayank: par kaise?

Nupur: kuch saal pehle meri parents ne meri shadi karwana chahi'par mujhe shadi nehi karni thi''..mujhe zindegi mein kuch banna tha''.isliye meine ghar chor diya tha''aur uske baad maa papa ne mujhse koyi baat nehi ki'..wo log ab mujhe apna aulad manta hi nehi'..


During telling that, Nupur couldn't control her tears. She was crying. Mayank couldn't understand how he consoled her'.but his heart was aching after seeing her in this condition''.


Mayank: Nupur please ro maat sab thik ho jayega''.

Nupur: par kab Mayank? Itne din ho gaye wo log kab mujhe maaf karenge?

Mayank: karenge''koyi bhi maa baap apne bacche se jaida din gussa nehi reh sakte'.sab thik ho jayenge'.

Nupur: sach'..

Mayank: ha baba''sach. Ab ek assi si smile kar do. Tum rote huye aur bhi darwana lagti ho'

Nupur: Mayankkk'..


Meanwhile they reached Nupur's place. Nupur got out from the car''.


Nupur: okay Mayank'Good night.

Mayank: Good night'kal milte hey.



Nupur was walking away towards the entrance. Mayank was waiting unknowingly. Suddenly Nupur turned back and said a final good bye with a beautiful smile.

Mayank felt a sudden completeness. He felt now he could go. He also gave a smile and drove away.


At Oberoi mansion


It was 3.30 a.m. but sleep was far away from Mayank's eyes. He was thinking about Nupur. He was thinking how he could remove Nupur's pain. He didn't know why he thought about this but only one thing he knew and it was Nupur's happiness. He just wanted her be happy. Suddenly an idea clicked in his mind. He thought about the idea frequently. Finally he approved it. Now he was waiting for morning''.


Mayank: Ye subha kab hogi''.



In the morning at Hotel Oberoi


Nupur was working. Only one week was left for the show. She was so busy. Suddenly Mayank came and grabbed her hand'.


Nupur: arre mayank kya kar rahe ho?

Mayank: tum chalo mere sath'

Nupur: kaha?

Mayank: tum chalo toh shahi. Ek bahut important kam karna hey. chalo

Nupur: okay. Par kaha jana hey?

Mayank: Nupur tum sawal bahut karte ho'..ab chup chap chalo.


Nupur and Mayank bot sat in Mayank's car. Mayank was driving. Nupur was trying to ask him that where they went frequently. But he didn't give the answer. After half an hour their car stopped in front of a building and Nupur was shocked to see that building.

It was Nupur's old building where her parents were staying.


Nupur: Mayank ye toh'..

Mayank: tumhara ghar jaha tumhari maa papa rehte hey..

Nupur: par tumhe kaise pata'..

Mayank: Rahul se pucha'..ab ye sab soro aur ye lo'


Mayank was giving her something''..


Nupur: ye toh meri show ka invitation card hey..

Mayank: jao aur jake apni maa papa ko ye de ao'.unhe batao ki tumne kiske liye gahr sora tha'..unhe batao ki tum galat nehi the''

Nupur: wo log nehi manenge'.

Mayank: manenge Nupur''.tum jao.


Suddenly Nupur hugged Mayank. She was so happy. She could see a ray of hope. May be this time her parents would forgive her. On the other hand Mayank was surprised because of Nupur's sudden action. But he could understand her happiness. He just wished that this time her parents would forgive. After sometimes they broke the hug'.


Mayank: ab jaldi jao'.

Nupur: ha'..


Nupur got out from the car and went towards the building entrance. Before entering into the gate she turned back and looked towards Mayank. Mayank gave her a smile to assure her that everything would be fine. This smile gave her strength and she entered into the building. Mayank was praying to God''.



chapter fifteen-page 99


Edited by ridi_onasis - 31 March 2011 at 11:00pm

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-Khushi- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 4:49am | IP Logged

hi ridi,

nice part.....
phir se suspence par aakar story stop kar di...Angry
meri aadat lag gayi he kya tujhe????LOL
waise waiting fr next update....
aur jaldi update karna samjhi...Angry

Edited by khushisati - 28 March 2011 at 8:56am

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crazymayurian IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 4:54am | IP Logged
osom update dear

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priya_27_23 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 28 March 2011 at 5:01am | IP Logged
luvly update ridi darling but u stopped again in suspense. tum fb per aajao tumko dekhthi hoonAngry

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