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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 9:17pm | IP Logged
sorry for late reply .....lovely updt
loved mayank and his mom's conversation
waiting for mayur's dinner  ..cont soon
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Posted: 17 March 2011 at 9:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by gopi06

sorry for late reply .....lovely updt
loved mayank and his mom's conversation
waiting for mayur's dinner  ..cont soon
thanks for the pm


its okay....nd thnx for ur precious commentTongue

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hello frnds....i'm sorry...... i couldn't able to update for a long time.....actually i had my final xam......now xam is over nd i'm here to update my ff. here is chapter thirteen. i hope u'll like it nd plz forgive me for my mistakes......




Chapter Thirteen


Nupur and Mayank both reached Rahul place. Rahul opened the door. Nupur and Rahul hugged each other. Mayank didn't like their hug'.he felt something broke down inside him'but he ignored that feeling'. Meanwhile Nupur called him''

 

Nupur: Mayank'..bahar kyn khari ho'andar ao na.

 

Mayank entered into the house. Nupur introduced him to Rahul.

 

Nupur: Mayank'..this is Rahul'my best friend'..my brother.

 

After hearing 'brother' word from Nupur's mouth Mayanl felt so relief. He stretched his hand for shaking hand. They shook their hand''

 

Rahul: toh tum ho Nup's ki Monkey..

Mayank: Monkey?

Nupur: Rahul'( Nupur passed an angry glare to Rahul that u r gone)'..kuch nehi Mayank wo rahul majak kar rahe the.

Rahul: bilkul nehi'..pata hey Mayank pehle din usne tumhe Monkey kaha.

Nupur: kab?

Rahul: tujhe yaad nehi wo pehle din jab tu Mayank se mili thi'.aur maine tujhe uske nam pucha toh tune kaha ki koyi Monkey hoga'.

Mayank: kya tumne mujhe Monkey kaha?

Nupur: nehi'wo main gusse mein thi isiliye keh diya'.

Mayank: tumhare ye gussa'.

Rahul: ha iske ye gussa''

 

Then Rahul and Mayank burst into laughter and shared a hi five.

 

Nupur: tum log majak kar rahe the'..

Mayank: nehi Nupur'.hum bahut serious hey'.hey na Rahul?

Rahul: ha.aur humari itni himmat ki tujse majak karu''hume apna jaan bahut pyari hey.

Nupur: Rahul k bacche'..mein tujhe chorungi nehi..

 

Then Nupur ran after Rahul and Rahul tried to save himself. Mayank was watching their tom & jerry chasing. He was astonished to see such a great friendship. After 10 minutes they both stopped their chasing and sat on the sofa. Mayank also sat on the sofa.

 

Nupur: mein tujhe baad mein dekh loongi''.assa ab ye bata dinner kaun bana rahe hey'.mein nehi bana sakti'.aur agar tu bana raha toh mein ja rahi hoon'..

Rahul: don't worry'..khana Sneha bana rahi hey'..

Nupur: really that's great'.b/w ye Sneha hey kaha?

 

Meanwhile Sneha came from the kitchen.

 

Sneha: hi Nups'.tumne bulaya aur humchale aye.

Nupur: hi Sneha'..kaisi hey?

Sneha: main thik hoon'tum kaisi ho?

Nupur: ekdam bindas'.oh Sneha  this is Mayank'..and Mayank this is Sneha..Rahul;s girlfriend

Sneha: hi Mayank'..

Mayank: hi Sneha''

Sneha: guys chalo.dinner ready hey.

Nupur: that's great'.mujhe bahut bhook lagi hey.

 

All of them went to dining table and took their dinner with chit chat.

 

Nupur: Rahul tune zindegi mein sirf do asa kam kiya?

Rahul: assa'..aur wo kya hey.

Nupur: pehla mujse dosti aur dusri Sneha se pyar.

Rahul: oye'.tera matlab kya hey.

Nupur: kuch nehi. Tu samjega nehi.kya hey na samaj ne k liye brain lagte hey jo tere pass nehi hey.

Rahul: kya? Iska matlab mein brainless hoon.

Nupur: ha'..assa meri ho gaya mein uth rahi hoon.

Rahul: oye rukh'abhi bhi kuch baki hey.

Nupur: kya?

Rahul: wait main abhi leke ata hoon.

 

Rahul went to the kitchen and brought ice creams for all of them'

 

Nupur: wow ice cream''Rahul ye tera tisra assa kam hey.

Rahul: mera sab kam hi assa hey par kya hey na tu dekh nehi sakti'andhi hey na.

 

Mayank and Sneha were enjoying their nok jhoks''

 

Mayank: assa ab ice cream khao''nehi toh melt ho jayegi. Arre Nupur tumhara ice cream toh already melt ho gaya.

Rahul: actually main jaan buj kar uske liye melt ice cream le ayi. Kya hey na Nups loves to eat melted ice cream.

Nupur: ya Mayank'..I love it.

Rahul: kya hey na Mayank humari Nups ko sab ajib cheese pasand hey.

Nupur: Rahullllllllll''..

Sneha: assa'ab jagra khatam karo aur ice cream khao'

 

Then they all enjoyed their ice cream. After finishing the ice cream Rahul is going to leave the room while Sneha stopped him'..

Sneha: Rahul..tum kaha ja rahe ho.

Rahul: mera ho gaya toh mein uth raha hoon.

Sneha: tum kuch bhool rahi ho Rahul'

Rahul: kya?

Sneha: You promised me that you will wash all the dishes after dinner.

Rahul: oh no.

Sneha: oh yes'

Nupur: all the best Rahul'.

Rahul: oye all the best ki bacchi'..tu bhi a rahi hey mere sath.

Nupur: main'.kyun?

Rahul: ha tu''chalna Nups. Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Nupur: okay chal''.Sneha Mayank tum dono baatein karo hum ate hey'

Mayank: okay Nupur'.tum dono jao. Hum apna kheyal rakh lenge. kyun Sneha?

Sneha: ha'.enjoy both of you.

 

Sneha and Mayank both shared a hi five. Bechara Nupur and Rahul. They both went to complete their task. Sneha and Mayank were talking in the living room. After sometimes Mayank felt thirsty. So he went to kitchen for drinking water.

 

At the kitchen

 

Nupur and Rahul were washing the dishesand talking with each other''..

 

Rahul: Nups'tune uncle aunty se baat ki?

Nupur: hm'har roj phone karti hoon. Par wo log phone kaat dete hey. pisle hafte ghar bhi gaya tha par darwaja se hi lauta diya. Wo log meri sakal bhi dekhna nehi chahte.

Rahul: don't be upset. Ek din sab thik ho jayega.

Nupur: Kab rahul? Kitne din mein lauti hoon par ab bhi wo log mujhe maaf nehi kya. Rahul kya meine itna badha galti ki jo wo log mujhe maaf nehi kar pa rahe hey..

Rahul: nehi Nups tune koyi galti nehi ki''

Nupr: phir wo log mujhe maaf  kyun nehi kar pa rahe hey'..

 

Now Nupur was crying. Rahul hugged her and consoled her. They didn't know that someone was watching them.

 

Mayank was going to enter the kitchen when he heard Nupur and Rahul were talking. It was something serious. So he didn't want to disturb them. He could understand that Rahul was very important in Nupur's life. But while he was leaving the place he heard that Nupur talked something about her fault. According to Mayank Nupur never ever can do something wrong. She was so perfect. After sometimes he heard that Nupur was crying. He couldn't understand why she was crying. But he could understand that something was bothering Nupur. He went back to living room with lots of question in his mind.

 

After sometimes Rahul and Nupur came back to living room. They were normal. Mayank was surprised to see Nupur. How could this girl hide her all pain behind a sweet smile.

Nupur: olay bahut raat ho gayi''.ab hume jana chahiye.

Mayank: ha'.thanks Rahul for dinner. And Sneha it was so tasty.

Sneha: Thanks.

Rahul: okay dude'..toh phir milte hey.

Mayank: sure.

Nupur: assa toh hum chalte hey. Sneha humtumhe drop kar dete hey.

Sneha: okay bye Rahul. Good night

Rahul: Good night sweetheart.

Nupur: haye''..okay Good night Rahul.

Rahul: Good night Nups and Mayank.

 

After wishing each other good night Nupu, Mayank and Sneha left Rahul's place. First Mayank dropped Sneha in her house. Then he was going to drop Nupur. Mayank was thinking all the way. He wanted to ask Nupur that what was bothering her. But he couldn't understand that it would be right or wrong. Finally he decided to ask her'.

 

Mayank: Nupur'.

Nupur: hmm'kuch kehna tha Mayank?

Mayank: ha'.actually Nupur''''..


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chapter fourteen- page 92




Edited by ridi_onasis - 28 March 2011 at 4:44am

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 12:02am | IP Logged

nice update ridi.....

unka talk toh complete kar deti...
ab mayank ko pata chalega ki nupur kaun he.....
 
jaldi update karna......


Edited by khushisati - 18 March 2011 at 12:14am

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 12:18am | IP Logged
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complete karo puri i am getting tensed with ur updated
 
btw lovely update. hayeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee meri nupsDay Dreaming

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 12:42am | IP Logged
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will read and comment after my exam

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 12:57am | IP Logged

superb update dear!

i think now Mayu will solve Nupz problem nd pataofy Nupz parents
waiting for the next update
continue ASAP
nd thnx for the pm Smile

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Posted: 18 March 2011 at 12:58am | IP Logged
Originally posted by khushisati

nice update ridi.....

unka talk toh complete kar deti...
ab mayank ko pata chalega ki nupur kaun he.....
 
jaldi update karna......


ab dekha kaise lagte hey.....Evil Smile..........

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