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Posted: 21 February 2011 at 12:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by cutiepie12

ohhh nupur ran awayBig smile
good for her.......bt still she did very wrong to her parentsConfused
khiar hope for da bestWinkWink


ya......nups ran away.......nd i know it was wrong bt she had no other way........nd u'll get the bestWink

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Posted: 21 February 2011 at 5:43am | IP Logged
Wow

superb update

loved it

cont soon

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superb update
luved nupur n rahul convo....n luved their friendship
mayank n his mom scene was really funny
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Originally posted by sariska_mnarti

Wow

superb update

loved it

cont soon


thnx dear.......Tongue
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Originally posted by love.mayurarti

superb update
luved nupur n rahul convo....n luved their friendship
mayank n his mom scene was really funny
cont soon


thnx dear.........Tongue
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Posted: 21 February 2011 at 10:20am | IP Logged
hey ridi..awesome  yaar...nups run away...LOL
it was totally unexpected..too good
and like mayank's  reaction..lovely
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Posted: 21 February 2011 at 9:42pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ruchi89

hey ridi..awesome  yaar...nups run away...LOL
it was totally unexpected..too good
and like mayank's  reaction..lovely
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thnx dear.........Tongue
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Posted: 21 February 2011 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
hey frnd here is chapter eight.......i hope u'll like it nd plz forgive me for my mistakes.....



                     

Chapter Eight


It had been five years since Nupur left her home. Now she was a famous fashion designer.  She got which she wanted always. But she lost a very precious thing. In these years she tried many times to contact with her parents. But they never talked to her. They didn't forgive her for what she did five years back. But now Nupur decided to get back them in her life. That's why today she was going back to her home. Nupur's flight landed on Mumbai airport. Rahul was waiting for her. Now Rahul was working in a multinational company. In these years Rahul was the only person who supported her in every step of her life'''..

 

Nupur: Rahul''

Rahul: Nupur''

 

They hugged each other.

 

Nupur: kaisa hey''..tu toh bare handsome lag raha hey iss business suit mein.

Rahul: mein ekdam thik hoon'..aur handsome toh mein hamesha hi tha..

Nupur: assa'..ab chal'.

Rahul: assa chal'..

 

They both went Nupur's home. But they didn't know that what was waiting for them.

Nupur rang the door bell. Radhika opened the door. Radhika was happy to see her daughter many years later but suddenly she reminded her husband words and her smile turned into a frown. Nupur was going to hug her but she was going to step back''..

 

Nupur: Maa''

Radhika: kiski maa? Meri koyi beti nehi hey.

 

These words pierced Nupur's heart. But she thought her parents were angry. If she made them understand then they must forgive her. Meanwhile her father came. Nupur was going to hug her too but Pratap was also avoiding her.

 

Pratap: Radhika isse keh do ki hum se iska koyi rishta nehi hey. Ye iha se ja sakti hey'.

Nupur: par papa ap meri baat toh suniye'.

Pratap: mujhe kisi ki koyi baat nehi sunni hey'

 

Rahul was observing that. Now he was trying to make understand Nupur's parents'.

 

Rahul: uncle ap ekbar Nupur ki baat suniye toh''

Pratap: Rahul'..mujhe iske bare mein aur koyi baat nehi karni hey''tum apne dost ko leke iha se ja sakte ho''

 

Telling this Pratap went back to his room. Nupur was crying. She never thought that her father could do this to her. She thought he could understand her. She looked at her mother with lots of hope''

 

Nupur: maa'

Radhika: tum yaha se ja sakte ho''.

 

Nupur lost her all hopes with these words. She couldn't believe her own fate. She became a statue. Rahul took her into his home. In the way Nupur didn't say anything. After reaching Rahul's home Rahul showed her guest room. She silently went the room and closed the door. Next two days she didn't talk to anyone. Rahul tried to cheer her up. But there was no change.

 

It was the third day after that incident. Rahul was in breakfast table. Nupur came but today there was something different. Nupur was smiling. It was that Nupur whom Rahul knew'..

 

Rahul: kya hua?

 

Nupur: meine bahut socha aur sochne k baad mujhe lagta hey ki aise baithe baithe kuch nehi hoga. Mujhe maa papa ko samjani hogi ki mein ne jo kiya woh galat nehi tha chahe meri rasta galat tha. unn logo ko mujhe maaf karna hi padhega.

 

Rahul: that's like my Nupur. Toh ab kya karne ka plan hey.

 

Nupur: pehle mujhe apne liye ek ghar dhoonda padhegi'

 

Rahul: kyun? Tu jitney din chahe yaha reh sakti hey. Mujhe koyi problem nehi hey.

 

Nupur: janta hoon. Par mujhe apne liye ek ghar chahiye. Agar mein yaha rahoongi toh maa papa samjegi k mein teri upar dependent hoon. Aur woh mein nehi chahti'..

 

Rahul: thik hey'.mein tere liye ghar dhoond donga'.uske baad kya plan hey?

 

Nupur: mein India mein apna kam shuru karna chahti hoon'

 

Rahul: okay'.

 

Next two weeks Nuour settled down herself. She shifted in a flat and now she was busy to arrange her first fashion show in India. She selected a venue for her show and it was HOTEL OBEROI'''..

 

 

 

On The Other Side

 

Mayank life was going on in the same way. He didn't change himself. He was the same carefree, mastikhor Mayank Oberoi. Shubankar became fed up with his son's behavior. He thought Mayank would change but he was wrong. So he decided to become strict. He called Mayank in his room''.

 

Mayank: dad apne mujhe bulaya''

Shubankar:ha ''Mayank meine ek faisala kiya hey.

Mayank: kya dad?

Shubankar: tum kal se office ja rahe ho.....

Mayank: par dad'.

Shubankar: mein tumhari koyi baat nehi shunne wala hoon''..ya toh tum office jayoge nehi to hiss ghar sorke jayoge''..

 

Mayank could understand this time his father was serious. He knew that his father really meant whet he said.  So he decide to join the office..

 

Mayank: thik hey dad''mein kal se office jayonga''.

Shubankar: that's good.

 

Next day Mayank went office with his father. His father called all the staff and introduced him in front of them''..

 

Shubankar: Ladies and gentlemen'..this is my son'..Mayank Oberoi'.the new MD of HOTEL OBEROI'''


Precap: Mayur meeting


note: frnds tomorrow my class will start again and my final exam is knocking at the door. so i'll update my ff when i'll get time. i hope u can understand my situation. love u allHug


love

ridi


chapter nine-page 57




Edited by ridi_onasis - 27 February 2011 at 12:37am

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