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MayUr ff To Be Or Not To Be. completed (Page 44)

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 5:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sariska_mnarti

Part 6 was superb

amazing twist

Cont soon


thnx dear..........Tongue

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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 5:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SujaLuvsMayur

nice update.
too gud.
i love nupur's bold decision............m with her.
what she did was wrong...............bt just like u said, her parents didnt leave any other option.........
nice update.
continue soon.
thanks for the pm.


suja i love u dear........everytime u can understand what i want to say...........thnx shonaTongue
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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 5:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kheya-mayur

awsom..................


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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 5:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by nightdreamer_mn

Wonderful uppdate ridhi...omg nupz bhaaggai...Shocked..?hope evrything fine.....4 nup..n wat abt mayu wat he will do next...??


thnx sumi............nd wait honey.....agey agey dekho hota hey kya.......Wink
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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 5:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Favouriteofall

rocking update Ridi!
what a twist..........the story has become more interesting now
waiting for the next update
continue soon
nd thnx for the pm Smile


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Posted: 18 February 2011 at 5:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Faria-

Hey ridi
nups ghar se bhaag gayi
Hai ALLAH ab kya hoga???
hmmmmm its  seems veryyyyyyy interesting
do update soon


don't worry.......ja hobe thik hobe.........nd thnx dear.....Tongue
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thnx to all......Hug..........here is chapter seven. i hope u'll like it nd plz forgive me for my mistakes......
 



                      


Chapter Seven


Dear maa and papa,

Apko jab yeh letter milegi tab mein India se bahut dur hoon. Main janti hoon ki app dono mere bhalai chahte hey lekin mein ab shadi nehi karna chahti. Maine bachpan se ek sapna dekha hey ki mein apni  zindegi mein kuch banungi, apne liye ek jaga banaungi. Aur yeh shadi mere sapno ke beech a rehe the. Main apne sapno se bahut pyar karta hoon sahyed sabse jaida. Main uske bagair nehi reh sakti. Mere sapne meri zindegi hey. Isiliye mein ghar chorke ja rahi hoon. Mujhe UK mein ek scholarship mili hey. Mein ap logo ko batana chahti thi lekin ap log shadi ko leke itne serious the ki mein dar gayi thi. Issiliye nehi bataya. Ap log chinta mat kijiye. Mein thik hi rahungi. Mere sare expense university bear karegi aur mujhe uha campus job bhi milegi. Main janta hoon ap log mujse bahut naraz hey. Mere iss kadam se app logo ko bahut takleef hoga. Par mere pass aur koyi rasta nehi thi. Main apni sapno ko nehi sor sakti chahe uske liye mujhe kuch bhi sorna padhe. Ho sake toh mujhe maaf kar dijiye.

Apki

Nupur

 

Radhika found this letter on Nupur's table.  She brought it to Pratap. Pratap read it silently. After reading this he gave this to Radhika and went to his room silently. He closed the door. Meanwhile she informed Shilpa that they didn't need to come. She explained her everything. After one hour he opened the door and called Radhika. Radhika was upset.

 

Pratap: Radhika'..

Radhika: je'

Pratap: aj ke baad Nupur ki naam iss ghar mein nehi liya jayegi'..

Radhika: par''

Pratap: agar who apne sapno ke liye humhe chor sakti hey toh hum use kyun nehi''.

Radhika: ap gusse mein hey. Hum iske bare mein baad mein baat karte hey. Main Rahul ko phone karti hoon'.use sab pata hoga.

Pratap:nehi''kisiko phone  karne ki jarurat nehi hey''..aur ye mera final decision hey. Iske baad hum iss bare mein baat nehi karenge'..

 

Radhika could understand that Pratap would never change his decision. Nupur's decision made him very angry. So she decided to agree with her husband.

 

 

At the Airport

 

Nupur and Rahul were in the Airport. Nupur was upset. She never wanted to take such a step. She knew that her decision made her parents sad. She loved her parents very much but she loved her dream too. Rahul saw that Nupur was upset.

 

Rahul: tu chinta maat kar'mein uncle aunty se baat karunga.

Nupur: woh log mujhe maaf toh kar denge na Rahul'.

Rahul: ha'..woh log tujhe bahut pyar karte hey' woh log tujhe samjegi aur maaf bhi kardega'.tu dekhna''.

Nupur: I hope tu jo keh raha hey  wohi hoga'

Rahul: wohi hoga''ab tu ja'.nehi toh flight ke liye late ho jayegi.

 

Nupur hugged Rahul. She was crying.

 

Rahul: apna kheyal rakhna'.aur uha pouchke phone kar dena'.aur yaha ka chinta bilkul maat karma'.main hoon na

Nupur: tu nehi hota toh mera kya hota'.

Rahul: toh mera life better hota'.

 

Nupur gave a slap on Rahul's back.

 

Rahul: dekha mujhe ye mar nehi khana padhta''..I miss you Nupur.

Nupur: I miss you too'.

Rahul: ab bahut huya melodrama ab tu ja'.nehi toh flight tujhe sorke hi chala jayega.

Nupur: okay bye'.apna kheyal rakhna..

Rahul: tu bhi''

 

 

After that Nupur went into the airport for departure. Nupur went to UK to fulfill her dream without knowing that she already lost her most precious relation in her life.

 

 

At Oberoi Mansion 

 

Mayank: kya? Ladki bhag gayi! Kiske sathe?

Shilpa: kisike sath nehi. Akela. Actually use shadi nehi karni thi. Use aur padhna thi issiliye woh apne padhai puri karne ke liye UK chali gayi.

Mayank: woh''Thank God. But maa ladki ki himmat ki daat deni padhegi. Jo mein na kar paya woh uss ladki ne kar diya. Very good.

Shilpa: who toh hey''.

Mayank: bhagban uss ladki ki bhala kare'.khud bhi bach gayi mujhe bhi bacha diya.

Assa ab mein chalti hoon'.

Shilpa: kaha ja raha hey?

Mayank: celebrate karne'..

Shilpa: tu bhi na'..kabhi nehi shudrega.

Mayank: woh toh hey''..

 

Mayank went to celebrate his freedom without knowing that this freedom was only for some days. Destiny had another plan for him'''


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