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i am sooooooooooo sorryyyy ..i am tooo late
but it was a nice update
lets c how thy handle ths broken sky
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Posted: 07 February 2011 at 10:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by drfizaahmed

i am sooooooooooo sorryyyy ..i am tooo late
but it was a nice update
lets c how thy handle ths broken sky
thnks for pm


its okay sweetheartTongue..........thnx for ur appreciation.....

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Wow

awesum update

loved it

cont soon

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Wow

awesum update

loved it

cont soon


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loely update..........
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thnx to all.....Hug........here is chapter five. I hope u'll like it too nd forgive me for my mistakes.........


                      

Chapter Five

Nupur: What r u saying papa? You are kidding, right papa?

Pratap: nehi Nupur'.I'm serious.

Nupur: but papa apne toh kaha tha jab tak mein nehi chahungi tab tak ap meri shadi nehi karaenge. Toh ab achanak ap meri shadi kyun karana chahte?

 

Radhika understood that it was the high time to tell Nupur everything.

 

Radhika: dekho beta tumhare papa ki office mein kuch problem hey. Unka naya authority aya hey aur wo log kuch log ko nokri se nikal rahe hey. Tumhare papa ki nokhri kabhi bhi ja sakte hey. Isi liye hum tumhare future secure karana chahte hey.

Nupur: par maa shadi koyi solution nehi hey iss problem ka. Aur ap sure kaise ho sakte hey ki papa ki nokri jayegi. Papa itna efficient hey toh wo log papa ko nokri se kyun nikalenge. Toh ap log yeh shadi ki baat bhool jayi ye.

Pratap: nehi beta hum sach mein tumhare shadi ki bare mein soch rahe hey. Aur tumhare liye ek bahut assa rishta bhi aya hey.

Nupur: Rishta?

Radhika: ha beta. Meri wo dost hey na Shilpa un ho ne apne bete ke liye tumhara haat manga.

Nupur: maa'..Papa'''dekhiye sab kuch thik ho jayega''.papa ki nokhri nehi jayegi'.aur agar chala bhi gaya toh hum kuch aur soch lenge. Par shadi it's not a good solution. Mujhe toh lagta hey ki ye khudh ek problem hey.

Radhika: par beta tumhe ek din na ek din toh shadi karni hi hogi na. aur aisa toh nehi hey ki tumhare shadi ki umar nehi huye.

Nupur: mein ne kab kaha ki mujhe shadi nehi karni'..par se(6) ya sath(7) saal baad. Lekin abhi nehi.

Radhika: abhi kyun nehi?

Nupur: maa tum bahut assi tara se janti ho ki mujhe apni padai puri karni hey uske baad ek successful fashion designer banna hey. Duniya mein apna ek jaga banana hey.

Radhika: tum yeh shadi k bad bhi kar sakte ho. Mein shilpa ko janti hoon . wo log shadi ki bad bhi tumhe padhai karne degi.

Nupur: nehi mujhe pehle padhai puri karke kuch banna hey phir shadi ki bare mein sochenge.

Radhika: lekin beta''..

 

Pratap was hearing this mother daughter argument silently.

 

Pratap: bas bahut huya'''Nupur tumhe ye shadi karni hogi matlab karni hogi''..

 

Nupur never saw her father in such mood. She scared of him. Pratap and Radhika left the dining table. Nupur was fuming in anger. She couldn't understand what she had to do. She went back her room and closed the door.

 

 

 

At Oberoi mansion

 

Mayank: Dad ap ye kya keh rahi hey''shadi aur wo bhi ab!

Shilpa: ha beta''.

Mayank:per kyun maa? Abhi toh meri padai bhi puri nehi huyi!

Shubankar:hum tumhare shadi tumhare final xam k bad hi karaenge. Aur tumhare fina xam khatam hone mein abhi teen mahina baki hein.

Mayank: phir bhi dad itne jaldi'''I'm not ready for marriage.

Shilpa: par beta tumhe ekdin na ekdin toh shadi karni hi hey'toh ab kyun nehi. Aur mein ne tumhare liye ek bahut assi ladki pasand ki he.

Mayank: kya apne ladki bhi dekli!

Shilpa: ha beta''.mere ek dost ki beti hey'.bahut hi assi hey'.

Mayank:par maa''mein abhi shadi nehi karma chahta.

Shubankar: kyun?

Mayank: kyun ki dad mein abhi shadi k liye tayar nehi hoon.

Shilpa: tu ekbar ladki dek toh le''

Mayank:nehi maa mein koyi ladki dekhne nehi jaunga''

Shubankar: tumhe toh ladki dekhni hi padegi''.

 

Shubankar told it in very serious tone and Mayank was very well known to this tone. It meant his father already took a decision and everybody knew that when his father took a decision that would be the final decision. Mayank left the living room. He came outside the house and went towards his car. He knew that he had no other way. He started his car and drove away in very rush speed.

 

Nupur and Mayank both didn't want to get married. But both of their parents wanted to get them married. What will they do? Will they accept their parents' decision and get married. Will this marriage be held? To be or not to be'''''..

love

ridi


chapter six-pg 37




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Posted: 10 February 2011 at 9:27pm | IP Logged
lovely update ridi...bechare mayank aur nupur......
agli baar der mat karna update karna ke liye....
update soon....

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