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MayUr ff To Be Or Not To Be. completed (Page 13)

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Posted: 26 January 2011 at 10:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ruchi89

hey ridi ...loved the concept and update...
i like rahul and nupur talks..their frnship...Thumbs Up
way to go girl...awesome ClapClap


thnx sweetheart.........Hug

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Thnx everyone for ur appreciation Hug. here is the chapter two. I hope u'll like it nd forgive me for my mistakes.


                           

Chapter Two

 

It was a shiny morning in a huge mansion. Everywhere in this house there had luxurious touch''.silk curtains on the windows''.luxurious sofa sets'''.precious paintings on the walls'''marvel floor''

In the house a middle aged man and woman took their breakfast. Meanwhile a young boy came. He was wearing a black jean with black shirt''

 

Boy: Good morning mom'..good morning dad

Man and woman: Good morning Mayank

 

This young boy was none other than Mayank Oberoi' the son of

Shubankar Oberoi and Shilpa Oberoi........Mayank took his seat. Shilpa served him the breakfast. At the time Shubankar started to talk. This was the only time when this family spent some quality time together.

 

Shubankar: How is your study going on Mayank?

Mayank: As usual it's great dad'.I hope I'll get a good marks in the exam this time again.

Shubankar: That's good. As this is your final year, after that you'll join my office.

Mayank: But dad'' don't you think this is so early to join your office?

Shubankar: I don't think so. You are my only child Mayank. After me this will be all yours. So you should take over this business as soon as possible.

Mayank: But dad'.

Shubankar: No excuse Mayank''.It's my last decision

Shilpa saw that this conversation turned into an argument. So she decided to stop this right here.

Shilpa: Both of you please stop it''..mein a kitni bar kaha hey ki khane ke waqt baat na karo'.aur Mayank tumhare dad abhi tumse office jane ko nehi keh rahe reh'..jab tumhari padhai khatam hoga tab dekha jayega''and Shubankar'..Mayank ko khana khane do aur khud bhi khao''

Shubankar and Mayank: Sorry'

 

 

After that they finished their dinner with some normal talks. After the breakfast Shubankar went for his office and Mayank went for his college.

 

At the college

 

Mayank entered into the college by his Ferrari. He parked it in the parking area and walked towards the canteen. When he walked through the corridor every girl just stared at him''and Mayank passed his heart melting smile to every girls. But this was only a smile'.nothing special'..Mayank flirted with every girl'.he gave complement to every girl'.but never made a relationship to anyone''now every girl knew that they never got Mayank as their special one''but they couldn't resist Mayank's charm. This was the reason that they still drooled over him despite knowing everything about Mayank.

 

When Mayank entered into the canteen, a group of boys and girls welcomed him. Mayank took his seat and ordered a coffee for him.

 

Mayank: Hi guyz'''kya chal raha hey?

Ajay(Mayank's Friend): hum soch rahe the ki iss weekend par kahi bahar chale

Mayank: That's great. Toh kaha jane ka plan hey?

Vikram(Mayank's Friend): wohi discuss kar rahe the.

Mayank: Let's go to Goa.

Anita(Mayank's friend): Wow Mayank' mein bhi yehi keh rahi thi. Toh yeh final ki hum iss weekend par Goa ja rahe hey.

 

Meanwhile the bell rang. Everybody was ready to go to class. This gang always enjoyed their life along with their study. After the college at the evening all of the gang members went a club.  They enjoyed their evening in the club.

 

 

This was the life of Mayank Oberoi ''..with full of masti but don't have any tension'.for whom life meant full of joy'''.who was never serious about his life'..will something really happen that will change his life'''or life will go on in same way''.


Love

Ridi


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Edited by ridi_onasis - 27 February 2011 at 12:27am

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VERY NICE UPDATE.............

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nice update
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thnx dear.........u r again the first one who comment on my update
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Originally posted by roshneerakhali

nice.


bas eto tuko.....tumi jano tomar comment amar kase ki tarpor o eituku matroAngryAngry.....amar o shomoy ashbe.

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