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Posted: 15 April 2011 at 10:33am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ruchi89

uffffff ye mayank bhi na..abhi bhi bas dost
hai ...i am waiting when they both start feeling for eachother...Embarrassed
lovely update ridi..cont soonBig smile



tujhe kya lagta hey ye log sirf dost hey..................Wink

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Posted: 19 April 2011 at 12:21am | IP Logged
hey frnds.........here is chapter nineteen.........i hope u'll like it and plz forgive me for my mistakes.......love u all...........Hug

@khushi (khushisati) thnx khushi  for helping me to select the song





Chapter Nineteen



It was Rahul's engagement day. Every one was so busy especially Nupur. She was running here and there''.

 

Nupur: ye Mayank kaha reh gaya'kaha tha ki jaldi a jaye'''sagai ki ring bhi wo lene wala hey'''

 

While Nupur was blabbering Rahul called her. Nupur went him''..

 

Nupur: kya huya?

Rahul: ye sherwani padhna jaruri hey?

Nupur: ha''kyun?

Rahul: yaar kitna garmi lag raha hey''..main isme boil ho jayunga'.

Nupur: dekh Rahul jaida baho maat kha'waise hi mere pass tension kam nehi hey'..

Rahul: kyun kya huya?

Nupur: ye Mayank abhi tak nehi aya''.

Rahul: ohh'''toh tu Mayank ko miss kar rahi hey.

 

Nupur noticed the teasing tone in Rahul's voice''.not again''..

 

Nupur: aisa kuch nehi hey''.wo tera ring le ke a raha hey'''toh Dumbo agar Mayank waqt par nehi aya toh tera engagement cancel''..

Rahul: toh pehle kehna chahiye tha na''..kaha hey tera wo dost?

Nupur: pata nehi'.rukh main phone karti hoon''.

 

Nupur was trying Mayank's phone. But it was switched off'..She was trying frequently'.gradually she became tensed''..where is Mayank? Why did his phone switch off? Anything wrong?

 

Rahul noticed tension on Nupur face.

 

Rahul: kya huya Nups?

Nupur: Mayank ka phone switched off a raha hey''.

Rahul: shayed koyi kam hoga isiliye switch off rakha''itna tension maat le'.

Nupur: nehi Rahul''Mayank kabhi apna phone switch off nehi rakhta''aur ab tak toh usse a jana chahiye'..maine kaha tha usse jaldi ane ko''.

Rahul: a jayenge'''tu tension maat le'''..

Nupur: wo kabhi mera baat nehi talta''.jab maine usse kaha tha jaldi ane ko toh wo kabhi bhi itna late nehi karta''.

 

Nupur was really tensed. Rahul noticed the concern''..Rahul never saw Nupur in this condition'''there was something different''..he decided to talk about it with Nupur'''

Rahul: tu usse bahut pasand karta hey na''

Nupur: kis se?

Rahul: Mayank se''.maine kabhi kisi k liye tujhe itna concern nehi dekha'..

Nupur: wo mera bahut assa dost hey''.he is very important''..

Rahul: hm'''.Nupur are you sure ki  tum dono sirf dost ho?

Nupur: tu aisa kyun keh raha hey rahul?

Rahul: main tujhe bahut assi tara se janta hoon''..isiliye keh rahi hoon ek bar sochle na ki wo sirf tera dost hey ya kuch aur'''.

 

After telling this Rahul left the place. Rahul's words were echoing in Nupur's mind''

 

On the other side

 

Mayank entered Rahul's place. He was very scared''..he was late'..nd he knew that very well that how Nupur hated late comer''..he was in hurry'.suddenly he bumped into someone'''

 

Rahul: arre sambal k''

Mayank: sorry yaar'dekha nehi'.

Rahul: tu itne der kaha tha''..Nupur gusse se lal ho rahi hey''.

Mayank: bahut jaida gussa hey kya?

Rahul: ha bahut''.

Mayank: aj toh main gaya''.

 

Rahul was noticing Mayank expression. Actually he was making him fool''suddenly Rahul burst into laughter''Mayank was surprised to see him like that''.

 

Mayank: oye tu hass kyun raha hey'.yaha meri jaan ja rahe hey''.main ye soch k mari ja raha hoon ki Nupur mera kya haal karega aur tu hasi ja raha hey''..

Rahul: tujhe dekke yehi lag raha hey ki koyi dara huya pati office se late aya hey''.aur apni patni k samne kaise jayenge ye soch rahe hey''.

Mayank: kya?!

Rahul: tu tension maat kar''.Nupur gussa nehi hey''.bas thora pereshan hey''

Mayank: tu sach kar reh na''wo gussa nehi hey?

Rahul: ha baba''

Mayank: thank God'.b/w wo pereshan kyun hey?

Rahul: tujhe le kar''.tera phone switch off kyun tha?

Mayank: wo battery dead ho gaya tha'..

Rahul: ohh assa'..par dude ek baat kahe main Nups ko kabhi kisi k liye itna concern nehi dekha'''you are so special to her dude'''

 

After hearing that Mayank felt happy'''.a sweet smile came on his face''he didn't know why he was smiling''but he was so happy that Nupur thought that he was special'..

 

Meanwhile Nupur came downstairs. She was wearing a pink saree. She looked stunning'.Mayank couldn't able to take off his eyes from Nupur''Nupur felt an intense gaze on her''.she knew it was Mayank'..for the first time in her life Nupur felt blushing'..red color crept on her cheek''.She came to Mayank''Mayank was wearing a pink shirt with white jacket''he looked so dashing''.

 

Nupur: Mayank'..

Mayank: ha'.

Nupur: itne der kyun laga di? Aur tumhara phone kyun switched off hey? tumhe pata hey main kitna pereshan ho rahi thi?

 

Nupur told these in one breathe. Actually she was so tensed and on the other hand Rahul's word made her more confused''

 

Mayank: Nupur thora sass lo''..main thik hoon..aur mera phone ka battery dead ho gaya tha isiliye phone switched off tha'..b/w tum itna pereshan kyun ho rahi thi?

Nupur: aise hi''ab chale sagai ka muhurat nikal jayega''..

 

They both went to the stage where Nupur declared Rahul and Sneha's engagement. Rahul and Sneha exchanged their ring. After the ring exchange ceremony all went to dance floor. Nupur was standing on a corner. Mayank came to her''..

 

Mayank: dance''

Nupur: me?

Mayank: ha'tum nehi toh aur kaun?

Nupur: par mujhe dance nehi ata''

Mayank: koyi baat nehi''main hoon na'..

 

After hearing that, there was no denying. Nupur placed her hand on Mayank hand. They both went to the dance floor. Myank placed his one hand on Nupur's waist and his other hand on Nupur's hand. On the other hand Nupur's other hand on Mayank's shoulder. They both looked into each other eyes. A tingle sensation was passing through their spine'..suddenly the song started'..

 

Tinka tinka zara zara

Hey roshnee se jaise bhara

Tinka tinka zara zara

Hey roshnee se jaise bhara

Har dil main arman hote toh hey

Har dil main arman hote toh hey

Bas koyi samje zara.

 

 

Tinka tinka zara zara

Hey roshnee se jaise bhara

Tinka tinka zara zara

Hey roshnee se jaise bhara

Har dil main arman hote toh hey

Har dil main arman hote toh hey

Bas koyi samje zara.

 

Mayank was continuously looking at Nupur. Nupur felt so shy. She was blushing. She lowered her eyes. Mayank was mesmerized to see her blushing. She looked more beautiful when she blushed.

 

Dil pe ek naya sa nesha sa gaya

Kho raha tha jo khawab lauta gaya

Dil pe ek naya sa nesha sa gaya

Kho raha tha jo khawab lauta gaya

Ye jo ehsas hey jo karar hey

Kya isika hi nam pyar hey

Ye jo ehsas hey jo karar hey

Kya isika hi nam pyar hey

Puche dil thamke zara'.

 

Mayank twirled Nupur. Now her back was touching his chest. They both closed their eyes. They were completely lost into each other. They just wished that this time would never end''

 

Tinka tinka zara zara

Hey roshnee se jaise bhara

Har dil main arman hote toh hey

Har dil main arman hote toh hey

Bas koyi samje zara.

 

Tinka tinka''..tinka tinka'''

 

Mayank and Nupur totally forgot other's presence. After finishing the song they were still lost into each other. Suddenly applauses reminded them that where they were'.they got back their sense''they sensed their position''. they were so close''''suddenly they left each other hand in a jerk and stepped back''.


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Edited by ridi_onasis - 19 April 2011 at 12:42am

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nice chapter ridi... loved the song... chalo.. atlast kuch toh baat aage barhi

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Posted: 19 April 2011 at 12:35am | IP Logged
Amazing update ridhi....so finally agge bar rahe hai..dat's gud....wait 4 next update....

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Posted: 19 April 2011 at 12:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jiya_angel

nice chapter ridi... loved the song... chalo.. atlast kuch toh baat aage barhi

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thnx dear.........Tongue.........aur ab toh aage barna hi hey...........kab tak bhagegi..........Wink

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Originally posted by nightdreamer_mn

Amazing update ridhi....so finally agge bar rahe hai..dat's gud....wait 4 next update....


thnx dear.........Tongue...........
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Posted: 19 April 2011 at 12:38am | IP Logged
Now Some Progress in Their Relation...Embarrassed
and According to Rahul Nupur Was lal Due to Ghussa...Embarrassed
and Loved Their Dance and Song..They were lost in each other i was lost in them..Day Dreaming
BeautIFul chapter Ridi...Hug

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Posted: 19 April 2011 at 12:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -moona-

Now Some Progress in Their Relation...Embarrassed
and According to Rahul Nupur Was lal Due to Ghussa...Embarrassed
and Loved Their Dance and Song..They were lost in each other i was lost in them..Day Dreaming
BeautIFul chapter Ridi...Hug


wow...kitne din baad main tujhe lal hote huye dekh rahi hoon.........EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
b/w tujhe assa laga kya? tu janta hey na mujse ye romantic scene likhi nehi jati.......so i was tensed ki tum sab ko assa lagega ya nehi..............Confused

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