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MayUr ff To Be Or Not To Be. completed (Page 122)

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Posted: 11 April 2011 at 7:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sreelu.januable

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Originally posted by sreelu.januable

hi ridi di.................Smile
it was an awesome update...............Clap
luved the way how mayur r reading their eyes................Wink
mayu again gave a surprise to nupur...............Big smile
lovely.........khaash mujhe bhi koi aisa surprise deta..........Day Dreaming
nd m eagerly w8ing to know wats gonna happen.............Shocked
wen they get to kow that these wer d 1s to get married...............Ouch
plz do cont soon di.........Tongue
luv uHeart................Hug


thnx princess...........nd i wish ki ek din tere liye bhi koui aisa surprise dega............luv u..........
thanq diSmile.....................tum kitni achi haiLOL.........luv uHeart..........hugggggggggggggggggggggHug


sreeeeeee tu hey kaha....jaha bhi hey jaldi a ja...........missing u...............

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Posted: 12 April 2011 at 3:27am | IP Logged
part 9-
 
interesting yaar
 
mayank playing video games in office
 
wow
 
awesome
 

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hey frnds here is chapter eighteen.........i hope u'll enjoy it nd plz forgive me for my mistakes.......love u all Hug








Chapter Eighteen


Mayank reached home after dropping Nupur at her home. Shilpa was sitting in the living room when Mayank came………..Mayank threw himself on the sofa………

 

Shilpa: kaha se a rahe hey humari prince ki sawari……..

Mayank: Rahul ne bulaya tha apni shadi ki khabar sunane k liye……

Shilpa: Rahul? Main toh kisi Rahul ko nehi janti jo tera dost hey…..

Mayank: actually mom wo Nupur ki dost hey…….toh meri bhi ban gaye…….

Shilpa: assi baat hey……..ab ye bol tu shadi kab kar raha hey…..

Mayank: mom….tumhe meri shadi k siwa aur kuch nehi sujte kya……

Shilpa: nehi……..ab bol tu shadi kab karega…..

Mayank: mom shadi k liye jarurat parti hey ladhki ki……pehle tum ek asse ladhki toh dundho…..

Shilpa: kitne dhundke laye the par tujhe ek bhi pasand nehi ate……

Mayank: wo sab………unse shadi karne se better hey ki main kunwara mar jayu…….

Shilpa: assa ye bata tujhe kaise ladhki chahiye…….main waise hi dhundke le ayungi…….phir toh tu shadi karega na……

Mayank: okay…….pehle tum dhundke toh lao…….

Shilpa: pehle tu ye toh bata tujhe kaise ladhki chahiye……..

Mayank: assa batati hoon……ladhki assi ho…….family values jante hey……badho ki respect karte hey……..responsible hey……understanding hey…..jiski khud ki ek identity ho…..jisse meri paiso se koyi padhak nehi padhte…….jisse businees tycoon Mayank Oberoi nehi sirf Mayank pasand hoga…..aur ha thori bahut khubsurat bhi hoga……

 

Mayank intentionally added those qualities. Because he knew that now a day nobody could find a girl who had brain with beauty……especially after seeing his mom past choice……..but he didn't know that she was his mother…………she had something in her mind……

 

Shilpa: Mayank tu itna guma phireke kyun keh rahe hey….

Mayank: matlab?

Shilpa: matlab sidha sidha bol na ki tujhe Nupur se shadi karni hey……..

Mayank: Kya?! Maa aisa kuch bhi nehi hey………

Shilpa: beta aisa hi hey…….tu jitney qualities bataya wo sirf Nupur main hey………aura j kal main dekh rahi hoon kit u jaida waqt Nupur k sath hi rehte hey……

Mayank: mom……tum pagal ho chuke ho…hum sirf dost hey…..

Shilpa: toh maine kab kaha ki tum dono dost nehi ho……..par beta……..

Mayank: par bar kuch nehi……….tum aise ulte sidhe soch apne dimag se hata do…..

Shilpa:  main ulta sidha soch rahi hoon…..assa tu hi baata aj kal tere life main Nupur k siwa kuch hey……….

Mayank: mom tum jaida soch rahe ho………

Shilpa: nehi beta tu kam soch raha hey……..

Mayank: whatever……..main jaa raha hoon….mujhe neend a rahi hey….good night……

Shilpa: tu aise bhag nehi sakta…..b/w I hope kit u bhi jaldi samaj jaye….good night…..

 

Mayank was going to his room but there was lots of thought in his mind………

 

Mayank POV

 

Mom jo keh rahi hey kya wo sach hey………nehi wo sach kaise ho sakte hey……main aur Nupur bas dost hey………par ye baat bhi toh sach hey ki aj kal meri life Nupur se shuru ho kar Nupur pe khatam hote hey……..kyunki aj kal sirf wo hi mera dost hey shayed isiliye………par Nupur main kuch toh baat hey……..wo bilkul unn ladhki jaise nehi hey jo mujh par lattu hey……..par main aur Nupur……shadi………kaise ho sakte hey…….par ye bhi toh baat hey ki 5 saal pehle humari shadi hone wali thi……..par Nupur ya main koyi bhi uss shadi k liye raji nehi the…..kyunki uss waqt hum shadi k liye tayar nehi the……..par ab……..Mayank tu ye kya soch rahe hey……..wo jhansi ki rani tujhe mar dalegi……….aisa sochna band kar aur so ja………

 

On the other side at Nupur place

 

Nupur reached her home. Her parents were watching tv………

 

Nupur: maa….papa..ek bahut asse news hey…….Rahul shadi kar raha hey…….

Radhika: assa..

Pratap: ye toh bahut asse baat hey……..kisse kar rahe hey shadi…..

Nupur: Sneha se……bahut assi ladhki hey……. I'm so haapy for rahul.

Radhika: wo toh hey..par beta tu shadi kab kar rahe hey……

Nupur: maa phirse nehi……..

Radhika: ab kya problem hey………ab toh tera sapna bhi pura ho gaya…….ab toh shadi kar le…….

Nupur: thik hey main iske bare main sochungi…….

Radhika: isme sochne wali kya baat hey……main Shilpa se baat karu kya…..

Nupur: kya?! Maa main aur Mayank sirf dost hey…….

Radhika: janti hoon…….par mayank bahut assa ladhka hey.aur ab toh tu usse janta bhi hey……ab kya problem hey…….

Nupur: maa chodo na……..main sone ja rahi hoon…..kal jaldi boutique jana hey……wo rahul ki shadi ki tayari bhi karni hey….humare siwa uska hey kaun……good night……..

 

Nupur left the place………

 

Pratap: rehne do na……jab usse lagega ki wo shadi k liye tayar hey tab baat karenge…..

Radhika: par……..

Pratap: Radhika main dubara wo galti nehi karna chahta jo maine 5 saal pehle kiyatha…..

 

At Nupur's Room

 

After reaching her room Nupur threw herself on the bed but there was lots of thought in her mind. She was thinking about Mayank…


Nupur POV

 

Mayank aur main……..aise kaise……par aj Rahul bhi keh raha tha ki Mayank aur main…..aur ab Maa……par we are just friend…….mayank assa ladhka hey…..mera bahut kheyal rakhta hey…..uske bajwa se hi aj maa papa meri sath hey………par phir bhi wo wohi ladhka hey jis ke sath maa papa ne 5 saal pehle meri shadi karwana chaha tha……aur ajib baat ye hey ki 5 saal baad hun phirse mile…….kya ye kismet ka koyi ishara hey…….kya hum……..Nupur kya filmy soch rahi hey tu……aisa sirf film main hota hey……ab so ja……kal bahut kam hey………

 

Mayank and Nupur both went into deep slumber. They were again trying to escape……but this time destiny had other plan……….


love

ridi

 



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lovely update ridi......
hmmm toh ab dhire dhire mayank nupur ko pyaar ka ehsaas hoga...
hai na???

next update jaldi,....


khushi........

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great update dear...hmmm...so both r thinking abt each other.......awesome..pls continue soon.............

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lovely update ridi......
hmmm toh ab dhire dhire mayank nupur ko pyaar ka ehsaas hoga...
hai na???

next update jaldi,....


khushi........


aur kitna jaldi karu........har din ek update deti toh hoon..........

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great update dear...hmmm...so both r thinking abt each other.......awesome..pls continue soon.............


thnx dear.............Tongue
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yuppppp destiny has oder plans Wink
mayur ko toh saath hona hi hai ,
destiny nahi toh ridi mil 
wayegi LOL

HAI NA RIDI ! Big smile

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