Kis Desh Mein Hai Meraa Dil


Kis Desh Mein Hai Meraa Dil
Kis Desh Mein Hai Meraa Dil

SS:Love or Lust note pg-52 15 april 2012 (Page 39)

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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 11:47am | IP Logged

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shivangi2092 Goldie

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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 11:58am | IP Logged

I know it's been a time since my last update...But I was having some personal problems...So I can't update...Here's another update...plzzz give ur views...coz actually I don't know what I have written...It's been a long time since I have last written so the flow is gone...I'll try to update my ff's too...Can't promise but I'll's the update...


Slowly the door opened and she walked outside. Afraid by the thought that what will happen next. She is standing in front of him just wrapped in a towel. The very thought of that made her blush to a shade of red. The thought made her whole body burn. She is not looking at him but she knew that he is watching her. She can feel his gaze on herself.



She closed her arms around her trying to protect her body from his gaze. He started moving towards her and she felt nervous. She doesn't know if he will touch her then what will she do. Only a single attempt from him and the towel may fall from her body.



He is still getting closer to her and she was stopped dead on her place. She was so frightened that she didn't dare to look at him. She can feel that he is still looking at her. His gaze was fixed on her face.



Then he stopped. Maintaining a respectable distance from her.



"What were you doing inside from last 1 hour?????" His tone had a hint of concern which made heer look at his face suddenly.



She saw something in his eyes. A flash of that concern which she heard in his eyes but the next moment it was gone. His eyes showed an unpleasant coolness after that flash for a second.



"It was not an hour. It's just around 20 minutes." She replied not leaving his gaze, trying to find that emotion again.


"ahan…..I m waiting for you from past 1 hour… don't lie" He said in a frustrated tone mixed with anger.



"M not lying….. You are lying!!!!!...m not a liar!!!!"



The temper was rising in her and he can see that. He felt a strange urge to hold her in his arms and kiss her until she was out of her breath.



Heer saw an unknown spark in his eyes and felt the color rushing to her cheeks. She sensed that it was not usual. It was dark. He moved more closer to her and suddenly she became well aware of his physical presence and the distance between their bodies.



His gaze fell on her lips and she shivered. His eyes were looking dangerous. Some part of her liked that. It was risky but very much attractive. He was inching closer to her.



Her mind became numb again. She was ready to take the risk. His body pressed hers. His gaze was sharp on her. His eyes dark with the desire. She knew what was going to happen next and she doesn't feel like protesting.


For a moment she thought what would it feel like and the thought was tempting. His face was coming closer to hers but suddenly he looked in his eyes and stopped.



He looked at her with amusement. He saw a copy of his own emotion in her eyes. He saw the desire. He can't believe what he saw.



He moved back and smirked looking at her. Finally he was succeeding in what he wanted. He backed up to tease her. To see what is his effect of seduction on her right now. He hoped that she will kiss him. BUT she didn't.



The trance broke when he backed up. Heer felt his senses coming back to her. She pushed him back.


"What are you trying to do?" She asked horrified that what may have happened.



"I haven't done anything…..and moreover I don't feel like u were not interested in what I was doing….actually u were also quite tempted by the thought." He replied with the same smirk and  took her hand in his and slowly rubbed the back of her palm.



His actions made her feel week in her knees. The sensation was strange but she liked it.



" I was not anticipating in the kiss" She replied in a husky voice due to the havoc his slow caress was causing inside her.



His grin widened. "Did I mention about any kiss….I don't think I was trying to kiss you…..or….U wanted that to happen" He was teasing her.


 "No!!!...I was not thinking that….& I don't want to happen that." She replied in a shaky voice trying to mask her feelings.



"Ok! So good night….it's already very late…..I need some rest. Good night Heer…" and he kissed on her hand. He left her and quickly got into in his bed.



She curled her fingers on the very spot where his lips touched her. She felt warm. She saw him getting under the covers and thought she should also get into the bed.



But she didn't even wink. The sleep was miles away from her. She can sense his proximity to her very much clearly. The night was full with her thoughts in which he kissed her many times. Leaving her confused and frightened of her emotions.

plzzz ... leave ur comments and press the like button if u like it...I know it's short But I need some time to get back into the plzzz bear with me for some time...

with loads of luv...<3<3


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Hcsee17 Senior Member

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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
pls shivani update ur another ff

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iheartChai IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
A short update but one worth the wait.

Prem being so bad and Heer can't help herself from feeling something about him.  But what to do?  He is attractive.

Can't wait to see how things play out between the two.

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repunzell Goldie

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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
that was nyceee...superrbbbClap!!!

it doesn't seems that u were writing after so many was prefectSmile!!!

so heer started developing sume feeling of prem...goood goingggWink!!!!

continue soonnn plzzz...loved ittt

thanks for the PM

update sooonnn!!!!

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-Xpress- IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 9:49pm | IP Logged
   part.. loved it

Finally there is some building of new emotions in both of them... really glad to see that..

Now can't wait for the next chapter...

Thanks for the pm!!!!

Eagerly waiting for the next part

Continue super duper soon!!!

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sowmya18 Goldie

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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 10:56pm | IP Logged
loved the update...
thanks for the pm..
do update soon...

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luvharshiti IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 22 October 2011 at 11:55pm | IP Logged
cute one..dear...really loved it...
premeer sceens r amazing...
waiting 4 the next part...
please update soon ...
and thanks for the pm ...

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