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OS: Pyaare Se Pyaare Prt2 pg6 Jan18 (Page 8)

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 12:06am | IP Logged
that was really awesome ClapClapClapClap
i dont know the pain of 1st love bcoz i believe in love after marriage but ur write up gave me clear hint. of the 1st love.  
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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 12:45am | IP Logged
nice........

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 1:32am | IP Logged
That was too practical jazz..... Its very well written..... I m agree wid all ur logics but still i can't bear it...... I can't lie.

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 1:57am | IP Logged
awsome work.....really enjoyed reading

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 2:56am | IP Logged
amazing and despite geet and maan not ending up together it was good....... love the story portrayed.....
 
*Alisha*

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 3:15am | IP Logged
Hi Jaz, Came upon this story solely since you sent the update in the pm and I couldn't miss out the story knowing that you have written it now can I Wink. About the story absolute perfect and flawless but like pixie mentioned it would have been better if you showed that both Geet and Maan have disclosed their past love to their respective partners and Armaan and Meera have accepted Geet and Maan inspite of the past. Because I do believe in Life going on and especially second chances but I am absolute against lying. Some say it is not infidelity if you think of your ex as it is in brain but I disagree. You are not being truthful the moment you think of another person so emotional infidelity is certainly an issue here. But however had you shown that both Maan and Geet have disclosed their past to their spouses and both of the spouses Armaan and Meera being the people they are helped them forge a new life with them it would have been awesome and brilliant.

Had you shown that Geet and Maan store their memories safely away in their heart and wait for the new spring in life with their life partners  and just like not all ugly ducklings stay ugly forever and some turn into swans, not all failed first loves have to be bitter. Overall a nice view and I am really happy after reading this OS. Take my views as constructive criticism and needless to say  you indeed are a terrific writer.
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Edited by psarada - 18 January 2011 at 3:16am

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 4:44am | IP Logged
wowwwww this is called true luv
able 2 do anything for ur soulmate or luved one

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Posted: 18 January 2011 at 6:12am | IP Logged
Tht was Actually Awesome...and the note u left is so damn like true!!

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